乔布斯基础写作

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,无忧,PPT,整理发布,1,“,Think different,”,是史上最成功的广告之一。这并不仅仅因为它是一个精彩的创意或一支漂亮的广告，关键是，它真的起作用,90,年代，苹果陷入危机，而一次广告运动就让他们得以翻身。史蒂夫,乔布斯（,Steve Jobs,）曾说过：,“,我们只用了,15,30,或者,60,秒，就重建了苹果曾在,90,年代丢失了的反传统形象。,”,How do you introduce,Steve Jobs?,2,worlds,is the,What did he look like?,He looked optimistic and,positive.,3,worlds,is the,What were his favorite clothes,?,He liked wearing a jean,and a black sweater.,4,worlds,is the,Whats about his achievement?,He created many products,such as,ipod,iphone,and,iphone4S.,5,worlds,is the,How do you introduce a person?,Place of birth,（出生地）,Appearance/Looking,（外貌）,Name,（姓名）,Characters/qualities,（性格,/,品质）,Date of birth,（出生时间）,Education,（教育）,Interest/Hobbies,兴趣,/,爱好,Evaluation,（评价）,Achievements(,成就,),What to,write about,6,worlds,is the,写作内容,1.,史蒂夫乔布斯（,Steve Jobs,）于,1955,年,2,月,24,日出生于旧金山（,San Francisco,）。,2.,乔布斯是苹果公司（,Apple Inc.,）的首席执行官。,3.,他意志坚定，富有想象力，积极又乐观。,4.,在,1977,年他创立了苹果公司之后，他创造了许多电子产品（,electronic products,），如,iPod,，,iphone,和,ipad,。,5.,他经历了很多困难和挑战,但仍然努力工作。,6.2011,年,10,月,5,日逝世（,pass away,），这使全世界震惊和难过。,写作要求,必须使用,5,个句子表达全部内容,并将,5,个句子组织成连贯的短文。,7,worlds,is the,文体,记叙文,人称,Steve Jobs,/,He,时态,一般过去时,审题,8,worlds,is the,整合,1.,史蒂夫乔布斯于,1955,年,2,月,24,日出生于旧金山,2.,乔布斯是苹果公司的首席执行官。,3.,他意志坚定，富有想象力，积极又乐观。,4.,在,1977,年他创立了苹果公司之后，他创造了许多电子产品，如,iPod,，,iphone,和,ipad,。,5.,他经历了很多困难和挑战,但仍然努力工作。,6.2011,年,10,月,5,日逝世，这使全世界震惊和难过。,史蒂夫乔布斯,于,1955,年,2,月,24,日生于旧金山,是苹果公司的首席执官。,整合信息,出生日期，,出生地，身份。,2.,外表、性格,3.,教育背景,4.,经历、生平,5.,影响、评价,9,worlds,is the,出生于,苹果公司的首席执行官,1955,年,2,月,24,日,be,born,in/on,on,Feb.24,th,1955,月份：,(Jan.)(Feb.)(Mar.)(Apr.)(May)(Jun.),(Jul.)(Aug.)(Sept.)(Oct.)(Nov.)(Dec.),日期：,1st,2nd,3rd,4th 19th,21st,22nd,23rd,24th,the CEO,of,Apple,翻译,1.,史蒂夫乔布斯,1955,年,2,月,24,日出生于旧金山,是苹果公司的首席执行官,.,10,worlds,is the,Steve Jobs,borned,in San Francisco in Feb.24th,1955.,Steve Jobs was the CEO in Apple.,Steve Jobs,_,，,was the CEO of Apple.,（,who was,）,born,in San Francisco on Feb.24th,1955,过去分词作定语,1.,史蒂夫乔布斯,1955,年,2,月,24,日出生于旧金山,是苹果公司的首席执行官,.,of,on,was born,11,worlds,is the,Jay Chou,a famous singer,born on,Jan.,18th,1979 in Taiwan,was raised by his mother.,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,Eg,.,周杰伦（,Jay Chou,），,一个有名的歌手，,1979,年,1,月,18,日出生于台湾，是由母亲抚养大的。,同位语,12,worlds,is the,意志坚定的,富有想象力的,积极的,乐观的,determined,imaginative,positive,optimistic,2.,他意志坚定，富有想象力，积极又乐观。,He is _,_,_,and _.,=He is,not only,_ and _,but also,_ and _.,determined,imaginative,positive,optimistic,determined,imaginative,positive,optimistic,13,worlds,is the,创立,创造,例如,found/set up,create,such as,After he founded/set up the Apple in 1977,he created many electronic products,such as iPod,iPhone,and,iPad,.,=,After founding/setting up the Apple in 1977,=,Having founded/set up the Apple in 1977,such as,列举同类两个或两个以上,for example,加逗号 再举一个例子,3.,在,1977,年他创立了苹果公司之后，他创造了许多电子,如,iPod,，,iphone,和,ipad,。,非谓语，表前后关系,状语从句,14,worlds,is the,Eg,.,在,2000,年,发行（,release,）,第一张专辑（,album,）,之后，他,得到,了世界的,关注,。,Having,released the first album in 2000,he,got the worlds attention,.,注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼,非谓语,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,15,worlds,is the,4.,他经历了,很多困难和挑战,但仍然努力工作。,经历,困难和挑战,努力工作,experience/go through,difficulty and challenge,work hard,He experience many difficult and challenge,but he still work hard.,experienced,worked,difficulties,challenges,16,worlds,is the,5.2011,年,10,月,5,日逝世，这使全世界震惊和难过。,He passed away suddenly on Oct.5th,2011,it,made the whole world shocked and sad,.,He passed away suddenly on Oct.5th,2011,_,made the whole world shocked and sad,.,which,逝世,震惊和难过,pass away,shocked and sad,17,worlds,is the,Eg,.,他在不断地努力，,这,使他,出了名,。,尽量用复合句,倒装,非限制定语从句等，润色文章,非限制定语从句,He worked hard,constantly,which made him famous.,18,worlds,is the,Steve Jobs,，,born in San Francisco on Feb.24,1955,was the CEO of Apple Inc.Hes determined,imaginative,positive and optimistic.After founding/setting up the Apple Inc.in 1977,he created many electronic products,such as iPod,iPhone,and,iPad,.He experienced many difficulties and challenges,but he still worked hard.He passed away suddenly on Oct.5th,2011,which made the whole world shocked and sad.,One possible version,19,worlds,is the,成篇,&,润色,20,1.,审题,:,确定文体、人称和时态,2.,整合信息,:,把所有内容整合成,5,句,3.,翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.,连句成篇,&,检查润色,How do you do the Basic Writing?,21,worlds,is the,请根据以下信息写一篇介绍周杰伦,（,Jay Chou,），,的文章。,出 生,1979,年,1,月,18,日出生于台湾,个人经历,1,、他是,由母亲抚养大的，小时候害羞，内向,。,2,、,因为对音乐的兴趣，他三岁开始学习弹,钢琴。,3,、,在,2000,年发行第一张专辑之后，他得到 了世界的关注。,4,、,他在不断地努力，这使他出了名。,评 价,他的音乐风格是独一无二的。,写作要求,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,22,worlds,is the,Jay Chou,，,Born on Jan.,18th,1979 in Taiwan,he was raised by his mother,and was shy and quiet during his childhood,.At the age of 3,after showing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano.Having released his first album in 2000,he got the worlds attention.Because he works hard constantly,which,makes,him famous.,There is no doubt that his own music style is unique.,23,worlds,is the,Thank you!,