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Howcanwemakeahighermarkinwriting?,Learntoevaluateyourwriting,Basichints:Contents:coveringalltherequiredpointslanguage:narratingproperlyandclearly,如何写出高分数的书面表达,高考书面表达的要求词语正确、连贯、流畅语句简洁、用词恰当，能根据不同的情景选用不同的词语和句子句子结构有变化语言整体性、逻辑性强标点符号准确无误6.包含所有要点7.严格按要求写作三.书写书面表达的过程审题构思草稿修改抄写在卷子上,四构思书面表达的注意事项一审即审题二扣即紧扣要点紧扣主题三避即避写感想避写心得避写体会四性即准确性简洁性连贯性表达方式多样性连接词的选用(1)表示递进：and、andthen、also、besides、inaddition、andmoreover、whatsmore、whatwasworse,(2)表示转折：but、however、although、onthecontrary、otherwise(3)表示结果：so、therefore、asaresult(4)表示时间：now、then、afterwards、laterSoon、beforelong、afterthat、shortlyafterthatuptonow、justnow、justthen、sofar.十大复杂句型：(1)定语从句(2)强调句(3)倒装(4)被动结构(5)虚拟语气(6)so.that,Fivelevelsofnarration:251.determineitslevelatthebeginning(0,1-5)failed.(6-10)poor.(11-15)fit(16-20)good(21-25)perfect2.deduct2ifwritteninlessthan80ormorethan120words,3.Scoringpoints:a.requiredpointsordetails(notasinglepointmissing)b.wordsandexpressions(properandvoluble)c.grammaticalstructures(correctandnumber)d.context(coherentandconsistent),Level5:perfect(21-25)Completelyfulfilledthetaskofwriting：,1.coveralltherequiredpoints2.applymoregrammaticalstructuresandadvancedvocabulary3.containnogrammaticalandspellingerrors(ifany,resultingfromattemptsofcomplexstructuresormoreadvancedvocabulary.)4.showstrongcompetenceinusinglanguage5.effectivelyapplylinkingwords,thuscompact,Level4:good(15-20)Completelyfulfilledthetaskofwriting,1.coverallthekeypoints,missingoneortwosecondarypoints2.grammaticalstructuresandvocabularymeettheneedsofwriting.3.Veryfewgrammaticalandspellingerrorsresultingfromattemptsofcomplexstructures4.applysomesimplelinkingwords,makingitscontextcompact,Level3:fit(10-15)Basicallyfulfilledthetaskofwriting：,1.coverallthemainpoints,missingsomepointsoflessimportance.2.grammaticalstructuresandvocabularymeettheneedsofwriting.3.containsomegrammaticalandspellingerrors,butnotaffectunderstanding.4.applysomesimplelinkingwords,makingitscontextcoherent,Level4:poor(6-10)notproperlyfulfilledthetask.,1.missorfailtodescribesomekeypointswhereaswritesomeirrelevantcontents.2.monotonousordullgrammaticalstructuresandlimiteditemsofvocabulary3.containsomegrammaticalandspellingerrors,affectunderstanding4.Fewlinkingwords,makingitscontextincoherent,ornotexpressedclearly,failedtoclearlydeliverinformation,Level1:failed(0/1-5)failedinthetaskofwriting,1.Obviouslyleaveoutthekeypointsinsteadofwritingsomeirrelevantcontentsresultingfromfailureinanalysis.2.Monotonousgrammaticalstructuresandlimiteditemsofvocabulary3.Manygrammaticalandspellingerrors,affectingtheunderstanding.4.Lackoflinkingwords,incoherentnarrationordescription,failedtodeliverinformation.GradedZero:failedtodeliveranyinfoortoolittletojudgeorcompletelyirrelevantwritingortoovagueorillegibletoread.,AWritingTask：,最近，你校同学正在参加某英语报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。