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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,By Wang Yinghui,March 15th,2016,Outline composition writing to proof and rational cloze,By Wang Yinghui Outline compo,Learning Aims,1.Learn to write an outline composition.,2.Develop a good writing habit analyze organize polish.,3.Develop the abilities to solving the outline composition writing,the proof and the rational cloze.,Learning Aims1.Learn to write,What is a good writing,？,Content,:,*everything needed included which is related to your view.(,内容要完整,),Structure:,*Good beginning and ending(,好的开头结尾,),*Well organized and smoothly developed,(,结构合理,行文流畅,),Language:,*No Chinglish(,避免中文式英文,),*No Grammatical mistakes(,没有语法错误,),*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(,词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化,),What is a good writing？Cont,How to write a composition,Six steps to write a composition,Analyzing the task,Finding out the main points,Thinking of key points/phrases,Forming sentences,Combining the sentences into a passage,Copying normally,How to write a compositionSix,(,云南省,第,二,次,统测,),每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。,某英文报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的,讨论,。假定你是李华，请给报社专栏编辑,写一封信,，,呼吁大家做文明游客,。要点如下：,1.,尊重习俗；,2.,不高声喧哗,；,3.,其它。,注意,:,词数,100120,个,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。,(云南省第二次统测)每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行,【,审题,抓准信息,快速推断,】,项目,结论,体裁,_,_,话题,以,为主题,时态,_,人称,_,书信（给编辑一封信）,一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用,第一人称为主,Step1.,Analyzing the task,“文明出国旅游”,【审题抓准信息 快速推断】项目结论体裁_,【,定点,把握要点，遣词造句,】,第,1,段：点明话题,出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为,【,引入,6,分,】,【,信息,】,每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。,【,遣词,】,1.,假日游客,:,2.,出国旅游观光,:,3.,不文明行为,:,4.,引起了社会关注,:,【,造句,】,Every year,a great many,go abroad,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them,which,.,Step2.,Finding out the main points,and forming sentences,holidaymaker,go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation,behave rudely,cause a big concern,holidaymakers,for sightseeing and relaxation,behave rudely,causes a big concern,【定点把握要点，遣词造句】Step2.Finding,第,2,段：针对不文明行为三条建议,【,作文重点,12,分,】,【,信息,】,1.,尊重习俗,；,2.,不高声喧哗；,3.,其它。,【,点拨,】,扩充要点,使文章条理,【,运用,】,建议注意自己的行为。首先，,尊重习俗,；其次，,不高声,喧哗,，再次，插队是不被接受的。,【,遣词,】,1,.,尊重习俗,：,respect and follow local customs,2.,高声喧哗,：,talk loudly in public places,3.,插队：,queue jumping,【,造句,】,In my opinion,it is necessary to,watch our manners,.,First,we must_,Besides,wed better _to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that _,is unacceptable,in many countries,。,respect and follow local customs,not talk loudly in public places,queue jumping,第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点12分】respec,第,3,段：向社会呼吁,【,结尾,6,分,】,【,信息,】,呼吁大家做文明游客,【,点拨,】,适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑,【,运用,】,我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的 行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。,【,遣词,】,1.,代表国家形象：,represent our country,2.,注意：,be cautious about,3.,只有这样：,only in this way,【,造句,】,more importantly,we should,bear in mind that,we are _while abroad,so we need,to_ how we act,_,can we enjoy our trips,abroad and have beautiful memories as well.,representing our country,be cautious about,only in this way,第3段：向社会呼吁【结尾6分】representing ou,Dear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave rudely,which causes a big concern.How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manners.First,we must respect and follow local customs,Besides,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries,more importantly,we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad,so we need to be cautious about how we act,only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.,yours,LiHua,Step3.Combining the sentences into a passage,【,连句成篇,】,Dear Editor,Step3.Combining t,【,书面表达,-,短文改错,-,新完型填空三位一体,】,之短文改错,Dear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how to behave proper when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers goes abroad for sightseeing and relax,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave rudely,that causes a big concern.How to be a civilized tourist have become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manner.First,we must respect and follow local customs;However,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoiding disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries,more important,we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad,but we need to be cautious about how we act,only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and
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