2011浙江省英语高考作文高二学生写后讲评.ppt

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,ManyteenagersliketochatontheInternet.(原因)Technologymakesitpossibleforteenagerstocommunicatewitheachotherwithoutknowingwhomtheyaretalkingto.(利)Someteenagerschatonlineformakingnewfriendsorgainingknowledgeandinformation.OthersliketosharetheirfeelingswiththeirInternetfriendstorelaxthemselves.(弊)However,thiswayofcommunicationalsohasdisadvantages.SometeenagersspendtoomuchtimechattingontheInternet,whichcanmakeitdifficulttocompleteothertasks.Sometimesitisdangeroustotalktototalstrangers.(看法)Inmyopinion,weshouldsetupaspecifictimeforchattingandtrytoavoidgettinghurtbyit.,利弊说明段,Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoing_(主题).Theypointoutthefactthat_(支持的第一个原因).Theyalsoarguethat_(支持的另一个原因).Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeoplesbelief.However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.Theyconsideritharmfultodo_.Theyfirmlypointoutthat_(反对的理由).,Thinking,BeawareofyourroleinthewritingprocessPayattentiontoyourtone!Organizeyourcompositionwithproperexpressionsandenrichedcontent.,第一段第二段第三段,Imwritingtotellyouabout.,信件结构,批评:现象及其严重性phenomenon/theserioussituation,建议措施,ThereasonwhyIamwritingtoyouisthat,写信目的,提高全体师生意识arouse/raise/improvetheawarenessof2.禁令或者处罚措施Abanonshouldbepassed./Studentswhoshouldbepunished.,强调采取措施的必要性,希望校长能考虑。Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration/account.Thankyouforyourconsideration.,Thereisnodoubtthateveryoneiseagertostudyinatidyandcivilizedschool.Whathasannoyedmerecentlyisthatsomestudentsscribbleandlitterhereandthere.Thesituationbecomesincreasinglyseriousandcannotbeignored.Atpresent,Imconsciousofsomebadbehaviourinourschool.,6.Thereisagrowingtendencythatsomestudentsliketoscribbleandlitteratwill,whichisboundtoharmoursurroundings.8.Itwouldmakesensetomakerulestobanstudentsfromlitteringandscribbling.9.Itishightimethatwerecognizedthesignificanceofkeepingourschoolneatandclean.10.Onlywhenwearousetheawarenesscanwestudyandliveinharmonyandcontributetoabettercampus.,June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster,ImLiYue,astudentfromClass1,Senior.(目的)Imwritingtodrawyourattentiontosomeimproperbehaviouramongusstudents:litteringandscribbling.(批评)Itmakesourschooldirtyandunpleasant,anddoesharmtotheimageofourschool.IalwaysfeelashamedwheneverIseethis.Itisclearlynotappropriateforastudenttolitterandscribbleabout.(建议)Iwonderiftheschoolcouldplacemoredustbinsaroundandsetupspecificrulesagainstsuchbehaviour.,Atthesametime,studentsshouldbeencouragedtodevelopgoodhabitsandbetterbehavethemselves.Ibelievethat,withthejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudents,ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yoursfaithfully,LiYue,2011年高考英语作文(全国卷)假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(LearningCenter)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:1本人简介;2求助内容:3约定时间;4你的联系方式(Email:lihua1236com;Phone:12345678)。,DearSir/Madam,ImLiHua,aChinesestudenttakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.Imwritingtoaskforhelp.Icameherelastmonthandfoundmycoursesinteresting.ButIhavesomedifficultieswithnote-takingandIhavenoideaofhowtousethelibrary.IwastoldtheLearningCenterprovideshelpforstudentsandImanxioustogethelpfromyou.IhavenoclassonTuesdaymorningsandFridayafternoons.PleaseletmeknowwhichdayisOKwithyou.Youmayemailorphoneme.Herearemyemailaddressandphonenumber:lihua1236,cinl12345678.Lookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,2011年高考英语作文(四川卷)第二节书面表达(满分35分)最近,某中学生英文报开设了“After-classActivities”的栏目,请你根据以下提示,为该栏目写一篇英文稿件,并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动的情况;2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议注意:1.词数100左右;2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名3.稿件的开头以为你写好(不计入总词数),After-classActivitiesNowadays,after-classactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularinhighschools.Inourschool,therearevariouskindsofactivities,forexample,artsandsports.Weenjoythemverymuch.Playingfootballandreadingstoriesaremyfavoriteswhichdomelotsofgood.Besidesbuildingmybodyandenrichingmyknowledge,theyalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.HereIhavesomesuggestions.Tostudents,youdbetterchoosetheactivitieswhichinterestyouandsuityou;toschools,theyshouldorganizemoreactivitiesforstudentsandleavestudentsmoretimeforactivitiesbygivingthemlesshomework.Dearfriends,pleaseactivelytakepartinafter-classactivities,whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollifecolorful,butalsoimproveyoulearning.,2011年高考英语作文(江西卷)第二节写作(满分25分)假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“LetsRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括:1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。