2019-2020年高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（37）参考范文 书面表达精选.doc

2019-2020年高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（37）参考范文 书面表达精选26五、短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy aTicket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend he re and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes Ihad was those I had on. It felt very strangeto travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.六、书面表达（25分）假如你叫李英，给你的笔友Fred写信,告诉他你很高兴收到他的信,同时告诉他你现在英语学习中遇到的一些困难,例如遗忘所学过的单词和词组,对一些习惯用语和语法规则未能弄懂,在学习中常犯错误等。请教他帮助你提一些如何学习好英语的建议。全文100120词。Dear Fred,I am pleased to receive your letter._With my best regards. Yours, Li YingMy summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a buyingticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to thereXiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag a andfrom the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all myMoney on my pocket, but the only clothes Ihad was those I had on. It felt very strange in wereto travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me luggage friend slots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. felt(2011丰台二模)今年4月16号，北京的部分高校开展了校园开放日活动，你和你的父母前往一所你向往的大学参观咨询。请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，叙述你们这一天的活动及感受。注意：1日记的开头已为你写好。2词数不少于60。 April 16 Saturday，SunnyToday some universities were open to the public. _ 参考范文April_16_Saturday，SunnyToday_some_universities_were_open_to_the_public.Its a good chance for me to know more about my dream university. So I , acpanied by my parents , went to Beijing University. Early in the morning we went there excitedly. To our surprise, many students had already been there. Directly we went to the stands where teachers and voluntary students of different departments made introduction and answered questions. Since I intend to choose English as my major, we spent lots of time asking the teachers for detailed information and advice. I was deeply impressed by the wonderful course and learned professors.Then we were attracted by the stands of various clubs. It was really amazing that they have organized such colorful activities! I just cant wait for such a wonderful college life.Inspired by what I saw during the day, I am determined to try my best to be admitted to the university. My parents also encouraged me to work harder for my dream. Its not easy ，but I am sure I can do it. *结束27，第四部分:写作（两节，共35分）第一节: 阅读表达（共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分） 阅读下面短文并回答问题，然后将答案写到相应的位置上（请注意问题后的词数要求）。1 With many job postings(公开招聘) now requiring candidates to apply via e-mail, first impressions are made not with a handshake but with words on a puter screen.2 Just like its usually a good idea to dress best for an interview, e-mails also should be refined(文雅高尚). _, here are some tips:Forget what instant messaging has taught you3 Recruiters(招聘人员) report that young professionals often send overly casual e-mails, treating an application like an instant message (IM). When using IM with friends and acquaintances, its acceptable to use shortened forms of words or phrases and inplete sentences. In business correspondence, however, stick to the rules your Chinese and English teachers taught you.Dont be cool4 Your lovely e-mail background of pets playing with each other has got to go.5 ic fonts(字体) are unprofessional. HR managers remend plain fonts such as Times New Roman or Arial, and black text on a white background. They also warn against sending e-mails from strange addresses. Littlebird or Chinatiger might not get what you hope for.Dont be too creative in the subject line6 Use plain, simple language like “Talented candidate seeking position as name of position” or “Enthusiastic candidate seeking position with name of pany”. Use one word to describe yourself, but do not go to extremes.7 The same rules apply to a paper resume and cover letter. Recruiters have only seconds to devote to each cover letter they receive. Many look at just three things: the positions youve held, the panies youve worked for, and your educational background. Anything else, such as a long story about yourself, can get in the way.76. What do recruiters pay attention to when they receive an application letter? (no more than 15 words)77. What does the word “They”(Line 2, Paragraph 5) probably refer to? (no more than 3 words)78. According to the passage, what should an e-mail application be like? (no more than 8 words)79. Please fill in the blank in the second paragraph with proper words or phrases. (no more than 8 words)80. Whats the purpose of this passage? (no more than 12 words)第二节 书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）某大学教授称，高学历者的贫穷意味着耻辱和失败，并对大学生提出要求：“当你40岁时，没有4,000万身价不要来见我，也别说是我的学生。”对此，凤凰网进行了调查。多数人持反对态度，认为教师不应用金钱来衡量学生；有少数人则认为这是一种激励；还有极少数人说不清楚。请你根据漫画并结合饼状图（pie chart）用英语写一篇短文。注意：1. 适当地发挥想象，增添细节以使行文连贯； 2. 词数120左右； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。A survey has been conducted by ifeng about whether a teacher should judge his students success by the money they have earned阅读表达:76. The positions youve held, the panies youve worked for, and your educational background77. HR managers.78. It should be formal and simple.79. To avoid failing you application / search80. To give advice on e-mail manners that affect job-hunting results.书面表达 A survey has been conducted by ifeng about whether a teacher should judge his students success by the money they have earned.It is true that some teachers judge their students success by money. As can be seen from the picture, a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and that wealth means success.But opinions are divided among the surveyed people. Just as the pie chart shows, 70% of them oppose the teachers view. They think that teachers shouldnt judge their students success by money. However, 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money. There are also a few people who are not clear about how to measure students success.In my opinion, we should understand success in a reasonable way. Money is certainly one way to measure success, but it is not the only way.