,注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数100左右参考词汇：门票（entrancefee）,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks._Yourstruly,LiHua,Areferencesample:,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.Yourstruly,LiHua,Sample1:,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%percentofthestudentswhoattendedthediscussionthoughtthatanentrancefeeshouldnotbechargedbecausetheparksarepublicplaceforpeopletohavearest.Ifanentrancefeewascharged,theysaid,itwasnecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichmaydistroythebeautyofourcity.Thereststudentsagreedtochargeanentrancefee.Buttheyalsosaidthatthepriceshouldnotbetoohigh.Theyconsideredthatthemoneyfromtheentrancefeescouldbeusedtopayfortheworkerswhoworkintheparksandbuynewkindsofplants.Ifnot,theysaid,alltheparkswouldbeclosed.Ithink,itisaninterestingquestion.Bestwishes.Yourstruly,LiHua,Comments:,这篇文章内容全面，思想表达完整清楚。语言流畅。除了一个单词“distroy”之外，基本上无语言错误。且用了复合句、插入语等较为复杂的语言现象.Score：24,Sample2,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%ofusthinkthatitisunnecessarytochargeforparks.Andtworeasonsaregiven.First,parksarerestplacesforthepublic,second,ifanentrancefeeischarged,gatesandwallsarerequired,butthesemayhavebadeffectoncitylooks.Therestthinksitsneeded,buttheentrancefeeshouldnotbemuch.Andtheysuggestthatthefeesbeusedforgardenerspayandtobringinmoreplants.Ithinkallofusarequiteright.AndIhopetoseeotherstudentsopinionsinthepaper.Yourstruly,LiHua,Comments:,这篇文章内容全面，思想表达也完整清楚。语言也比较流畅，但有些句子显得不够地道。有几处无语言错误。没有闪光点。Score:18,Sample3,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.About60percentstudentsthinkthattheentrancefeeshouldbefree.Theysayparksareplaceswherepeoplecantakeatest.Butifwearechargedforparks,wemustbuilddoors,wallsandotherthings,whichwillinfectourfeelings.Thereallypurposeofbuildingparksdoesntexist.About40percentstudentsthinkweshouldbechargedforparks,butnotveryhigh.Themoneyisusedtobuynewplantsandtopeoplewhoworksfortheparks.Itisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldbechargedforparks.Inaworld,thediscussionissuccessful.Afterthediscussion,wetalkalotaboutit.Yourstruly,LiHua,Comments:,这篇文章基本切题。思想也基本上表达清楚了。但语言错误不少，文章整体的连贯性较差。Score:13,Sample4,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Inthestudentswehaveinterviewed,sixtypercentofthemthinkitisnoneedtotakeanentrancefee.First,theparksareplacesforpeopletohavearest.second,ifittakesanentrancefee,agateandthewallaroundshouldbebuilt.Andthatwilleffectivetheviewofthesight.Butthereisfortypercentbelievetakinganentrancefeeisneeding,onlydonttoohigh.sothatwecanpayfortheparkers,andbuysomenewfollowers.Suchisourdiscussion.Whatothersthinkaboutit?Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHua,Comments：,这篇文章基本切题，但思想表达不清楚，文章连贯性差。文章中有较多的语言错误，且有一些较的语法错误。Score:8,Sample5,DearEditor,Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Theparkinthecityisbeauful.weareverylikepark.Sosomeofstudentsthinkparkisdidntgetentrancefree.Because,parkisfreeingandnational,sothereisopeningTherecanmoreandmorepeoplegotonational,itshelpsoftheybeauty.Gettingentrancefee,ismustbehavedoor.Thatisbreakdownbeaufulcity.Butotherstudentsthinkparkmustgetentrancefee.Because,parkneedworkers.Soentrancefreecanpayforthem,andcangettingmoreandmoreflowersandtree.Cancharceparkmorebeauful.Butentrancfreecanttomuchmore.Thisisweaboutwhetheranentrancefreefee.Yourstruly,Comments：,这篇文章逻辑混乱，条理不清。只有个别正确的句子。句子间也没有很好的联系，影响了对文章的理解。Score:3,
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