2019-2020年高考英语书面表达集训（六）.doc

2019-2020年高考英语书面表达集训（六）【高阶特练】第三部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 按照题目要求或提示来完成下列表述。【高端点拨】每年高考后，我们一直在思索：英语高考中书面表达考什么、怎么考、如何写等系列高难表述问题。但是，通过与考生交流，我们发现他们的书面表达的思维能力并非不活跃，只是在他们的记忆库中存储的相应表达方式不足，或记忆有误，或根本是空白。拿到作文题目后，不愁没内容可写，只愁没词可用，或是写了不知是否正确，因此在表达过程中，要么被迫放弃，要么按照汉语的结构硬译，以致造成短文词不达意，错误地传递信息，分数也受到影响。针对考生在书面表达方面出现的问题，下面将谈谈高考书面表达的复习建议和答题技巧。一、复习建议（一）明确写作能力的培养和提高是一个日积月累的过程。高考英语书面表达题是一项综合性的测试。要写好一篇短文，考生不仅要具备熟练的谴词、造句和谋篇能力，而且需要熟知不同的写作策略。如果从高三年级开始准备，则必须保证有科学、全面的训练计划和足量的写作实践，在这方面，笔者要求学生从认识句子成分，到谴词成句，到练习基本句式，再到语段语篇的这样一个过程。当然有些学生在这过程中也坚持写日记，然后笔者给他们都进行了详细批改。这样学生既听从了老师的安排和指导，也没有忽视自己的独立实践与总结。（二）注重平时的练笔。近几年考题的话题包括外国交换学生在华学习生活安排、少年健康问题、中学生业余生活、人们的生活变化、环境保护、中学生庆祝 xx年奥运会申办、举办成功等。对于这些话题，每个考生都不会感到无话可说，只要平时认真进行一些写作实践，就不难具备应付这类话题所必要的写作能力。（三）明确写作方向。从近几年的情况来看，试题并没有特定的语篇或文体要求。虽然短文会用到记叙、说明或议论等表达方式，但这毕竟只是一个区区几十字的文段，远不足被称为记叙文、议论文、说明文或某种特定文体的文章。例如： 书面表达材料要求根据一首诗的内容，描述其中的一位老师，这是单纯的记叙文;或者根据提示，写毕业赠言，其中首先要求表述好友在你心中的印象，并用一两个事例加以描述，然后表达祝愿，这其实也是记叙文;或者依据要求，让学生描述一位伟人，并说明自己喜欢他或她的原因，这还是记叙文。（四）注意平时的词汇积累。针对考生平时练习时出现的没词可用，写了不知是否正确等情况，建议考生们采用听、读、写相结合的办法，增加语言输入，扩大存储量。高三年级不可避免地要进行大量的听和读的练习，在做完听力和阅读理解后，可以停下来，用一点时间有意识地增加针对写作的语言输入，比如将听过或读过的表达方式回忆一下并记住，或者将有用的短语标出来，记在笔记本上，以备事后记忆之用。注意选取的资料应与考生自己的写作水平相近，还要提高记忆的准确性。二、解题技巧高考英语书面表达题解题应遵循五步骤的原则进行。xx年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲英语中对写作这样要求：“要求考生根据提示进行书面表达，考生应能(1)准确使用语法和词汇。(2)使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。（一）仔细审题，确定要点。在开始写作这前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲，列要点时，如果提示是图表，要认真审图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如事件发生的背景，人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等，如果有参考词汇，一定要用上。（二）根据要点，遣词造句。近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高，高分文章要有较多的词汇，较高级的词汇用法。比如表达丰富可以用rich,但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。再比如“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子 He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。（三）确定时态及人称，内容连贯，结构紧凑。高考书面表达评分标准明确规定，如人称错误要扣分，不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情，多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时，通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后，句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如：(1)表示承接、递进用语，besides(并且)、whats more(并且)，moreover(而且)，firstly, secondly, finally(最后)，from now on (从此)，afterwards I after that(后来)，to make things worse/ whats worse(使事情更为糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。(2)表示转折关系用语。But, however, otherwise, though, despite, in spite of.(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(尽管)，all the same(尽管如此)。(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of.for(因为)，owing to (由于)，thanks to (由于)，due to (由于)，so that (结果)。(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之)，in short/in a word(简而言之)，on the whole(从总体看)，generally speaking(一般说来)，in my view(我的观点)，in conclusion(总之)。（四）句式丰富，避免重词。英语书面表达评分标准第五档(21-25分)要求，“应使用较复杂结构，这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型，也要有意识地使用复杂句型，这是文章的亮点。如何使用复杂结构，本人认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)、适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)，这些都是有效的途径。比如：When he arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)On arriving in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail. Having arrived in Beijing, he gave me an e-mail.(使用了介词+动名词和现在分词短语，分别作状语。高级) Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态，句子结构。高级)I wont believe what he says.(一般)No matter what he says, I wont believe it.(让步状从句，高级)。（五）认真答写，卷面整洁。高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其是高考英语作文网上进行阅卷以来，如果书写较差，会影响到扫描质量，因此，考生在答卷时，一定要认真、清楚规范地书写，以保卷面整洁和美观，为争取高分作文做好铺垫。三、修正小误1、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点2、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多3 句子结构错误 双谓语现象句子结构混乱 4 动词使用错误 时态错误语态错误滥用be动词 5 汉语式英语 6. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误 7. 名词单复数错误 8、词义模糊，用词不够准确9、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接. 10、逻辑错误，如：because与so或者although与but等同时出现在同一个句子里。【考点精练】 Test 1请你以“信心与希望”为主题写一篇短文，要点如下： 1、生活中困难不可避免，面对困难需要信心2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用3、你对困难的态度注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2. 80120词左右。Test 2假如你是中学生李华，今年高中毕业，准备申请到美国某大学就读，需提交一份英文自我简介，请给校方写一封邮件，包含下表信息，并表达自己的愿望。姓名李华性别男年龄18e-maillihuaqq学习经历1学习特长； 2英语水平； 3业余爱好； 4课外活动注意：1词数100左右。2可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。_Test 3近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为倍受热议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成短文。1列举不文明行为；2指出其影响：3提出建议。注意： 1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3首句已给出，不计入总词数。Test 4假如你是李华，将到英国参加一个英语学习俱乐部活动，你要在会上交流自己的英语学习体会。请根据提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括：学习方法、学习收获、学习困难。注意：1 词数 100个左右；2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear friends,_Yours sincerely, Li HuaTest 5 假如你是李华。你的朋友Jack将要来北京租一套房。请根据下表提示写一封电子邮件，向他介绍房屋所在丽都公寓的情况。要点如下：位置朝阳区，紧靠长城饭店，距机场高速路不远环境绿地、停车场和现代化购物中心设施设备齐全、24小时热水供应、电梯日夜运行咨询李女士 电话：010-66389420 注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3. 字数：100 左右4. 参考词汇：公寓 apartment 停车场 parking lots 设备齐全 well-furnishedDear Jack,I am glad you will take a trip to Beijing. Id like to introduce Lidu Apartment to you. Test 6请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。