2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习 书面表达浏览（5）.doc

2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习 书面表达浏览（5）【福建省福州市xx高考英语3月质检试题】书面表达(满分25分) “百善孝为先是中国人的传统美德。请根据以下提示，谈谈你对“孝”的理解。提示：1你认为“孝”是什么? 2以你自己或身边人的事例说明。注意：1文章开头已给出，不计人总词2文中不得透露个人和学校信息；3词数1 20左右；4参考词汇：孝顺filial pietyIt is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China 一、评分原则1本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分；2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分；3词数少于100和多于150的，从总分中减去2分；4评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性；5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；6如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1. “孝”是什么；2. 举例说明；3. 总结。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。2125分第四档完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。1620分第三档完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。1115分第二档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。610分第一档未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。15分0分0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。四、One possible versionIt is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly.Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much time chatting with my grandpa, acpanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my grandpa seemed to be happy about it, but as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so fortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our munity. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He became happy again.My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.【湖北省xx高考英语第二次联考试题】短文写作（共1题；满分30分)请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 The greatest glory of living lies not in never falling, but in rising every time you fall. 注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【吉林省九校联合体xx高考英语二模试题】书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是李明。上周末你的美国网友Jack在给你的电子邮件中问你打算在大学里学什么专业。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封100词左右的邮件。1. 礼节性的开头语并引出问题。2. 首先打算学农学。理由是：（1） 农业是人类生存的基础。（2） 还有很多人在挨饿。（3） 你的雄心壮志。3. 学医也行；希望Jack提供建议【参考范文】写作one possible version：Dear Jack, How is everything going? In your last letter, you asked me what major Id like to choose at university. I have two majors in mind. First, I intend to choose agriculture science. Why? Because food is fundamental to our existence. However, food shortage is severe in many countries where many people are still going hungry and every second there are people starved to death. It is my hope that I can feed the world well through my research on organic farming.Secondly, medicine is also one of my considerations, which, I think, is another worthy way to save lives. Can you give me some advice? Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming 【 山东省菏泽市xx高考英语一模试题】写作 (满分30分) 假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Jack推荐一名学生助手（assistant）。请根据所给提示给Jack写封推荐信。1. 欢迎Jack的到来；2. 推荐刘佳做学生助手；3. 刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三学生，学校十佳学生）；4. 刘佳的特点与特长（活泼、乐观；电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）。注意：词数：120150；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】写作Dear Jack,Im Li Ming, Chairman of the students Union of Hongxing Middle School. Its great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.I was asked to write to you to remend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant. Liu Jia is a friendly, active and optimistic girl. She is also a smart girl who can use the puter skillfully and has a gift for municating with others. Whats more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. Im sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.If you have any questions about it, please contact me.Im looking forward to your ing. Yours， Li Ming