原八年级英语下册 Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came（第6课时）Section B(3a3b)同步作文指导课件 （新版）人教新目标版

Unit 5What were you doing when the rainstorm came?第六课时Section B (3a3b)单元同步作文指导本单元以“谈论过去正在发生的事情”为话题，讲述了大事件发生时人们正在进行的各种活动。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们会对过去正在发生的事情进行描述，在写这类短文时，要运用相应的过去时态，如一般过去时或过去进行时等。在写作时要注意以下几点：明确中心思想，无论是看图写作，还是情景描写，都要围绕文章中心展开；要注意记叙文的几个要素，即把时间、地点、人物、事件、起因、经过、结果等交代清楚；要合理安排好写作的顺序；叙述事件时语言简洁，把文章写得生动、详实。教材中出现的相关句型：When you called，I was in the kitchen helping my mom.当你打电话时，我正在厨房帮助我的母亲。When you called，I was having a shower.当你打电话时，我正在洗澡。While you were sleeping，I called Jenny and she helped me.当你睡觉的时候，我给詹妮打了电话，她帮助了我。I was sleeping at that time.那时我正在睡觉。He was reading in the library when the rainstorm came.当暴风雨来的时候，他正在图书馆看书。While Linda was sleeping，Jenny was helping Mary with her homework.当琳达睡觉的时候，詹妮正在帮助玛丽做家庭作业。An important event that I remember well was.我记忆最深的一件重大事情是The event happened in/on.这件事情发生在When the event happened/When I heard the news of this event，I was.当这件事发生时/当我听到有关这件事的新闻时，我正在I remember this event well because.我把这件事记得很清楚，是因为句型拓展：At the time of the typhoon，I was so scared that I stayed in bed without moving.I had trouble walking home because it rained heavily.While my dad was closing the windows，my mom was sweeping the floor.On_a_cold_morning，while_I_was buying breakfast，I saw a girl in front of me buying some bread and milk.When the girl was about to leave，she found there was a poor beggar under the tree.He looked so cold and hungry that the girl wanted to help him.So the girl went close to the beggar and offered her food to him.The beggar thanked her happily and the girl went away with a beautiful smile on her face.At that moment，I was moved.I felt the touch of something bright and friendly.We should learn from her and help the people in need.【点评】语言简练，清楚地交代了活动的时间、地点和活动内容。when，while，so，at that moment的使用使故事情节连贯，逻辑清晰。found，so.that.，offer，thanked，smile等词或短语的使用，使文章增色不少，给人以身临其境感受。表达作者自己的观点。Last SundayMaryYou9：009：30read Englishlisten to the English tapes10：0011：00do math homeworkwatch TV12：001：00have lunch with Dadhave lunch with Dad2：003：30have a piano lessonhave a piano lessonLast Sunday，Mary was very busy，and so was IWhen Mary was reading English at 9：00，I was listening to the English tapes.At 10：00，while she was doing math homework，I was watching TV，because my favorite program was on at that time.After that we had lunch with our dad.From 2：00 to 3：30 pm.，Mary and I were having a piano lesson together.Both of us like playing the piano.But at 4：00 last Sunday afternoon，while Mary was visiting her friends，I was doing my homework.