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To make our school more attractive, do you have any suggestions?Who can make our suggestions come true ?headmasterHow should we give suggestions to him?By talking to him directly or some other ways?By writing a letter of suggestionHow should we give suggestions to him?Persuasive Writing Letter of SuggestionRead the sample writing quickly and find out whether we have missed something.April 27, 2015Dear headmaster, Im Li Hua. Im writing to advice you to make some changes about our school library. First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore, as is known to us, drinking much water is crucial to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be a water dispenser in every reading room . Last but not least, I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends. I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and make reforms in the library, so the library may take on a new look as soon as possible.Looking forward to your reply.April 27, 2015Dear headmaster, Im Li Hua. Im writing to advice you to make some changes about our school library. First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore, as is known to us, drinking much water is crucial to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be a water dispenser in every reading room. Last but not least, I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends. I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and make reforms in the library, so the library may take on a new look as soon as possible.Looking forward to your reply.Self-introductionThe purpose of writingsuggestion 1reason 1suggestion 2reason 2To express your hope First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore , as is known to us, drinking much water is important to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be a water dispenser in every reading room. Last but not least , I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends. First of allFurthermoreLast but not leastbecause We would like to have washing machines in our dormitories, The school should provide us with water heaters, washing machinewater heater1.Work in groups of six, discuss and give 2-3 suggestions and reasons about our school . 2.Write a letter to the headmaster.3.You will be given 10 minutes.to make our school more attractive0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 159004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 158004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 157004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 156004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 155004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 154004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 153004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time 0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 152004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 151004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting Time0 900018 7 6 5 4 3 2 150004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00HoursMinutesSecondsWriting TimeSelf-assessment(自我自我评评价价)Self-Checklist 1. I have five parts: DateBeginningBodyEndingSignature 口2. My letter contains three paragraphs.口3. My first paragraph contains(包含): The self-introdution 口 The purpose of writing口4. My second paragraph contains: The suggestions 口 The reasons 口5. My third paragraph expresses my wish/hope. 口6. I have checked the tense and the voice(时态和语态). 口7.I have used a range of transitional words(衔接词). 口8.I have checked my spelling. 口9.I have checked my punctuation（标点符号). 口Whose suggestions do you like most?layout(结构结构)useful expressionsHow to write a letter of suggestionHomework:Write a letter of suggestion about this classThe transitional words(衔接词衔接词) that may help you to connect the clauses:firstly, secondly, thirdlyfinallyon the one hand, on the other hand;first of all, furthermore, last but not least1.had better do sth.2. I would like to do sth.3. Its a good idea to do sth.4. If I were you, I would do sth.5. I suggest that should6. I think it would be more beneficial（有益有益的）的） if you could
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