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书面表达（满分书面表达（满分2525分分) )假设你是李华，你的朋友假设你是李华，你的朋友MikeMike与父母一道来到中国。他与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此(ync)(ync)，他，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1. 1. 邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2. 2. 提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等节目主持人的发音等3 3祝愿他学习取得进步。祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右左右2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。一、欣赏(xnshng)与学习（见巩固练习 第一题）第1页/共14页第一页，共15页。Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：第2页/共14页第二页，共15页。nDear Mike,nI am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem.nHere is my advice for improving your Chinese. Firstly, it is important to speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Secondly, it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home. Im sure you will make great progress sooner or later.nIn conclusion, I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. Wish you every success with your studies.nYours Faithfully,nLi HuaA Letter of Advice第3页/共14页第三页，共15页。Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：Raise the problemAdviceWishesFirst personPresent tenseLetter第4页/共14页第四页，共15页。Dear Mike, I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem. Here is my advice for improving your Chinese. Firstly, it is important to speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Secondly, it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home. Im sure you will make great progress sooner or later. In conclusion, I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. Wish you every success with your studies. Yours Faithfully, Li HuaA Letter of Advice第5页/共14页第五页，共15页。Useful expressions: 1. I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on . 2. Here is my advice for 3. it is important to do sth. 4. the more , the better . 5. it should be a great idea to do sth. 6. Im sure you will make great progress. 7. I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. 8. Firstly, .Secondly, . In conclusion,.第6页/共14页第六页，共15页。Learn to make sentences.（见巩固(gngg)练习 第二题） 1. 我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题，我深感遗憾。 （I am sorry to.） _ 2. 劳逸结合很重要。（combinewith） _ 3. 强烈建议你保持(boch)均衡的饮食习惯。（keep a balanced diet） _ 4. 适当的户外运动是一个好主意。（outdoor activities） _ 5. 你吃的健康食品越多，你的身体就会越好。 _Do you know any other useful expressions?I am sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on pressure.It is important to combine study with play.I strongly advise you to keep a balanced diet.It should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities.The more healthy food you eat, the better health you will have.第7页/共14页第七页，共15页。For the beginning1. I am writing to express my views concerning2. I am writing to share with you my opinion aboutFor the main body1. I strongly advise / suggest that you should because2. If I were you, I would For the ending1.I hope my advice can be of some help to you.2.I am looking forward to your good news. Useful Sentences第8页/共14页第八页，共15页。 假设你是李华，你的笔友假设你是李华，你的笔友TonyTony写信告诉你他写信告诉你他最近在学习中的一些困难。他感到学习压力大最近在学习中的一些困难。他感到学习压力大，正常生活也受到影响，如睡眠不足，身体也，正常生活也受到影响，如睡眠不足，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你给他写一封信，给他提开始亮起了红灯。请你给他写一封信，给他提供供(tgng)(tgng)帮助。帮助。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右左右2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。Learn write a letter of advice.（见巩固(gngg)练习 第三题）第9页/共14页第九页，共15页。Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：Raise the problemAdviceWishesFirst personPresent tenseLetter第10页/共14页第十页，共15页。 Para 1. Raise the problem问题问题(wnt)1：_问题问题(wnt)2：_Para 2. Advice on how to deal with pressure.建议建议1：_建议建议2：_建议建议3：_ Para 3. Wishes_have some sleeping problems have a bad healthIt is important to combine study with play.I strongly advise you to keep a balanced diet.It should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities.I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you.别忘了连接词：Firstly, .Secondly, . In conclusion,.第11页/共14页第十一页，共15页。参考参考(cnko)范文：范文：Dear Tony,I am sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on study pressure. You have some sleeping problems and a bad health, which have a bad effect on your study. Here is my advice.Firstly, it is important to combine study with play. Secondly, I strongly advise you to keep a balanced diet. The more healthy food you eat, the better your health you will have. Finally, it should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities. I am sure you will improve your problems if you accept my advice.In conclusion, I hope my suggestions will help you. Wish you every success with your study.Yours,Li Hua第12页/共14页第十二页，共15页。Thank you !第13页/共14页第十三页，共15页。感谢您的观看(gunkn)！第14页/共14页第十四页，共15页。NoImage内容(nirng)总结书面表达（满分25分)。2. 提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音(f yn)等。Structure and Points:。Structure and Points:。1. 我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题，我深感遗憾。Para 3. Wishes。感谢您的观看第十五页，共15页。
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