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2013年山东卷写作（满分30分） 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：1. 未及时回信的原因；2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1. 词数：120-150； 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, Ive been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details. Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. Last but not least, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, whats your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua2012年山东卷写作（满分30分）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1. 参加英语角的益处；2. 坚持写英语日记的作用；3. 英文阅读网站（EnjoyReading）对你的帮助。注意：1. 词数：120-150； 2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。Im LiHua. Here Id like to share with you my ways of learning English after class.Firstly, Im a regular participant in our school corner. By doing this, I have conquered my shyness and now I can talk to anybody boldly in English.Secondly, I have also formed the habit of keeping diaries in English every day, which is a very practical way to grasp the phrases and sentence structures that I have learnt.Thirdly, I also benefit a lot from visiting English reading websites such as EnglishReading, which provides me lots of articles that suit me to read every day. By and by, I have developed my reading skills and enlarged my English vocabulary.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” I owe my first prize in the English contest to these three ways of learning English after class. I hope they will be beneficial to all of all.2011年高考山东卷作文（满分30分） 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意： 1词数：120-150； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom， How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are. Let me tell you a piece of good news: Im going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So Im busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English words to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation. Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions/advice. In addition, Im going to visit you after the contest. Im sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Lihua2010年山东高考作文（满分30分）假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。注意：1. 词数120150；2. 可适当增加细节。Dear Tom: How are you going? We made a plan that we would travel to Beijing together next week. But now I have to apologize to you because I cannot go there on time for the reasons as follows. First, the government encourages us students to go to Shanghai due to the fact that the EXPO is being held in Shanghai now. As the saying goes, “Strike while the iron is hot”. I am eager to learn something about study from the EXPO to prepare for my education in college. In addition, I have been busy with the preparation of the college entrance examination for about half a year and got tired. I need some time to relax instead of travelling. Would you please reschedule your time? Shall we travel to Beijing after two weeks? I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li Hua2009年山东高考作文（满分30分）： 假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith.但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：1感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助； 2询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；3邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。 注意：1.词数120-150； 2可适当增加细节。Dear Tom, I am now in China. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into an unforgettable memory. I have been missing our English professor, Mr. Smith who left me a strong impression on me. What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available. So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox? I am delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival so that I can repay your friendship. I assure you that you will enjoy visiting here as I did at you home. With my best regards ! Yours, Li Hua2008年山东高考作文：（满分30分） 假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(Q吧)给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因； 2、给他提出建议； 3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数120 150Dear LiMing, I know you are now having trouble communicating with others and may often feel lonely. Thats because you are new here and people dont know about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advice below. First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views. Second, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. Gradually, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last, Im always here ready to help. I can introduce my friends to you. With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above. Yours, Zhang Hua济南市2013届3月 (一模)考试写作: （满分30分） 假如你是李明，你从网上看到美国中学生Stephen计划今年暑假来山东旅游，希望在当地找一名导游，游览一些文化特色鲜明的地方，请根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件。 1很高兴Stephen能来山东，表示愿意做他的导游； 2你的导游计划和理由： 3期盼他的回复。 要求：120-150词，可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。 On hearing the news that you are coming to Shandong for a visit, I was more than excited and cant wait for your arrival.Born in Shandong, I am familiar with the places which are worth a visit here. So I am willing to be your guide to give you an unforgettable experience. To begin with, Ill show you around Jinan, a historical city, famous for its springs. So I plan Baotu Spring as our first stop. Then well visit Qianfo Hill, at the top of which we will get a whole view of Jinan. I think the beautiful scenery will impress you a lot. On the last day, we will go to Qingdao by train, where we could get a closer touch with the sea, eat some sea-food and buy some souveniors. Im looking forward to your reply as soon as possible. Yours, Li Ming济南市2013届4月(二模)巩固性训练写作（满分30分）某英文网站举行专题征文活动。请根据下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇120150词的英语短文。注意：简要描述图片，并陈述自己的观点。 