句子简化原则

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2011-1-6,#,1,专题：句子简化原则,2,为什么长句读不懂,?,3,4,看看,HSK,考试上我们是怎么报复的,?,5,他看书。,6,困倦的,他,在,看,一本旧,书。,7,一夜没睡的,困倦的他,目光呆滞地,在看一本,发黄了,的旧书。,8,斜靠在沙发上，没有血色的嘴唇上叼着一只不知在什么时候就早已经熄灭了的雪茄烟，一夜没睡的困倦的,他,目光呆滞地借助一盏时明时暗的摇曳的残破油灯绝望地在无精打采的,看着,一本发黄了的、却保存的颇为完整的现在在市面上很难买到的名叫学习中文的你能看懂这句不但无聊至极而且无耻之尤的话吗？的旧,书。,修饰语,具体化,重复强调,9,看看写作课上我们是怎么做的,?,10,越来越多的父母把孩子送往国外。,More and more,parents,are sending their,children,to foreign countries.,（,11,）,11,Confronting,unprecedented fierce competition,more and more wealthy,parents,are sending their,children who are not able to live all by themselves,to foreign countries,such as,United States of America,United Kingdom of England and Canada,in order to,let their offspring receive more advanced education,and therefore,engage them in a brighter future.,（,55,）,在简单句的基础上疯狂地加上,复杂的修饰成分,，或加上,复杂的修饰结构,（从句、插入等等）。,长句的原型,12,13,简化句子原则,跳修饰，找主干，头脚躯干要完整。,14,McDonalds has brought in supposedly healthier choices such as salads and toasted sandwiches worldwide and,instead of relying for most of its growth on opening new restaurants,has turned to upgrading its 31,000 existing ones.America has done best at this;under Mr.Roberts,like-for-like sales there were up by 7.5%in October on a year earlier.,McDonalds has brought in supposedly healthier choices and has turned to upgrading its 31,000 existing ones.,15,看逗号，找主谓，举例、具体数据先不读。,16,The intent of the new Harvard Center on Media and Child Health to collect and standardize studies of media violence in order to compare their methodologies,assumptions and conclusions is an important step in the right direction.,The intent is an important step in the right direction.,17,介词短语先不读。,18,Birds that are literally half asleep,with one brain hemisphere alert and the other sleeping,control which side of the brain remains awake,according to a new study of sleeping ducks.,Birds control which side of the brain remains awake.,19,形容词、定语从句先不读。,插入结构先不读。,20,什么是插入结构,?,21,Geologists believe that the Bering land bridge,over which human beings are thought to have first entered the Americans,disappeared about 14,000 years ago when massive glaciers melted and caused the sea level to rise several hundred feet worldwide.,22,Geologists believe that the Bering land bridge,over which human beings are thought to have first entered the Americans,disappeared about 14,000 years ago when massive glaciers melted and caused the sea level to rise several hundred feet worldwide.,23,Geologists believe that the Bering land bridge,over which human beings are thought to have first entered the Americans,disappeared about 14,000 years ago when massive glaciers melted and caused the sea level to rise several hundred feet worldwide.,24,Geologists believe that the Bering land bridge,over which human beings are thought to have first entered the Americans,disappeared about 14,000 years ago when massive glaciers melted and caused the sea level to rise several hundred feet worldwide.,25,Geologists believe that the Bering land bridge,000 years ago when massive glaciers melted and caused the sea level to rise several hundred feet worldwide.,26,究竟什么是插入结构,?!,27,形容词、定语从句先不读。,主谓之间出现的,成对的逗号、破折号先不读。,28,Bill Gates,the billionaire Microsoft chairman without a single earned university degree,is by his success raising new doubts about the worth of the business worlds favorite academic title:the MBA(Master of Business Administration).,Bill Gates is raising new doubts:the MBA.,29,同位语先不读。,30,简化句子原则：跳修饰，找主干，头脚躯干要完整。,看逗号，找主谓，举例、具体数据先不读。,介词短语先不读。,形容词、定语从句先不读。,主谓之间出现的成对的逗号、破折号先不读。,同位语先不读。,31,HAVE A TRY,32,And yet there are substantial sectors of the vast U.S.economy from giant companies like Coca-Cola to mom-and-pop restaurant operators in Miami for which the weak dollar is most excellent news.,And yet,There are substantial sectors of the vast U.S.economy,from giant companies like Coca-Cola to mom-and-pop restaurant operators in Miami for which the weak dollar is most excellent news,.,