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短文改错专练（二） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。ADear Sarah, Im writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week. Im really sorry. I know we said 8:30, and I wouldve gotten here on time if everything hadnt gone wrongly. I was late because my watch broke and I didnt know what the time it was. So you see, I wouldve arrived on time if my watch hadnt broken. Then I have to walk because Id missed the bus. And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing. Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late. I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone. Anyway, I hope you arent too angrier with me. Hope to hear you soon. Yours, JackB Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip. I get up at six oclock and we set off by bus. On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked. We all had good time. Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm wele. After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees. It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air. Finally, we went home at half past four. Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.C Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad. They think that its natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent. Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future. Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesnt agree with them. He thought my English is too limited to municate with foreigners. Besides, the cost is too much for his family. In my opinions, I should continue to study in China. As long as I study hard at now, Ill make great achievements in the future.D Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market. It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to puters and cars. But there is one serious problems with this. The information are actually very often misinformation. It tells us the products benefits but hides its disadvantages. Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we dont need and cant afford, but it confuses our sense reality. “Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us. And it doesnt tell us the plete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.E My grandfather had had enough of his cat. He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess. So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town. He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her. A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep. My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather. He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention. He decided he will never give her away again.F Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society. This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did. People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past. Customs and beliefs have changed very slower. They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better. Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next. Yet changes do take place. All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other. In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.G My uncle and aunt e home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof. They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter. Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police. After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to. It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly. The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground. Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.H Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think wed better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But its a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for the health.答案A1. . apologize to what . to for2. . gotten here on . here there3. . gone wrongly. wrongly wrong4. . what the time . 去掉the5. . I have to . have had6. . get changing. changing changed7. . another buses . buses bus8. . and my brother . and but9. . too angrier with . angrier angry10. Hope to hear you . you前加fromB1. . my classmate and . classmate classmates2. I get up at . get got3. . had good time . good前加a4. 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