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专题十三完美制胜短文改错 限时40分钟A(2016四川)It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job, so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping.When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritiest.At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day！” Mom was grateful and moving.答案It is Mothers Day today.Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a fulltime job, she has to do most of the .She is a great mother.Both Dad I planned to do something on Mothers Day.We up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping.When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes I cooked were Moms .At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mothers Day！” Mom was grateful and .B(2016浙江)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!答案When I was a very young ， my father created a regular practice I remember well years .Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet at the door.He would ask who we and pretend not to us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they ， my father would lift my sister and me up to sit the top of the fridge.It was both and frightening to be up there!C(2015新课标)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.答案When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately, the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very problem.The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect environment.If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.D(2015四川)Hi, Janice, Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a timewasting activity！In fact，I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose our friendship.How do you think I should do？If you are me，would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案Hi, Janice, Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I you last time, I made three new here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a timewasting activity！In fact, I dont like to go anymore, Im afraid Ill lose our friendship. do you think I should do？If you me, would you talk to ？Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceE(2015陕西)My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!答案My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the biscuits in the world, so I to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor I was packing them up.At party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me the biscuits with happy laughter!4
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