高中英语基础写作课件.ppt

BasicWriting 时间分配 基础写作的命题特点 考生按所给的内容及要求 用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容 并组成连贯的短文 简而言之 考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力 对于书面表达的要求 1 Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation 覆盖所有的语言要点 Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 3 coherent tight上下文的连贯性即有效地使用语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 4 usethewordsproperly语言的得体性 5 Writeyourarticleclearly 6 Mindthenumberofyoursentences Tomakethearticletight gracefulandclear Toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions 表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇 避免使用重复的词语 使语言不至于单纯和幼稚 也可以给文章增添亮点 2 Tousesometransitionalwords恰当选用过渡词 使文章紧凑 流畅 3 Tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder emphasis acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial适当使用多种句型 注意语言的丰富性 多样化 以变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容 Basicwritingskills Waysofwritinggoodsentences 方法一 一句多译 Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers Onarrivingatthevillage wewerewarmly Themomentwearrivedatthevillage wewere Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe Hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagewhenwe Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture 方法一 一句多译 一 就受到欢迎 AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport theywerewarmlywelcomed Onarrivingattheairport LienChanandhiswife LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere 方法一 一句多译 Practice一句多译这本书花了我300元 Ispent300yuanonthebook Ipaid300yuanforthebook Thepriceofthebookis300yuan Itcostme300yuantobuythebook Thebookcostme300yuan Practice一句多译 昨天下午他才来 Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon Hedidn tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere Rewritethesentences 方法二 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 1 MostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica MostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica 2 Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy 方法二 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 Completethesentenceswithnon predicate 非谓语动词 听到这个消息 他们变的很激动 thenews theygotexcited 2 尽管被告知许多遍 他仍然重复这个错 manytimes hestillrepeatedthemistake 3 除非被邀请发言 你应该在会议上保持沉默 Unless tospeak youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting Hearing Havingbeentold invited Translatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon predicate 非谓语动词 1 面对困难时 他从不放弃 2 引入市场后 该产品大获成功 3 做完作业后 他回家了 Facedwith Facingdifficulties henevergivesup Introducedtothemarket theproductmadeagreatsuccess Havingfinishedhishomework hereturnedhome 方法三 丰富的句式 DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence 倒装句 Pooras thoughhewas hewashappy 方法三 丰富的句式 SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUseful Thedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel NeartheGreatWallHotelisthesquare YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish ItwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish Ifailedintheexamagain WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon MissLi whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish willgiveusareportsoon WealllikeJim WealllikeJim whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness 1 Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings 使用名词性从句 2 ThoughI mweak I llmaketheeffort 使用倒装句 3 Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper 使用强调句型 4 Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp 用虚拟语气 Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式 WeakasIam I llmaketheeffort Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened Icouldn thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp 5 Iwon tbelievewhathesays 使用状语从句 6 Ifyoustudyhard youwillmakerapidprogress 用并列句 7 HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad 使用倒装句 NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad Nomatterwhathesays Iwon tbelieve Studyhardandyou llmakerapidprogress Usedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence Makesentencesbyusingnon predicate 3 Sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful Summaries Practice 此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历的事 由此写一篇文章 要求 1必须使用5个句子表达图画内容 2将5个句子组成连贯的短文 步骤一审题 narration pasttense thethirdperson timeorder caughtabirdfixedastringtoit agirllookformotherapolicecomforther 步骤二要点 sendherhomelostinthought setthebirdfreefeelhappy 步骤二要点 步骤三 扩展成句 连句成篇 1 Oneday LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit 2 Hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice mancomforther 3 ThepolicemansentthegirlhomeandLiMingwaslostinthought 4 LiMingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy 步骤四 仔细检查 认真修改 查是否遗漏要点 信息是否完整 尤其是 人物 地点 时间 发生什么事 如何发生 怎样进行等方面是否遗漏 查体裁格式是否正确 查句式使用是否科学得当 查叙述的顺序是否颠倒 查过渡词是否使用合理 查时态 语态是否一致正确 查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰 查字数是否符合要求 Oneday LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit Whenplayingwithit hesawthegirlwhowascryingcouldn tfindhermumandakindpolicemantriedtocomfortherandtoldherthathewouldsendherhome Seeingthemgooff LiMingwasdeepinthought Heheardthecryofthebirdandsuddenlythoughtthatthebirdmightbemissingitsmother Soheatoncesetthebirdfree andthebirdflewhappilyintothesky