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2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十三）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Passage 1In the countryside there are some children dropped out of school. The reasons of this are different. Some families are very poor to afford the education of their children. Some parents think useless for girls to attend school, so that their daughters lost the chance. Some children are unwilling to attend school for lack of interests in their studies. In my opinion, every child should have the chance to receive an education, whether boys and girls. Besides, the government should take effect measures to guarantee childrens right of education because we will play important roles in developing our country in the future. Passage 2One day during the period of the Three Kingdoms (220- 265A.D.), Cao Cao led his soldiers to fight battle. On his way his soldiers were all feeling thirst, but there was no water near. Cao Cao got worried in his heart, as suddenly an idea occurred in his mind.Then he let his order be past down:“There have plum trees ahead, and the plums in the trees are sweets and sour. Well get there in no time, and then youll be picking and eating it.” When the soldiers all had heard the command, they soon felt their mouths water.Passage 3Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road. Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated discussion. Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps improve the image of our city. But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution. How should we pull it down? The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city. We can move it away and keep it as long as we like. So far there had been no conclusion over the matter. Passage 4There are many people think that wealth is better than health. I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore，in the last twenty years of his life, his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life.Although the best doctors called for him, he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health, you will not be able to do what you want to do.But I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself trying to make money. Instead, take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.Passage 52015 Spring Festival is coming now. I plan buy something for my parents. What I want to give them back is a VIP card for a health club but they need enough exercise. My father works hardly as a teacher, spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on. I want to give them this card to express my thank and love. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends there. At the same time, I hope that they can take care with their health.Passage 6Now Id like to sharing with you a strange experience I had a month ago. It may sound funny, and it is true. After a days hard work I went to bed early than usual. It was about two oclock and suddenly I woke up. I heard a noise. I got out bed and went slowly downstairs. There had light in the living room. I listened careful. I could hear two men talking quietly. I thought two thieves have broken into my house. I was so frightening that I went back upstairs and phoned the police. They were arrived quickly and opened the door. It turned out that I forgot to turn my TV on. Passage 7Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often took part. Gather around here, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested. We also exchange my experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousand of people have been here when it was set up.We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activity here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of helpful. If you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here. 2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十三）答案Passage 151. dropped dropping52. of this for this 53. very too 54. thinkit 55. lostlose 56. interestsinterest 57. 去掉 an 58. andor 59. effect - effective 60. we they Passage 21.a battle 2 thirst- thirsty 3 near- nearby 4 as- when 5 past- passed 6 have- are 7 in- on 8 it- them 9 had去掉10. water- wateringPassage 3Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road. Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated the / this be hasdiscussion. Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project carrybecause it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps improve problems Besidesthe image of our city. But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one againstsolution. How should we pull it down? 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At the same time, I hope that they can take care with their healthbuy to buy 去掉back but since / because hardly hardspent spending buried buries all both thank thanks relaxing relaxed with of Passage 61.sharing改为share 2.and改为but 3.early改为earlier 4.out 后加of 5.had改为was 6.caeful改为carefully 7.have改为had 8.frightening改为frightened9.were去掉 10.on改为offPassage 71. before-ago 2. took-take 3. Gathering 4. interest后加in 5. my-our 6.when-since 7. activities 8. really-real 9. of去掉或者helpful-help 10. Much-more内容总结（1）2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十三）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文
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