人教版中考英语议论文写作讲解课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,2,#,中考英语议论文写作讲解,2024/11/19,中考英语议论文写作讲解2023/9/25,1,评分标准,一级：,1,、所写内容符合所提供的各种信息，有创意；,2,、句子正确通顺，或只有个别小错；,3,、单词拼写错误不超过,4,个。,二级：,1,、所写的内容与所提供的各种信息基本符合；,2,、句子基本正确。表达错误较少，表达较通顺；,3,、单词拼写错误不超过,6,个。,三级：,1,、所写的内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符；,2,、句子表达错误较多，但尚可读懂；,3,、单词拼写错误不超过,10,个。,四级：,1,、所写内容与试卷提供的信息不符；,2,、只有少数句子表达正确；,3,、拼写错误在,10,个以上。,五级：,只有个别词语可读，但通篇不知所云。,2024/11/19,评分标准一级：2023/9/25,2,写作步骤,一：审题。,看清题目要求，读懂题目要求，抓住要点。初步确定时态，人称。,二：写提纲。,考虑所要选用的单词，短语，句型。扬长避短，避难就易。,三：连句成文,。根据作文要求，判断先写什么，后写什么。划分段落，使用连词，确定行文层次，长短句结合。,四,:,修改。,检查全文是否符合要求，行文是否流畅，语句是否通顺。检查包括单词拼写、大小写、时态、语态、单复数等。,2024/11/19,写作步骤一：审题。看清题目要求，读懂题目要求，抓住要点。初步,3,Part I:Model analysis,一篇：,【,写作要求,】,现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“,My Low-carbon Life”,为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”,。,内容包括：,1.,地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。,2.,你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。,3.,号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。,作文要求：,1.,不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。,2.,语句连贯，词数,80,个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。,My Low-carbon Life,The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.,2024/11/19,Part I:Model analysis一篇：2023,4,范文,My Low-carbon Life,The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.Many trees are cut down,and water and air are polluted.,As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.,Firstly,I often walk to school.It can reduce air pollution.Secondly,I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom.,Thirdly,I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.,2024/11/19,范文My Low-carbon Life2023/9/25,5,第一步：审题,【,写作要求,】,现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“,My Low-carbon Life”,为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。,1.,作为一个中学生,:,表达观点的角度,2.,节约资源，保护环境,:,措施综述,3.My Low-carbon Life:,题目必须写,注意：,充分利用语料,表达自己观点时，可用群体代替个体，增强说服力。,如：用,As a student,代替,I,3.,题目中给出比较笼统的措施时，需在在文章,body,部分具体化。,如：“保护环境”具体化为“步行上学”，“随手关灯”等。,4.,如给出题目，则一定要写题目。,2024/11/19,第一步：审题【写作要求】现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作,6,第二步：列提纲,1.,地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。,第一段（总）：由现象引出主题,-,保护环境,2.,你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。,第二段（分）：保护环境的具体方法,具体化,3.,号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。,第三段（总）：升华主题,描绘美好蓝图,列提纲需注意事项：,写出关键词，可能用到的句式。,确定文章人称。,确定时态。,根据语料，划分段落。,2024/11/19,第二步：列提纲1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐,7,Part II:Writing framework,第一段：,综述,。概括性强，最多两句话引入主题，字数,15-25,字。,第二段：,正文,。文章主体部分。层次性强，一定要有过渡性连接词连接，每个层次都要有主题句，展开说明，最多展开,3,句话。字数,50-60,。,第三段：,结尾,。紧扣主题，两句话内结束，升华主题。字数,20-30,。,合理的分段：,文章结构清楚,行文逻辑更强,2024/11/19,Part II:Writing framework第,8,范文赏析,My Low-carbon Life,The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.Many trees are cut down,and water and air are polluted.,（提出现象）,As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.,（引入主题）,（第一个层次）,Firstly,I often walk to school.,（主题句）,It can reduce air pollution.,（说明局）（第二个层次）,Secondly,I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom.,（第三个层次）,Thirdly,I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.,I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.,（升华主题）,2024/11/19,范文赏析 My Low-carbon Life2023/9/,9,Part III:Imitative writing,Although the world develops much faster and better,the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done,.(,由现象引出主题,),Firstly,save water.Water is the source of life.No water,no life.So its very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it,but also make full use of it.,(,具体化,),Secondly,save electricity.It is crucial.We cant imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.,（具体化）,The more we do,the better the environment will be.,（升华主题）,2024/11/19,Part III:Imitative writing,10,高分句式：,1.so that,如：,The resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.,改写为：,we have wasted so many,resources that the environment is worse and worse.,2.not only but also,如：,Firstly,save water.Secondly,save electricity.,改写为：,what we can do is not,only,save water but also save electricity.,3.It is+adj for sb to do sth,如：,In order to protect them,something must be done,改写为：,it is necessary for us to do something to protect environment.,2024/11/19,高分句式：1.so that 2023/9/25,11,Part III:Imitative writing,请要求完成下列任务：,根据题目，写出可能用到的词组。,确定时态。,根据题目，写出可能用到的句型。,根据语料分段。,近来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。其中垃圾食品、电子游戏等是影响健康的重要因素，请以“,Keep Healthy”,为题谈谈你的看法。,要求：,1,、列举中小学生面临的健康问题。,2,、谈谈怎样才能保持健康。,3,、,80,词左右，开头已给出，不计入总次数。,2024/11/19,Part III:Imitative writing请要求,12,Part III:Imitative writing,1.,常用短语：,be good for,be bad for,healthy food,more than,less than,，,as often as possible,2.,时态：,在成文过程中，此类文章一般用一般现在时,2024/11/19,Part III:Imitative writing1.常,13,Part III:Imitative writing,1.Enough sleep is good for our healthy.,2.I think swimming is one of the best exercises.,3.Lets eat healthily,do more exercise,and have enough sleep.,4.Generally speaking,people should pay more attention to health.,5.Nowadays,almost everyone is more concern about money t