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2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十四）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Passage 1Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “Ive just got one more thing achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I havent had time for social activities. I think its important to have a balance in study and a social life, so Im going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful Ill make some new friends.”We will follow Xie Leis progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.Passage 2Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning Only with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well. Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers and our hard work. They should polite Co teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsible on their teaching and help students. If both sides treat10 each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning in class will be highly efficient.Passage 3The news which the English Entrance Examination will be reformed has caused a big “earthquake” in our country. Many people, included students, are for it. But there are also some people are against it. Then, is it better to do so or not? Personally, I think the reform has between advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it can reduce students learn burden and enable English to return back to its true function. On the other hand, it will cause students to spend less time on studying English and to attached less importance to English. If so, students will not have a good knowledge of English. Whats more, if students dont have so a good ability, they will not be able to broaden our horizon and meet the future challenges.Passage 4Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(颁布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial punish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become more better.Passage 5One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway stationIt was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible hereCurious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in EnglishWhenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new worldWith the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with easeNow, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I goPassage 6Generally speaking, Im a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at home, I can be aware of the dos and donts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also youd better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.Passage 7This afternoon 1 went to see my grandfather by a busIt was very crowded and I had to standBesides me，there was a woman hold a little boy in her armsIn front of her, a young man occupies two seats，pretending to be sleepingI heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “Whats wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the manBeyond her expectations，the woman answered with a smile，“Be quietThis uncle must very tired because of hard work”The young man must have heard the wordHis face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十四）答案Passage 1Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that whathad seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “Ive just got onebeforemore thing achieve. I have been veryoccupied to work that I havent had time for to so withsocial activities. I think its important to have a balance instudy and a social life, betweenso Im going to join in a few clubs.HopefulIll make some new friends.” HopefullyWe will follow Xie Leis progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, progresswe wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.herPassage 2Good relationships between teachersor students are important to teaching and learning. Only andwith good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well. students Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers dependand our hard work. They should polite to teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other their be follow thehand, teachers should bekindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsibleon their kind forteaching and help students. If both sides treattoeach other in a friendly way, teaching and learning 去掉toin class will be highly efficient. Passage 31. which-that 2. included-including 3. people后加who 4. between-both 5. learn-learning 6. back删掉 7. on-in 或删掉on 8. attached-attach 9. so-such 10. our-theirPassage 41.became改为become 2.people后加are 3.breathe改为breathing 4.the改为a5.law改为laws6. what改为that/which 7.by改为of 8.or改为and9.their改为our 10.去掉more或more改为muchPassage 571.hold改为held 72.familiar to改为familiar with 73.or改为and 74.told前加were75.here改为there 76.search改为searching es改为came 78.cheers前面the去掉79.vividly改为vivid 80.where改为whereverPassage 61.have改为has 2.and改为or 3.am后the去掉 4.anything改为ssomething5.good改为well 6.what改为that 7.order后加to 8.rule改为rules9.the改为a 10.to改为forPassage 7 This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and Ihad to stand.Besidesme, there was a womanholda little boy in her arms. In front of Beside holdingher, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy occupiedcurious asking his mother, “Whats wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhapscuriously that或去掉ifthe woman would blame the man. Beyond herexpectations, the woman answered with mya smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young beman must have heard theword.His face turned redbutoffered one seat to the woman at once.words and 内容总结（1）2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十四）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文
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