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专题16 短文改错（一）短文改错(一)A(2016河北衡水中学高三七调)Dear Mandy，Im not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in math. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy, but its not true. I work really hard, often study late into the night! Ive tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard, and he always gets excellent grades. Its not fair!The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says Im the best student shes had for year. When I told my dad, all he said was, “You mustnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！” Im feeling quite puzzling as to what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely，Lisa1第一句中的especial改为especially考查副词。修饰动词doing，作状语，应用副词形式。2第二句中的me后加to考查固定用法。want sb.to do sth.想要某人做某事。3第四句中的study改为studying考查非谓语动词。句中已有谓语动词work，且逗号后无连词，因此study应用非谓语动词形式，又因为I与study之间为主动关系，故用现在分词studying作伴随状语。4第五句中的said改为says考查时态。主语为she，根据always及全文时态可知，此处应用一般现在时。5第五句中的like改为as考查固定结构。asas和一样。6第六句中的and改为but考查连词。根据句意“我弟弟学习不是很努力，但他总是获得优异的成绩。”可知，前后两个分句之间为转折关系。7第八句中的it去掉考查句式结构。本句中I like为省略了关系代词的定语从句，修饰先行词the only thing，is为系动词，art为表语，it是多余成分，故删去。8第九句中的year改为years考查名词的数。for后常接时间段，year为可数名词，应用复数形式。for years多年来。9第十句中的in改为on/over考查固定搭配。waste sth.on/over sth.在某事上浪费某物(钱财、时间等)。10第十二句中的puzzling改为puzzled考查形容词。此处表示“我感到很困惑”，应用过去分词形式的形容词，puzzled感到困惑的；puzzling令人困惑的，主语常为物。BFor a brighter future, numerous student say goodbye to their family and friends in China and boarded a plane to study abroad. As far as Im concerning, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages as if they can fit in with the life there. Xie Lei is a perfect example.2012 was the time that Xie Lei first went to study in England and come across countless difficulties. However, she soon got used to the life in England and admitted to a worldclass university there. Now she has the excellent job in Shanghai due to my international education background.From what Xie Lei has experienced, I can safe draw the conclusion that its wise to study abroad as long as students are able to cope with the difficulties.1第一句中的student改为students考查名词的数。根据句中的numerous可知，其后的名词应该使用复数形式。2第一句中的boarded改为board考查时态。根据句中的say goodbye to和语境可知，应该使用一般现在时。3第二句中的concerning改为concerned考查固定搭配。as far as sb.be concerned表示“在某人看来”。4第二句中的最后一个as去掉考查连词。如果他们能适应国外的生活，出国留学是很有好处的。as if仿佛，不符合语境。5第四句中的that改为when考查定语从句。句中的time是先行词，应用when引导定语从句并在从句中作状语。6第四句中的come改为came考查时态。根据上文的went和and可知此处也应用一般过去时。7第五句中and后加was考查时态和语态。她不久被世界一流的大学录取，所以应该使用一般过去时的被动语态。8第六句中的the改为an考查冠词。本句中的job是首次出现，而且表泛指，所以应该使用不定冠词。9第六句中的my改为her考查代词。本句的主语是she，所以句中与she对应的形容词性物主代词应该是her。10第七句中的safe改为safely考查副词。空后的谓语动词是draw，应该用副词修饰动词。C(2016黑龙江大庆实验中学月考)In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful. This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!1第一句中的had去掉考查时态。全文基本时态为一般过去时，且由本句的时间状语on April 10可知，此处应用一般过去时。2第二句中的a改为the考查冠词。此处特指“我们去爬的那座西山”，应用定冠词the修饰。3第二句中的spirit改为spirits考查固定短语。in high spirits兴致勃勃；情绪高涨。4第三句中的on改为in/during考查介词。句意：在爬山的过程中，我们互相帮助经过了岩石区。“在过程中”应用介词in或during。5第四句中的there改为where或在there前加and考查句式结构。可将此处看作定语从句，先行词为the summit，关系词在从句中作地点状语，应用where引导，故可将there改为where；也可将此句看作是并列句，因此需要在there前加连词and。6第五句中的Viewing改为Viewed考查非谓语动词。the city与view之间为被动关系，应用过去分词作状语。7第六句中的benefit改为beneficial考查形容词。此处位于系动词was之后，作表语，应用形容词形式。8第六句中的only后加did考查倒装结构。当not only置于句首时，应用部分倒装，即将助动词提至主语前，又因为时态为一般过去时，故在we前加did。9第六句中的what改为how考查连词。此处表示“我们还学会了如何合作”，表方式，应用how。10第七句中的are改为be考查虚拟语气。suggest在此意为“建议”，其后的宾语从句应用虚拟语气，从句谓语动词应用“(should)动词原形”结构，其中should可省略。DOne day, I was walking in the park while I caught sight of a wallet on a bench. Clearly, someone has left it there by accident. I picked it up and checked the contents. Inside them, I found some money and a card with a phone number. Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediate tried the number. A man answered for it in an anxious voice. Heard that I had his wallet, he sighed on relief and told me he would return right away. Ten minutes late, the man arrived. After confirming he was owner, I handed the wallet back to him. With his thumb down, he expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly. Seeing the smile on his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.1第一句中的while改为when考查连词。while常与进行时态或持续性动作连用，caught sight of为瞬间性动作，因此用when, be doing sth.when为固定句型，表示“正在做某事突然”。2第二句中的has改为had或者去掉has考查时态。全文为过去时态，此处既可理解为一般过去时，即该动作发生在过去，也可理解为过去完成时，即过去的过去，均符合语境。3第四句中的them改为it考查代词。此处指代上文的wallet，应用代词it。4第五句中的immediate改为immediately考查副词。修饰动词tried应用副词形式。5第六句中的for去掉考查动词用法。动词answered为及物动词，直接接代词作宾语。6第七句中的Heard改为Hearing考查非谓语动词。由于本句已有谓语sighed和told，故此处应为非谓语动词，hear与逻辑主语he为主动关系，需用现在分词形式作伴随状语。7第七句中的on改为in/with考查固定短语。in/with relief如释重负；感到宽慰。8第八句中的late改为later考查易混词辨析。late晚的，迟到的；later之后，随后。9第九句中的owner前加the考查冠词。句意：在确认他就是失主之后，我把钱包递给了他。此处特指钱包的主人，故应用定冠词the修饰。10第十句中的down改为up考查介词。根据语境，此处表示“竖起大拇指夸赞”。EOne of my classmates recommended a quote to me, who goes like this: “The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.” I cant agree much with this view. Its true that almost everyone hopes for the better tomorrow such as a wellpaid job and a happy family. To make this dream be come true, we are supposed to seize the present moment. In other word, we must take action right now for a bright future. Take Ma Yun for example. Shortly after quit his job from a college, he started a small firm focused on ebusiness for he longed to become a wellknown businessman in the future. Despite the fact that he meets with many difficulties at the very beginning, he didnt give up but made up his mind to seize every single day to realize his dream. Finally, his hard work paid back. He succeeded at last. In a word, I firm hold the belief that if you do your best today youre sure to have a bright future.1第一句中的who改为which考查定语从句。句中含有非限制性定语从句，先行词是quote，所以用which。2第二句中的much改为more考查比较等级。作者很同意这种观点，所以用cant agree more with this view，强调对这句话非常认可。3第三句中的the改为a考查冠词。此处表示泛指。4第四句中的be去掉考查被动语态。本句中的come true没有被动语态。5第五句中的word改为words考查固定短语。in other words换句话说。6第七句中的quit改为quitting考查非谓语动词。句中的after是一个介词，所以用动名词作宾语。7第七句中的focused改为focusing考查非谓语动词。句中的focus的逻辑主语是firm，两者之间为主动关系，所以用现在分词作定语。8第八句中的meets改为met考查时态。根据句中的at the very beginning和didnt give up可知，这里说的是过去的事实，所以用一般过去时。9第九句中的back改为off考查动词短语。他所有的付出都有了回报，这与下一句话中的succeeded at last吻合。pay off取得成功。pay back偿还 。10第十一句中的firm改为firmly考查副词。根据句中的firm的位置和语境可知，应该使用副词修饰动词。FMy friend Lin Tao was born in Liaoning Province to the northeast of China. He met with a traffic accident when he was younger. As a result, he lost one of his legs. Although he suffered a great deal, he never loses his heart. Lin Tao has even published a book. He enjoys playing his guitar and listen to music. He does excellent job in school. But he is always ready to help those in trouble. He wins the respects of his classmates and his teachers.In my opinion, Lin Tao is extreme brave and he sets a good example to we all.1第一句中的to改为in考查介词。辽宁在中国的东北部，在中国的领土范围内，应用介词in。2第二句中的younger改为young考查行文逻辑。句意：小时候，他遭遇了一次交通事故。根据语境可知，此处不含比较意义，无需用比较级。3第三句中的suffered改为suffers考查时态。全文基本时态为一般现在时，且此处描述的是主人公的客观情况，故应用一般现在时。4第四句中的his去掉考查固定短语。lose heart失去信心；灰心。5第六句中的listen改为listening考查句式结构。enjoy后应接动名词作宾语，此处与playing为and连接的两个并列宾语。6第七句中的excellent前加an考查冠词。do an excellent job in在方面干得好，表现出色，excellent以元音音素开头，故在其前加不定冠词an。7第八句中的But改为And考查连词。句意：他在学校学习很好。并且他总是乐于帮助那些有困难的人。根据语境可知，两句之间为顺承关系，不表示转折。8第九句中的respects改为respect考查名词的数。respect此处意为“尊重”，是不可数名词，不能用复数形式。9第十句中的extreme改为extremely考查副词。修饰形容词brave应用副词形式。10第十句中的we改为us考查代词。在介词后应用人称代词的宾格，故将we改为us。6
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