2017年考研英语写作密训讲义(终极版)

第 1 页 共 25 页 目 录 第一篇 2 第二篇 结构科学 内容充实 3 第三篇 实战写作 8 第四篇 应用文 8 第五篇 补充部分 23 第 2 页 共 25 页 第一篇 1 1 应对对策 1 考研写作应对对策 语言 1 词汇 常用词 think argue maintain hold believe assume 或介词短语 for my part as for me to the best of my knowledge understanding the way I see It Important crucial vital essential imperative critical necessary show indicate demlmstrate reveal unfold many a great number of 可数 a tremendous amount of 不可数 连接词 例举多项 for one thing for another still another at last to begin with moreover what is more last but not least 举例一项时 sth provides us with a good illustration a case in point as a proof as an example for example for instance in particular such as 不可用在句首 2 句型 2008 团队精神 19 分 it is teanwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want To 强调句 形式宾语 同上 It has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential Qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess 形式主 语 定语从句 2006 偶像崇拜 19 分 some like the young man in the photo express their enthusiasm by writing his name on their faces while others like the one in the hair studio spend as much as 300 yuan for a hair style modeling on that of beckham 连接词 对仗结构 2005 敬老养老 18 分 those who tried every means to avoid their duty of looking after their Elders should bear in mind that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth 定语从句 宾语从句 同上 this picture reveals a not uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grow up children in some of the families in china 双重否定表 肯定 被动表达 2003 温室花朵 17 分 the real implication of the anthor is that everyone has to meet difficulties in their life experience so we have to make adequate preparations for them 名词替代动词 系表结构 题目同上 12 分 this time the flower can not stand in the heave rain 不用缩写 第 3 页 共 25 页 表示正式 题目同上 12 分 we can not imagine a society full of adults having the ahility like seven year old children it is beyond imagination that 名词代替动词 缩写问题 题目同上 10 分 looking at it carefully the flower is protected from the rain outside the warm house 垂悬结构 主被动分清 题目同上 6 分 there are two picture one is said that a flower can not be hurt by rain and wind She grows wonderful 多一个谓语存在混乱 并列或降级 2004 终点又是新起点 16 分 the market economy and competitive society drives many people to study hard for higher academic degrees 主谓一致 2002 文化交流 4 分 a beautiful american girl is wearing chinese clothes is smiling to us 汉语思维的影响 主语从句 2 考研写作应对对策 结构 1 审题阶段 2 各段充实 3 考研写作应对对策 1 有话可说 2 不离正题 第二篇 结构科学 内容充实 2 1 考研写作应对对策 结构 注意逻辑 2 2 三段分别覆盖情况 首段三种 图画描述 现象描述 寓意象征 可以在第二段 中心段三种 原因分析 利弊分析 举例说明 尾段三种 判断评论2 after all one can always spend vacations in the country and get the best of both 3 1 选择结果 2 选择原因 3 总结 As for me I have always led a regular life 1 By everyday exercises I build up a strong body 2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward life 3 1 个人选择或实践 2 选择带来的好的后果 第 19 页 共 25 页 3 拓展 10 现实运用 As we all know children are the future of our country Their healthy growth has therefore become a serious concern among many people 1 It should be made clear that too much care is not love The real love and care for them are to prepare them for the future When faced with difficulties they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overcome the difficulties When faced with fierce competition they can employ their knowledge skills and experience to confront with their rival 2 This is the younger generation we can expect 3 1 价值体现 孩子关乎祖国的未来 2 启示 重要的原因 3 寄予希望 2007 年范文写作 首段 图画描述 This is a series of interesting and thought provoking pictures A goalkeeper who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal sees himself as a dwarf What s funnier is that the football player preparing to kick the ball regards the goalkeeper as huge as the goal The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound Both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges 中间段 寓意象征 举例说明 The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his her mind What divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings We undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM the Examination for postgraduate candidates provide a good illustration Some of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well so they even give up the chance of participating in the examination In fact the exam is not as difficult as they suppose and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final successs 尾段 建议 展望 Accordingly it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our confidence What we should bear in mind is that no one can overcome difficulties without confidence In other words We should be honest about the challenges we face only in this wa we can se a right goal challenge it and achieve it Tips 1 稳重下体的部分是精彩的语言 即文章的高分点 希望同学们学习 2 文中有下划线的部分是范文的错误 希望大家思考 然后改正 避免自己在写作时犯这 样的错误 第 20 页 共 25 页 3 再次强调 希望大家不要背范文 学习精彩的句式表达 背会 通过多练习掌握这些句 型 小作文范文及解析 2007 年 Part A 真题及解析 投诉信 however I have some suggestions for you to adopt And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration To begin with will you please prolong the time for reading In the daytime most of the students are having classes so they can t come to the library Moreover some of the books on shelves are out of date If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines we will be very pleased I really wish to have a more comfortable library Thank you for your time and consideration Yours sincerely Li Ming 2008 Part A 真题及解析 致歉信 Directions You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob your landlord there Write him a letter to 1 make an apology and 2 suggest a solution