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第三部分第三部分-1-名师高效课堂专题四开放作文专题四开放作文专题四开放作文名师高效课堂名师高效课堂典例1(2015湖北高考)请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。Questioning is a bridge to learning.When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer,you will learn.注意:1.无须写标题;2.除诗歌外,文体不限;3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;5.词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。 名师高效课堂【参考范文】Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true,we can find the correct answer and learn more.Two years ago,our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class.Although the answer seemed a little strange,nobody but I doubted it.Thinking that his solution might be wrong,I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.Half an hour later,I managed to find the correct answer.When I showed my answer to him,the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth. 名师高效课堂典例2(2015重庆高考)请就以下话题,按要求用英文写作。If you could give your younger self one piece of advice,what would you say?要求:1.做出回答并说明理由;2.词数不少于60。【参考范文】Were I three years younger than I am now,I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals.As an old saying goes,living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass.Compared with many abstract objectives,practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.If only I could go back and reset my goals. 名师高效课堂1.在写开放性作文时必须结合生活中的具体事例。对生活中小事的叙述为后面的议论作铺垫,议论起到总结上文、点明中心的作用。议论的部分可用一般现在时,生活中的具体事例的部分应该用一般过去时;因为要求结合考生生活中的具体事例,所以用第一人称。可采用提出问题、分析问题、解决问题三段式作文。2.开放性写作的解题步骤:(1)认真审题,把握要求,找准关键句;(2)依据主线,草拟提纲,梳理文章脉络;(3)定位人称,确立时态,遣词造句组篇章。名师高效课堂3.在写作过程中应注意以下几点:(1)开放作文通常以提供一个故事材料为主,人称的使用较为灵活,考生应该依据文章提示准确定位人称;(2)确定人称、时态后,考生应将重点放在文章的遣词造句上;(3)考生应尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语或句型来灵活表达。 名师高效课堂(2014山东高考)某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1.该谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。(1)A friend in need is a friend indeed.(2)Where theres a will,theres a way.注意:1.词数120150;2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇:谚语 proverb 名师高效课堂【参考范文1】A friend in need is a friend indeedAs we all know,a friend in need is a friend indeed.Real friendship is as necessary as the air around us,which encourages us to cheer up when we face failure.The proverb reminds me of a similar experience.When I was in Senior One,I had difficulty in learning English.So I wanted to give up.Then my classmate Lily,whom I only considered as one of the classmates before,promised to give me a hand.She did all she could to help me solve the problems and showed me many good ways to study English.I worked very hard and made great progress.From then on we became good friends.At that moment I understood that a true friend should be a person who can give us confidence and encouragement,especially when we are in trouble. 名师高效课堂【参考范文2】Where theres a will,theres a wayA proverb is a simple and concrete saying popularly known and repeated,which expresses a truth,based on common sense or the practical experience of humans.Let me share with you one of my experience.A few weeks ago,my father took me to climb Mount Tai.Although I was sweating all over and became very tired,I was still struggling on the steep mountainside,because I know that I shall see the sunrise tomorrow morning.The experience reminds me of our studies.Its known that there are many “steps” ahead of us,but there is still hope like the sunrise in our hearts.So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up,we are bound to achieve success.As the proverb goes,where there is a will,there is a way.Our efforts will pay off in time.