高考英语 开放作文课件

2010年开放作文年开放作文阅卷体会阅卷体会 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.首先，首先， 在教学中应该规范学生的书写。在教学中应该规范学生的书写。 连体字注意连体字注意i，f，t，c，r，v 如如credit credot 1分分其次，其次， 不交白卷不等于胡编乱造。不交白卷不等于胡编乱造。“文章要围绕中心论点展开（与讨论内容文章要围绕中心论点展开（与讨论内容之间的关系合情合理）之间的关系合情合理）” 如：如：I can see from the picter. A big tree, two house, and the Sun. 1分分In the picture, we can see two build in it. There it a high tree grow up between in the two buid. The sky have a big sun.In my opinion, at the hard government also have grow up. We must hard work and study, we can grow up like tree. We should learn the high tree, dont afraid the bad government. 2分分 In the picture I can see two building, lift one is higher than Right one. in the middle have a tree. the tree is highest, the sun on the Right. It make me remember my childhood. I am bed kids. I like play games, so I always want go to outside, when I go to school. I feel so boring. So I didnt go to school when I want to play games, but I have a perfect and out stand teacher. She always wait me on our school door state, she tell me she so worried me. So I loved her, she give a warm heart, when I get wrong, she will tell me the trues. When have a terrible. Shen will help me for all. I think I liked the pictures trees. You will have terrible or little sickness, yet you could go on, growing a particular trees, the sun like our teachers or our parents. Believe in you-self. 2分分第三，写作套路谨慎使用。第三，写作套路谨慎使用。 2010年高考阅卷评分标准：1.围绕中心论点中心论点展开（与讨论内容的关 系）2.逻辑是否清晰，看整体通篇逻辑整体通篇逻辑3.内容是否充实，说出图画中的主要元素主要元素，但不必包括所有图中的内容，依据立意而定。4.看上下文的逻辑关系，以内容逻辑内容逻辑为首要依据。如何得分：如何得分：1.1.训练读图能力训练读图能力主要论点：主要论点：1.在逆境中成长在逆境中成长2.父母应给孩子更多父母应给孩子更多的的 发展空间发展空间3.城市发展与环境保城市发展与环境保护护4.改变不了环境，改改变不了环境，改变自己变自己如何得分：如何得分：2.2.训练语言表达能力训练语言表达能力 第四档：看不出描图与解图的关系第四档：看不出描图与解图的关系 0分：乱抄，写的内容与图片无关分：乱抄，写的内容与图片无关 4分：描述与阐述间有联系分：描述与阐述间有联系 5分：描述与阐述间有更多联系。分：描述与阐述间有更多联系。Look at the picture, we can see the sun, a tree and two buildings. And the buildings is different of we can see in oue live. The tree is between thr teo trees. It can not grow up stick. But it grow up yet and it can meet the sun.I think the picture want to tell me that we cant afrid the difficulty, if we can do it and we can solve it, we should believe in my myself. 4分分From the picture we can see there is a tree growing among the two buildings. But the tree is very tall.It is trying ti tellus that when we face the difficuty we should be brave. We must try to find solution about the difficuty.In my opinion, only in this way, can we reach our goal and have a more beautiful life. 5分分 As is shown in the picture, there are two buildings, and there is a tree between them. The tree is tall but bent. And there is a big sun in the sky.I think the picture tries to tell us that when we so something, we should find a right way. We should know what is suit us. If not, we will live difficultly, just like the tree in the picture, if choose the wrong place to live, so it is bent, and it is difficult ti live long. So o thing before we do something, we should think whether this way is suit us carefully, if we decited, cant regret. If we do something carefully, our life will be more beautiful. 7分分9分分From this picture, we can see that a tree is growing between two high buildings. What surprised me was that the tree is tall but not straight. It seems as if it cant grow up tall. What the picture wants to convey is that we should pay more attention to our enviroment. Nowadays, we can see more and more tall buildings around us, but it is difficult for us to see the green grass and tall trees. Its likely that buildings will eventually take the place of the trees. For the sake of our health, wed better leave some space for the trees, which is good for our lives. Only in this way, can we have a nice life. 12分分 As the pictures shows, a tree is growing tall under the sunlight between two buildings. Though the buildings shape manage to prevent the tree from growing tall, but the tree just follows the narrow space between the buildings, growing tall and strong. The tree in the picture taught us a philosophy in our daily life. When we come across some difficulties which seems to prevent us from being success (like the buildings in the picture), we cant just stop our steps. Instead of giving up, we should learn to be flexiblethat is, we should learn to overcome the difficulties and find the possible way that can lead us to success, just like the tree in the picture. Once we can be flexible enough, nothing can prevent us from reaching our goals. 13分分As is shown in the picture, there is a tree with a winding trunk standing in the surrounding of two buildings. As the two buildings block the way of free growing for the tree, it can only twist its body and try its best to meet the sun. Then, it succeeded! The unfortunate tree gets rid of the block of the two building and is growing in the sun happily and healthily. The picture conveys the message that success comes from trying ones best. The growth of the tree is full of setbacks as there are two buildings blocking its way of growing. When it comes to our life, there are also a lot of stones lying in the path of our success. The only thing we can do it to try our best to remove the stones. Without effort, nothing can be achieved. Without effort, no success can we gain. Remember that success comes from sweet. We should learn from the tough tree: meet the challenges and try our best! In the picture, a tree is placed between two strangely-shaped buildings. Despite the fact that the two buildings are blocking the trees growth, the tree is still growing around the edges of the buildings in order to reach the open sky and sunlight. I think that a lot can be learned from the strong-willed tree in the picture. Not only does the tree not give up in the face of difficulty, it also manages to handle the annoying situation skillfully. We are all bound to meet wit problems and challenges in our daily lives. Some give up while some choose to adopt a positive attitude and come up with the best solution. Those are the ones sure to succeed. If any difficulty tries to get in our way, we ought to shout: “ Hell we wont give up!” and do our best to solve it. Only in this way can we taste the sweet air and sunshine, just like the tree in the picture. 14分分Thanks！