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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,English writing,English writing,English writing,1,Dear Dr.Know，,I m pleased to write to ask for some help.I want to tell you,some problems we meet in English study.,First，some of us arent interested in English.We think,studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so,difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots,of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.,And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.,Whats more,there are so many new words we havent,meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.,Sometimes we cant understand the main idea,let alone,(更不用说),answer the questions about them.But the most,difficult thing is to write.We often use wrong words and,sentences.,Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Please,give us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Please write soon.,Mary,(the beginning),(the ending),the body（正文）,basic structure(基本结构安排),Dear Dr.Know，,2,basic steps(基本写作步骤),search,（审）,list,（列）,add,(加:开头和结尾),connect,(连),beautify,(美：谚语/例子),basic steps(基本写作步骤)search（审,3,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会,4,如何度假,调查报告,倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,如何度假stay at homeworkvisit fri,5,A lot of people travel.,Some people stay at home.,Some other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),A lot of people travel.列(li,6,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,（the beginning）,A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,（the ending）,加(add),加首尾,，使结构完整。,可以采取,总分总,结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。,How do people spend their vaca,7,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it,a lot of people travel.,And,some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.,Also,some,other people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连(connect),How do people spend their vaca,8,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇,甚至善用,高级词汇,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇,9,Which is better?,他们在海滩上听音乐。,A They listened to the music on the beach.,B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,Which is better?他们在海滩上听音乐。A,10,Which is better?,我希望你能帮助我。,A I wish you can help me.,B Im looking forward to your help.,Which is better?我希望你能帮助我。A,11,Which is better?,他们很早就到了。,A They arrived early.,B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?他们很早就到了。A,12,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,A His dog was saved at last.He was very surprised.,B To his surprise,his dog was saved at last.,Which is better?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到,13,A I think learning English is interesting.,B I find it really fun to learn English.,我认为学英语很有趣。,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment.,B Its our duty to protect the environment.,A I think learning English,14,方法二:活用多种句型,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法二:活用多种句型Writing skills（“写”的技,15,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young.,She cant carry the heavy box.,B She is too young to carry the heavy box.,C She is so young that she cant carry the,D She is not old enough to carry the,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is v,16,方法三:妙用关联词,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法三:妙用关联词Writing skills（“写”的技巧,17,1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats more,not onlybut also,neithernor,2.表示选择:or,eitheror,3.表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a result,5.表示条件:if,unless,6.表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand,7.表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth,8.表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end,9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact,10.表示结论:all in all,altogether,in a word,generally speaking,in short,关联词(connection words),1.表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bo,18,Lets try,_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.,He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.,We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking.,_,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.,Though,Although,instead,like,First,Next,Finally,At last,Lets try_ I am ti,19,How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it,a lot of people travel.,And,some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.,Also,some,other people visit friends or parents.,However,a few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.,连(connect),美(beautify),How do people spend their vaca,20,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.,According to it,most people,choose to travel to
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