高一书面表达训练如何写建议信.ppt

高一书面表达训练-连句成篇（建议信）,建议信 建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,建议信的常用结构如下： 1首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。 2中段：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学婉转地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况。 3尾段：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。,建议信开头常用句式： 1. Thank you for trusting me. Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions / advice / tips. 2. Im sorry to hear / learn that 3. You have asked me for my advice on and I will try to make some suggestions.,表达建议常用句式： 1. If I were you, I would 2. As far as I am concerned, / In my opinion 3. Why not ? 4. It would be a good idea if 5. In the first place / Firstly / First Secondly / Second Last but not least(最后但不是最不重要) ,Compositions from Student Times,假如你是李华，你的笔友黎明来信说他的父母工作变动刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。 注意：词数100左右,翻译下列句子：,我很高兴了解到你现在一所新学校就读。 （learn） I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school. 如果你现在没有知心朋友，不用着急。(if) Do not worry if you have no real friends right now.,虽然你是一个性格内向的男孩，而且生活经历与你目前同学差异很大，只要你遵循下列提示不是没有可能交上好朋友的。（although，as long as ) Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips.,首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（first of all) First of all, you can make friends with others if you share their joys and sorrows. 第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。 Secondly, you should open your heart to your friends, holding back nothing.,最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。 Last but not least, once you have a friend, you must constantly maintain your friendship with acts of kindness. 希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。 I hope you will find true friendship soon.,连句成篇,Dear Li Ming, I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school, which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf.（适当增加的细节，高级表达）,Do not worry if you have no real friends right now. Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips. 首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（first of all) First of all, you can make friends with others if you share their joys and sorrows.,第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。 Secondly, you should open your heart to your friends, holding back nothing.(增加细节，闪光句子）,最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。（Last but not least; once) Last but not least, once you have a friend, you must constantly maintain your friendship with acts of kindness. 希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。 I hope you will find true friendship soon. =Hopefully,you will find true friendship soon. =It is hoped that you will find true friendship.,Dear Li Ming, I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school, which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf. Do not worry if you have no real friends right now. Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips. First of all, you can make friends with others if you share their joys and sorrows. Secondly, you should open your heart to your friends, holding back nothing. Last but not least, once you have a friend, you must constantly maintain your friendship with acts of kindness. I hope you will find true friendship soon.,仿写,下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。,Dear Editor， I am an active girl，and I speak and laugh loudly in the classroom，like a boy. I dont care about small matters.On the contrary，my neighbor，the girl who sits next to me，speaks quietly and dare not do the things I often do. I can understand this. What I cant stand is that she often gets angry with me about small things. How can I get along with her? Sunny， Shandong,注意：1.书信格式要规范； 2回信就原信内容给出至少三条建议(如谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等)。 思路分析 写作时应注意下面几点： 1确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。 2主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。,词汇热身 1与某人交朋友_ 2依我看_ 3与某人谈心_ 4参加某人活动_ 5分享快乐_ 6出去散步_,【答案】 1.make friends with sb. 2.in my opinion 3have a talk with sb. 4.join sb.in.,句式温习 1相互理解对你们两人都很重要。 _for you two. 2我认为邀请她参加你和你的同学们的各种活动也很好。 I think its better for you to ask her _ _. 3与她分享你的喜怒哀乐。 _. 4真心希望这些建议能对你有帮助。 _to you.,【答案】 1.Understanding each other is very important 2.to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities 3Share your happiness and sadness with her 4.I truly hope the advice can be of help,连句成篇,Dear Sunny， Its very good that you want to make friends with this girl. In my opinion，youd better first have a hearttoheart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two.,And I also think its better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discussing some fashionable topics，and so on.,Besides，helping each other is also very important for both of you. Just share happiness and sadness with her. And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain you will be good friends in future. I truly hope the advice can be of help to you. Yours， Editor Tape,高考真题链接,年高考全国卷 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点 写回信。 要点： 参加中文学习班； 看中文书刊、电视； 学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友。 词数 100左右； 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well. 2 . Best wishes, Li Hua,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua,