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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/5/26,#,话题写作,（九）,快乐成长,第一篇教材考点梳理,话题写作（九）第一篇教材考点梳理,1,【,话题点睛,】,该话题主要包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。,涉及的要点,:,(1),成长体验及感悟,;,(2),成长烦恼与困惑,;,(3),关于更好地成长的方法与建议。,【话题点睛】该话题主要包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。,2,【,参考谚语,】,1.Time flies.,时光易逝。,2.All roads lead to Rome.,条条大路通罗马。,3.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.,世上无难事,只要肯登攀。,4.God helps those who help themselves.,天助自助者。,常用表达,【参考谚语】常用表达,3,【,亮点句型,】,成长经历,1.,Im sorry to hear that you didnt pass the exam because of your illness.,2.,As long as you work hard,you can be a success.,3.,We believe youll become the top student later if you do your best to study math.,4.,We need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.,【亮点句型】,4,成长感悟,1.,As the saying goes,failure is the mother of success.,2.,Study plays a key role in their life.,3.,Most students believe its necessary to study hard.,4.,Reading can make our life colorful.,5.,There are many ways to realize our dreams.,成长感悟,5,成长建议,1.,You can learn a lot from the show.,2.,You should treat it in a proper way.,3.,You should study hard at knowledge,pay attention to social news and develop interest and hobbies.,4.,You should often communicate with your family.,成长建议,6,.,根据汉语意思完成句子。,1.,你一犯错,就必须马上改正它。,As soon as you,you must correct it at once.,2.,每个青少年都应该为未来做个好的计划。,Each teenager,make a good plan for the future.,3.,我们将能够提升我们的能力来解决问题。,We will be able to,our ability to,.,基础写作,make a mistake,is supposed to,improve solve problems,.根据汉语意思完成句子。基础写作make a mistak,7,4.,一些学生花费很多时间看电视。,Some students,much time,.,5.,对他们来说,读书很无聊。,It is,for them,books.,spend watching TV,boring to read,4.一些学生花费很多时间看电视。,8,.,用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。,1.,没有必要放弃你的爱好。,(give up),2.,有一天,我们将会实现我们的梦想。,(achieve ones dream),3.,我的父母和老师努力鼓励我。,(try to do sth),4.,听说你下学期要来中国学习,我很高兴。,(be glad to do),There is no need to give up your hobbies.,We will achieve our dreams one day.,My parents and my teacher tried to encourage me.,Im very glad to hear that you will study in China next term.,.用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。There is n,9,5.,你必须在你的业余时间做更多的运动。,(in ones spare time),假如你是李华,你的好朋友,Lisa,不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了,她为这次失败所困扰,无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件,建议她正确看待达人秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果,;,提醒她实现梦想的途径有很多,只有努力才能获得成功,;,鼓励她好好学习,也不要放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天。,典例分析,You must do more sports in your spare time.,5.你必须在你的业余时间做更多的运动。(in ones s,10,要求,(1),包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,;,(2),词数,:60-80(,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,);,(3),不得出现你的真实姓名、校名和地名。,要求,11,Dear Lisa,Im sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show.,Hope youll be happy every day!,Yours,Li Hua,Dear Lisa,Hope youll be happy,12,【,思路点拨,】,1.,要点提炼,:,主题是鼓励经历失败的朋友重拾信心,可从以下几个方面展开,:,(1),鼓励对方以正确的方式面对失败,享受过程,正视结果,;,(2),实现梦想的方式不是只有一种,;,(3),失败是成功之母,鼓励对方善于从失败中学习。,2.,确定时态,:,一般现在时,3.,确定人称,:,第二人称,【思路点拨】,13,【,写作架构,】,【写作架构】,14,【,佳作欣赏,】,Dear Lisa,Im sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show.Here are some of my opinions.,From my point of view,you should treat it in a proper way,and enjoy the process instead of the result.Besides,there are many ways to realize our dreams.As the saying goes,failure is the mother of success.You can learn a lot from the show.As long as you work hard,【佳作欣赏】Dear Lisa,15,you can make your dreams come true.Last but not least,as a student,you should study hard first.Meanwhile,there is no need to give up your hobbies.Just relax and have fun!,Hope youll be happy every day!,Yours,Li Hua,you can make your dreams come,16,【,名师点评,】,1.,开头第一句“,Im sorry to hear that,”,表达了对朋友的同情,然后开始给对方提建议。,2.,从句式上看,文章运用了灵活多样的句式。如,:there be,句型,as long as,引导的条件状语从句等。过渡词语,(,如,besides,last but not least,meanwhile),的运用,使文章衔接自然。,3.,文中运用了谚语“,Failure is the mother of success.,”,为文章增色不少。,【名师点评】,17,实战演练,A2019,遂宁,在成长过程中,青少年面临越来越多的烦恼,主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇,80,词左右的短文。,要点提示,(1),导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因,:,学业,与他人相处,(2),减少压力的措施,:,积极参加课外活动,实战演练A2019遂宁,18,多与他人交流沟通,(3),简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。,(,至少一点,),注意,(1),文章开头已给出,不计入总词数,;,(2),文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯,;,(3),不可逐词翻译,应有独自的见解并适当发挥,;,(4),文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。,多与他人交流沟通,19,We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.,Here are two main reasons.One is the problems in schoolwork.The other is the problems in getting on with other people.However,too much pressure is not good for teenagers development.So how to deal with these pressure?Taking part in the after school activities is a very useful way.Besides this one,more communication often works.,All in all,we should try our best to deal with the stress and keep healthy in body and mind.,We teenagers have more and mor,20,B2019,徐州质检,假设你是,Tim,在美国游学期间与住家孩子,Simon,、邻居孩子,Daniel,成为好友,并结伴表演京剧,大闹天宫,。几天前,因,Simon,嘲笑,Daniel,两人发生争吵。现在,Simon,想修复友谊,但不知如何处理,所以特地发来邮件寻求你的帮助。请根据以下要点,给,Simon,回一封电子邮件。,B2019徐州质检,21,现状分析,嘲笑他人是错误的,;,很高兴,Simon,想改变现状,;,提供建议,1.,应该尽快道歉,;,2.,随邮件发送一个视频节目,建议和,Daniel,一起看,;,节目简介,1.,节目名称为友谊,(Friendship);,2.,以孙悟空,(Monkey King),为原型,让自己想起在美国时三人一起的愉悦时光,;,节目最后,孙悟空做总结。,阐述希望,1.,2.,现状分析嘲笑他人是错误的;很高兴Simon想改变现状;提供建,22,注意事项,(1),邮件须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,;,(2),孙悟空讲的话用,2-3,句展开合理想象,作适当发挥,;,(3),词数,90,词左右,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,注意事项,23,Dear Simon,Thank you for your letter.I hop
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