As we can see from the picture, two men have ordered too much food to eat up. A waitress advises them to pack the food up, but they refuse in a rude way. The picture reflects a bad phenomenonwasting in our society. Nowadays, wasting can be seen everywhere and every day. In addition to food, other useful things are wasted willfully. Willful waste will not only make some useful materials useless, but also abandon the virtue of thrift. As far as I am concerned, it is unwise and uncivilized to waste anything. It is high time that we should put an end to waste. Luckily, our government has realized this, so the campaign “Clear up the Pates” has been launched to appeal to people to practise thrift. As a saying goes, waste not, want not. With everyone doing his bit, we can create an energy-saving and environmentally-friendly society.2013年5月模拟(三模)写作（满分30分） 假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Linda告诉你萨尔中学(Thayer Academy)在今年暑假举行中国文化周活动，现招募志愿者。请根据以下提示，写一封120150词的自荐信。1. 简要介绍个人情况； 2. 陈述参加活动的目的； 3. 表达自己的愿望。Dear Sir (Madam), I am writing for the purpose of applying to become a volunteer for the Chinese Culture Week to be held at your school this summer vacation. A pen friend of mine, Linda from Thayer Academy, informed me of the cultural event. I understand that you need people who are very competent to carry out the work. I think my qualifications make me a perfect candidate for it. I have a good knowledge of Chinese culture as a result of reading and travelling widely. I also have previous experience of working as a volunteer at the Beijing Olympic Games. Besides, I am good at communicating with others because I always take an active part in various activities on campus. Most importantly, my spoken English is good enough to introduce Chinese culture to foreign friends. I am eager for the post because it will provide a great opportunity for me to learn about your lifestyles and share my first-hand experience with the adolescents in your country. If you give me the chance, I will return you a nice surprise. I look forward to hearing from you very soon. Yours faithfully, Li Ming2014高三11月济南市统考作文（满分30分）假如你是新华中学的学生张华，计划今年寒假去美国旅游，请根据下列提示，给你的美国朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，咨询相关情况或征求他的建议。120-150词 1. 目的地选择 2. 对住宿，饮食，交通等要求， 3. 表示感谢Dear Tom, How are you going recently? It has been a long time since we met in China last time. Having worked hard in high school, I am currently at the early stage of planning a two-week-trip in the US during this winter holiday. Do you have any suggestions about the choice of American cities? I prefer safe, modern, and big cities. I guess Id better pre-book(预定) a hotel. How about the price for a single boy like me? Is it easy to find Chinese food? I will book a return flight. When I travel between cities in the US, what is the traffic like? Thank you in advance! Im looking forward to your early reply. Best regards! Yours, Zhang Hua2014年1月济南市高三统考写作（满分30分） 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国网友Jack在给你的电子邮件中询问中国人在生活中使用手机的情况，请根据下面的漫画及要点提示，给他回复一封电子邮件。1漫画所反映的现象； 2该现象所带来的问题； 3你的观点。注意：1可适当增加细节使行文连贯； 2字数：120150。Dear Jack, Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell you something about the cellphone using in China. With the development of cellphone technology, cellphones are becoming increasingly common in China. Most people have their own cellphones. In our daily life, we can not only use cellphones to get in touch with our friends, we can also surf the Internet, play games or enjoy music on cellphones. In a word, we spend more time on cellphones today. However, the overuse of cellphones can also cause problems. For one thing, its harmful to our eyes to watch the screens for a long time. For another, suing cellphones on improper occasions also raises the chance of traffic accidents. As far as Im concerned, Yours, Li Hua2014年3月济南市高考模拟考试写作（满分30分）假如你是李明，目前正在英国学习。你在网上看到某宠物收容中心（DogsTrust）正在招募志愿者，请根据一下招聘信息，给中心负责人John Smith写一封申请信。 10 hours per week Working time: July 1-August 30,2014 Provide daily care for the dogs Assist training classes To apply: please email or post a covering letter (starting why you would be suitable ) to John Smith, Dogs Trust, 17 Wakley Street, London.注意： 1. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯； 2. 字数： 120150。Dear John Smith, Im Li Ming. I learnt from the Internet that you need volunteers in Dogs Trust. Im interested in it.Therefore, Im writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for it. I think Im qualified for the job. Im an exchanged student studying in London and I will have a long holiday from July 1 to August 30, which makes it possible for me to work 10 hours per week. Besides, Im patient with animals and I have a strong sense of responsibility, which I think is of great importance to a volunteer. Whats more, I have experience of caring dogs. Therefore, its easy for me to provide daily care for the dogs and assist training classes. There is no doubt that Im the right person for the job. Ill appreciate it if you can consider my application. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming高考评分原则1. 评分时，先根据文章内容和语言初步确定是否及格，再根据各档次的给分范围和要求进行评分。2. 词数少于120或多于150，从应得总分中减去2分。各档次的给分范围和要求分档百分制30分制标准极优档3010030书写规范；覆盖所有要点，内容充实，词汇丰富，有修辞意识。优秀26299729紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示出较强的语言运用能力。语言小错（拼写，标点，用词等）不超过4个。932890278726良好22258325紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。802477237322一般18217021紧扣主题。基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。672063196018较差13175717内容不完整，要点不全，行文不连贯；语言错误（尤其是大错）较多，多数句子基本正确。5316501547144313差6124012内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题，能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。37113310309278237206极差05175只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章或只写出与作文内容无关的内容。1341037231特别说明：1. 关于大错、小错的问题大错：搭配错误、词性用错（介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词）、时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、句式等错误小错：单词拼写、冠词、大小写、标点符号错误2. 发表看法要与主题内容相关；3. 异色笔、铅笔答题，一律判0分；