You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2 Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter Ues Li Ming instead Do not write the address 解析 Dear Bob I am writing to express my apology to you Several days ago I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house Unfortunately after I came back from Canada I found it in my luggage Was in such an hurry that I forgot to return it to you I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible If necessary I will compensate for any troubles it may cause Once again I feel so sorry for any inconvenrence caused Please accept 第 21 页 共 25 页 my apologies Sincerely yours Li Ming 2006 年 Part A 真题及解析 申请信 use li ming instead You do not need to write the adress 解析 Dear mr wang I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editior for you are your magazine for the reason of myself Two months ago I was accepted by the design and fashions as a member of it I was deeply impressed by the kindness diligence of all staff members around me But during the span of working here I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more pesceful life such as a teacher And you know that I am not an outgoing girl I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not reslly like So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit please accept my apology Yours sincerely Li ming 2009 年考研英语大纲样题应用文部分 询问信 Directions You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books Write a letter to the sales department of bookstore to ask for 1 detailed information about the books you want 2 methods of payment 3 time and way of delivery You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2 Do not sign your own name at the end Of the letter Use Li Ming instead You do not need to write the address 解析 Dear Sir Madam As a student preparing for TOEFL in the coming May I am writing to ask if you have Appoches to TOEFL complied by professor Wamg Sming and published by University College 第 23 页 共 25 页 Press in 2006 注意次序 If you have the book for sale I d like to mail order it Pleasel let me know if I can pay for it by money order or do you accept the credit card I d appreciate it if you could send me the book at your earliest convenience by EMS to the following address Li Ming Room 158 student dormitory no 8 West campus Beijing university Beijing 100081 Sincerely yours Li Ming 第五篇 补充部分 应用文 摘要参考 To begin with the purpose of the writer is to show us that 中心词一 is of grate significance yet the though provoking implications conveyed should be taken more carefully Some driving factors that contribute to the above mentioned issue may be summarized as follows Above all we may look into every possible reason except the leading cause which is 分论点一 In addition as far as the author is concerned 分论点二 is of utmost importance to both our society and ourselves To sum up by analyzing these factors illustrated in the essay we may draw the conclusion that importance should be attached to 中心词 二 看图说话作文 第一段 第二段 一 社会问题 社会现象 养老 追星 过度捕捞 母鸡 What the author illustrates in the cartoon reflects a hot topic which caused our concern the problem of draws more and more attention from many quarters Naturally it is not a coincidence Several factors could account for it and the following are the most critical ones 经济原因 Any behavior has profound economic motivation and the same goes with n n 短语 公共意识 The public fail to see the consequence of the problem conveyed by the picture above and let it go without taking any action 第 24 页 共 25 页 法律法规 The relevant authorities fail to see the consequence of and did not make related laws and regulations in time to control it 家庭教育 Not every parents is qualified for bringing up children successfully and thus their children No other case can better illustrate this point the severity of this problem than the phenomenon describes in the above picture s 二 关于人生的抽象 信心 团结 不断进取 爱心 有之如何 没有又如何 What the author illustrates in the cartoon reflects a hot topic which caused our concern it is that play a vital role in ones entire life Naturally anyone who is in possession of is likely to overcome the obstacles which are inevitable if ones are proceeding forward and achieve successive successes However there are a great number of people lacking in For them it is tough to crack the hard nuts and deal with the challenges And any minor barrier tend to be a factor that leads to their final failure The above picture is a vivid reflection of what I have discussed 三 关于社会中具体事物利弊分析 网络 汽车 What the author illustrates in the cartoon reflects a hot topic which caused our concern the wide presence of has caused mixed result It is not a difficult job to realize its advantages and disadvantages However in my opinion its attractions outweigh its shortcomings though no one can deny its disadvantages To begin with Furthermore The phenomenon described in the above picture vividly reflects what we have discussed 第三段 一 It is urgent for us to take measures to minimize and even eliminate its disadvantages The current state of affairs may have been encouraged though not justified by the lack of legal penalty It is a promising start to take legislative initiative make the behavior of illegal 二 According to the analysis above it is urgent for us to take measures to maximize its advantages and minimize its disadvantages Of the steps that we can take to make the public realize its complex is of most importance for consciousness is the precondition of action Only after being conscious can we take concrete measures to make our aim come true 祝同学们考试成功 第 25 页 共 25 页