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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2019/8/3,#,2020,届英语短文改错,2020届英语短文改错,1,When asking what I would like to send to the poor children living in the mountain villages,，,I think of books,.,asked,When asking what I would like,2,On the one hand,，,the children there are eager to gain knowledges,，,but they are too poor to go to school.For this reason,，,I hope we will love the books.,knowledge,they,On the one hand，the children t,3,On the other hand,，,I think everyone have the right to education and it is of great important to help those people who need it.,has,importance,On the other hand，I think ever,4,My books will give them not wisdom but also happiness.I bet that I will be pleasure to see those childrens smile faces in the sunshine after accepting the presents.,only,pleased,smiling,My books will give them not wi,5,As a old saying goes,，,“There is kindness to be found everywhere.”Lets to give presents to people whom we love or who need help.,an,/,As a old saying goes，“There is,6,Im writing to tell you something about e-hongbao,，,what is becoming popular in China.E-hongbao is actually a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during festivals or in special occasions,.,which,on,Im writing to tell you someth,7,For many young people,，,grabbing e-hongbao on their mobile phones are a fairly common and excited activity.Unlike the tradition of elders give lucky money to children,，,over half of the people sending e-hongbao are in 20s.,is,exciting,giving,their,For many young people，grabbing,8,Its just for a fun or giving best wishes,，,so the sum of money matters little.In a word,，,e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.,/,Its just for a fun or giving,9,Therefore,，,Im concerned about the safe of on-line payment.So rules and regulations needed to be improved regarding the e-hongbao system to guarantee its operation.,However,safety,need,Therefore，Im concerned about,10,Last week,，,my friends invited me go camping to see the sunrise.I felt so exciting and asked for my parents permission.Luckily,，,he agreed.We got to the mountain top that we would stay for a whole night,.,to,excited,they,where,Last week，my friends invited m,11,We were singing together while one of my friends were playing the guitar.The next morning,，,we wake up at about five oclock.We could not wait to see the sun to come up.,was,woke,We were singing together while,12,After a while,，,we saw the red color light up the sky gradual.It was so amazing scenery.The beauty in nature impressed me at that moment.,gradually,such,of,After a while，we saw the red c,13,This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in,the front,of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down,.,deeply,/,This morning on my way to scho,14,To make things bad,，,his money was lying in all direction.At once the people around rush to pick the money up,，,while the old man stood there,，,not know what to do.Surprisingly,，,everyone gave back the money they had just picked.,worse,any,directions,rushed,knowing,up,To make things bad，his money w,15,The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed.To my great joy,，,there are now a lot of nice people in your life.Its true what honesty is more important than money!,missing,lost,our,that,The old man counted the money,16,Last month,，,my good friend Mark got an expensive watch as his birthday present.He showed to everyone in our class proudly.I really envied him and I ask my mum to buy me an expensive present,.,it,asked,Last month，my good friend Mark,17,However,，,to my disappointment,，,I only got a second-hand bike at that special day.So one day while I was riding his“dear”bike back home from school,，,I passed the shop that my mum worked.,on,But,my,where,However，to my disappointment，I,18,I saw a familiar figure kneeling down in the front of it cleaned the outside steps of the shop.It was my mum!She worked so harder to raise me!Tear in my eyes,，,I got off the bike and worked together with her.,/,cleaning,Tears,hard,I saw a familiar figure kneeli,19,Mistakes are unavoidable in life.But attitudes towards it may make a difference,.,them,Mistakes are unavoidable in li,20,I still remember how my spoken English was improved.In a beginning,，,I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes.,the,making,I still remember how my spoken,21,Before long my teacher got to know about my situation.He encouraged me to speak out that I thought.Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging,，,my teacher and my classmates would help me figure out how I must have avoided them.,what,discouraged,could,Before long my teacher got to,22,I also joined in an English club to get more chances to speak.Practice made perfect.Now I can talk fluent in English.,/,makes,fluently,I also joined in an English cl,23,Just as the saying goes,，,“Every bean has its black.”Dont afraid of making mistakes,，,because success is just waiting for us.,be,Ju
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