We all know that Chances favor the prepared mind. Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.注意：1无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语。 2词数为100左右。Chances favor the prepared mind_Test 7 Test 8为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的真实信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi_Worried，Im_sorry_to_know_that_you_are_having_such_a_bad_time_at_the_moment.Test 9xx年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学高三8班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以“How to protect ourselves in campus violence”为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容：1校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注。2要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力。3遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警。注意：1词数120左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：增强enhanceHow to protect ourselves in campus violenceDear friends, This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results._Thats all. Thank you!Test 10假设你是李华，高中毕业后你打算去澳大利亚留学，但是因为家庭困难，你打算申请助学贷款。请你用英语给有关部门写一封申请信，信的内容必须包括以下几点：1. 说明写信的原因。 2. 提出申请贷款的理由。3. 说明自己的打算并恳请批准。注意：词数100左右，邮件的格式已经给出，不计入总词数。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：助学贷款 school loan Dear Sir or Madam, Im writing to you to apply for a school loan. _Test 11假如你是星光中学的学生李华，将参加主题为“My Chinese Dream”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一篇演讲稿，主要内容包括：1 梦想成为一名山村教师，帮助山村孩子;2 山区偏僻，教育落后;3 父母和朋友都反对;4 我会.注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。Good morning, everyone!_Thank You!Test 12假设你是李华，正在带领来自英国某中学的交换生参观你校的图书馆。请你根据以下要点，用英语为他们做一个简短的介绍：1. 图书馆的环境：前有花园，后有教学楼，内有各种书籍、报刊杂志等；2. 借阅规定：一次至多借5本，保留10天；3. 开放时间：周二到周日8：30-21：30，周一闭馆。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；4. 文中不得出现你学校的名称。 Test 13在英文单词“I”和you”之间填入不同动词，会表达不同的意义，如“I trust you”；“I forgive you”；“I promise you”；“I understand you”；“I support you”。请从以上五句话中选出你最喜欢的一句作为题目，用英语写一篇短文。 内容要求：1.你对该句话的理解；2.结合相关事例说明你喜欢这句话的理由；3.恰当的结尾。 注意：1.文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 2.词数：100左右。Test 14假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。 注意：1. 词数：100左右。 2. 参考词汇：房租 rent (n.) 。Dear Bob,_ _ Yours, Li Hua Test 15一家英语报社举行征文活动，主题是“我的高中生活”。请根据以下要点完成短文。1. 校园生活； 2. 收获； 3. 感想。注意 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。High school is a golden time in ones life with great fun and fond memories. 【高阶特练】xx高考英语-书面表达集训（六）答案Test 1Test 2Dear sir/ Madam, As a Chinese high school student to graduate this year, I sincerely apply for a chance to study in your university. Im eighteen and will finish my three years of study in high school soon. I study Chinese, English, math, physics, chemistry, biology, geography, politics and history and other subjects, of which science subjects are my favorites. Im also good at English. I can municate fluently with native speakers in English. Besides, I go in for various out-of-class activities. I like playing football, table tennis, and so on. Im also a member of many clubs for music and opera. Im a volunteer in my neighborhood.Im looking forward to your reply. And please contact me by e-mail: lihuaqq. .Test 3As a tour guide of an international travel agency, I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road when the traffic lights are still red. Such bad behavior overseas has caused damage to the countrys reputation.Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, kindergartens and primary schools should do more to teach the kids to be responsible citizens. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.Test 4Dear friends, Intodaysworld,beingabletomasteraforeignlanguagewillbehelpfulinourlife.Here IdliketosharemylearningmethodsFirst,Ithinkitusefultolearngrammarandrememberasmanyusefulsentencepatterns asIcan.Ibelievethemoreweread,thebetterourEnglishwillbe.SoIspendmuchtime readingEnglishnewspapersandmagazinesafterclass,whichhelpstoimprovemyEnglish. Besides,TVandradioprogramsareofgreathelp.LearningEnglishnotonlyincreasesmy awarenessofforeignculturesbutalsohelpsmetomunicatewithEnglish-speakingpeopleandtomakemorenewfriends.However,sometimesIgetdiscouragedbecauseIkeepforgettingwordsIhavejustlearned.Id like to use the opportunity to seek for youradvice. Thankyou! Yours sincerely Li HuaTest 5Dear Jack,I am glad you will take a trip to Beijing. Id like to introduce Lidu Apartment to you. It lies in Chaoyang District, and next to the Great Wall Hotel. It is not far away from the expressway to the airport. It has plenty of green fields and parking lots, with a school and a modern shopping centre nearby. The house is well furnished and hot water is available in 24 hours. Lifts will work day and night. For more information, please dial 010-66389420 and contact Miss Li. I think she will tell you some details about the house. I wish youll like it.Best wishes!Yours, Lihua Test 6There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. I didnt realize it until I went to high school.Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing petition was to be held in school. I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public. I could only sing to myself most of the time. Somehow, I wanted to have a try. When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it. With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class. Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help. When I felt I was ready, the day came. Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions. It turned out that I won the first prize . This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life. If you are not successful yet, most probably you havent been well prepared. Once you have, chances will surely favor you.Test 7Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba,My name is Li Hua. Im a student from Xinhua High School. May I have the honor to invite you to give us an adult ceremony speech on behalf of all the teachers and students of our school? The speech is scheduled to be given on April，28 at the school hall, the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eager to hear you talk about your own experiences and unique views.I sincerely hope you can take your time from your busy schedule, and I would appreciate it very much if you can e. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best.I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely Li HuaTest 8Hi_Worried，Im_sorry_to_know_that_you_are_having_such_a_bad_time_at_the_moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of your anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Test 9Dear friends, This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very bad results. The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our country. As a student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the violence and enhance the ability of self-protection.Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to protect ourselves. At first, wed better keep calm, judge the situation and be aware of the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence. At last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid the physical injury. Thats all. Thank you.Test 10Test 11Good morning, everyone!Im Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “My Chinese Dream”.As we know, the education of rural areas is falling behind other areas. And the children there are longing for knowledge. Therefore, the problem about the lack of teachers is especially serious. It puzzles me that parents and friends arent in favour of my idea of being a rural teacher. And they think I am foolish. I understand their thoughts and feelings, but I think the children in rural areas are in great need of me. I will study hard to go college, thus realizing my dream.I wont regret my choice. I will struggle for my dream. e on and join me!Thank You!Test 12 Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? The building we are visiting is the library. As you can see, in front of the library is a beautiful garden and the teaching building is right behind it. When you get into the library, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also newspapers and magazines near the reading zone. According to the rules, every student can borrow up to five books at a time and keep them for 10 days. The library is open from 8:30am to 9:30pm from Tuesday to Sunday and is closed on Monday. We all like the library very much. Now you can visit it by yourselves. Remember: be quiet, please!Test 13 Among the sentences listed above , which we often e across in our life, stands out “I trust you”. It helps people get rid of depression. Few things help an individual more than letting him know that you trust him. Whenever I am faced with difficulty and almost lose heart, my parents often say “I trust you ”, which gives me a lot of encouragement. Also, my teachers show a strong belief in me by smiling at me and offering practical assistance. Thanks to their trust, I achieve more, even beyond their expectation . Trust can really make a difference, so dont forget to pass the message “I trust you” on to others.Test 14Dear Bob,Im so glad to know that youll e to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now Ive found one that I think is pretty good. It is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop and just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School. Its a small flat of 25 square meters on the third floor, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope youll like it. If not, Ill try to find another place for you. Im expecting your ing.All the best! Yours, Li HuaTest 15High school is a golden time in one s life with great fun and fond memories. On campus, my school friends and I work hard and play hard together. Ill never forget those days when we enjoyed ourselves in all kinds of activities, such as the sports meet, Science Week and Art Festival. Meanwhile, we have developed our abilities and harvested valuable friendships. More importantly, I am lucky to have met many lovely teachers, who not only teach me how to study, but also how to be a good person in society. As a student of Senior 3, it wont take long before I graduate. Id like to express my gratitude to my teachers and parents, with whose help Ive grown up, benefited a lot and made great progress in every way.