2.骑自行车的益处,如能环保有利健康等。参考词汇:低碳生活(low-carbonlife)节能(energysaving)注意:1.词数:120词左右;2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLihuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“LetsRideBicycles”.,Goodmorning,everyone,ImLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.ThetopicofmyspeechisLetsRideBicycles.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.however,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen?AsfarasImconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdontneedpetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywontgiveoffwastegas.Whatsmore,ridingbicyclesisgoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.Therefore,letstaketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyou!,2011年高考英语作文及范文(新课标卷)假定你是李华,你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:1.说明你是该报的忠实读者2.赞赏该报优点:1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章,DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationson,the,5thanniversary,ofGlobalMirror!Imaregularreaderofyournewspaper.Ilikeitverymuchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.First,itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnewssothat,bysimplyturningthepages,Icanlearnallimportantthingsthathavehappenedduringtheweek.Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.Asayoungstudent,IsuggestthatGlobalMirrorcarryarticlestoguideusinourEnglishlearning,andIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHua,2011年高考英语作文(安徽卷)第二节书面表达(满分25分)某校英文报开辟了一个专栏:Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“MyApproachtoDifficultiesinLearning”为题,用英语写一篇短文。谈谈自己的一些做法。要求:1.词数100左右2.短文中不能出现本人的相关信息。,MyApproachtoDifficultiesinLearningAshighschoolstudents,werunintoonedifficultyafteranotherintheprocessoflearning.Everyonehastheirownwaytodealwiththem.HereIwouldliketosharemine.WhenIamfacedwithadifficulty.IusuallychoosetorefertorelevantlearningmaterialsorWebpages.Inthisway,Icannotonlyworkitoutbutalsoimprovemyabilitytoovercomeproblemsallbymyself.However,whenitissomethingbeyondmycompetence.Iturntomyclassmatesorteachersforhelp.SometimesIalsoaskmyparentsforadvice.Asaresult,Ihavemadesteadyprogressinmystudies.,2011年陕西高考英语作文及范文假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。Imthemotherofafourteen-year-old.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomefriendsofminekeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?写作要点:1.表明自己的看法;2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);3.提出至少两条建议要求:1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。,Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandtheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeschoolneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.Someall-Astudentinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriendsadvice.Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl;letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities;andlethermakemistakesofherownasweteenagersoftendo.,2011年福建高考英语作文及范文为了纪念汶川大地震三周年,某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提示,以“GreatChanges”为题,用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下:1.某中学灾后三年的变化,如教学与活动场所,以及师生精神面貌等;2.发生变化的原因;3.你的感想。注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可根据图片提示适当发挥;,-,GreatChangesIamdeeplyimpressedbythegreatchangesthathavetakenplaceintheschooloverthepastthreeyears.OnMay12,2008,asevereearthquakedestroyedalmosteverythingintheschool,leavingbadly-damagedbuildings.Itisnow,however,takingonanewlook.Tallbuildingshavebeenputup,includingclassroomandlaboratorybuilding,Thereisalsonewly-builltstandardplayground.Inthenewenvironment,teachersandstudentsarelivinghappilyandworkinghard.Itisreallyamazingthattheonce-ruinedplacehasnowbeenturnedintoabeautifulschool,fulloflife.Obviously,withoutthehelpofthewholesociety,therewouldbenonewschooltoday.Itisloveandconcernthathavebroughtaboutthegreatchanges.Manyhandsmakelightwork.Wecanworkwondersifweuniteasafamily,caringforeachotherandhelpingthoseinneed.Unionisstrength.,
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