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基础写作basicwriting,关于食品安全话题,基础写作假如几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品，请同学吃，他们吃后食物中毒，肚子痛，被送往医院治疗后脱险。请给报社写一封信描述他们食物中毒及脱险的经过，呼吁社会重视食品安全问题。【内容要点】：1越来越多的食品存在安全问题2买回食品共食3中毒、肚子痛4送医院治疗5脱险6希望全社会都重视食品安全,【写作要求和标准】1、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容;2、将5个句子组成连贯的短文;3、注意短文内容的完整性和连贯性。开头已经写好。参考词语：中毒getpoisoned肚子痛havestomachache脱险outofdangerDeareditor,Imwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheproblemoffoodsafety.,可以先把要写的内容概括成5个汉语句子：1.越来越多的食品存在安全问题。2.几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品，请同学吃。3.他们吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。4.被送往医院治疗后脱险。5.希望全社会都重视食品安全。,1.越来越多的食品存在安全问题。,Foodsafetyexistsmoreandmoreseriousquestion.,2.几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品，请同学吃。,Acoupleof/Afewdaysago,oneofmyclassmatesboughtabagoffoodfromasupermarketandsomeroommateswereinvitedtoenjoythefood.,3.他们吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。,Aftertheyfinishedit,allofthemgotpoisonedandhadstomachaches(withtheirfacespale).,Afterfinishingit,allofthemgotpoisonedandhadstomachacheswiththeirfacespale.,4.被送往医院治疗后脱险。,Theywerequicklysenttoanearbyhospital,Adoctorexaminedthemandgavethemsomemedicine。Theywereoutofdanger/escapedfromdangersoonaftertheytookthemedicine.,Theywerequicklysenttoanearbyhospital,whereadoctorexaminedthemandgavethemsomemedicineandtheywereoutofdangersoonaftertakingthemedicine.,5.希望全社会都重视食品安全。,Ihopethatthewholesocietypaymoreattentiontofoodsafety.,适当加上一些内容，让句子更连贯(Thisaccidentmademerealizetheseriousnessofthefoodsafetyproblem,so)Isincerelyhopethatthewholesocietypaymoreattentiontofoodsafety.,Deareditor,Imwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheproblemoffoodsafety.Nowadays,foodsafetyexistsmoreandmoreseriousquestion.Acoupleofdaysago,oneofmyclassmatesboughtabagoffoodfromasupermarketandsomeroommateswereinvitedtoenjoythefood.Unfortunately,afterfinishingit,allofthemgotpoisonedandhadstomachaches,把五个句子用适当的连接词，过渡词连成一篇较通顺的短文。,withtheirfacespale.Theywerequicklysenttoanearbyhospital,whereadoctorexaminedthemandgavethemsomemedicineandtheywereoutofdangersoonaftertakingthemedicine.Thisaccidentmademerealizetheseriousnessofthefoodsafetyproblem,soIsincerelyhopethatthewholesocietypaymoreattentiontofoodsafety.Yours,LiHua,TheEnd,
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