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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,Skills in Compositions,-complex structures,and,advanced expressions,1,第1页,第1页,写作评分原则：,第五档（,25,30,分）：,较好地完毕了试题要求任务。,*对题中所提供信息进行了恰当描述,清楚地表示了自己观点并进行了充足合理论证。,*语法结构和词汇选取恰当、丰富。,*语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强语言利用能力。,*有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全文结构紧凑。,2,第2页,第2页,How to write a good composition,技 巧,1.,学会使用丰富句式,2.,学会使用较高级词汇,实战演练,3.,学会使用适当连词,3,第3页,第3页,一、学会使用丰富句式,“既求达，也求雅”已成为高考高分评判依据，因此要考究句式结构改变，避免单调、呆板和千篇一律句子，尽也许多使用各种句式，使句子丰富、灵活。,4,第4页,第4页,使用分词,Once it is held,it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern.,Once,held,it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing,making,it more prosperous and modern.,Faced with,the environmental problems,to be solved,some people dont approve of it.,Weighing,the advantages and disadvantages,we should welcome the Olympic Games.,5,第5页,第5页,使用定语从句,Many pollution problems can be more serious,and it can eventually do damage to our surroundings.,Many pollution problems can be more,serious,which can eventually do damage,to our surroundings,.,More visitors from all over the world will flood into China,which,financially benefit Beijing.,Whats more,more people will be attracted,to Beijing,which will contribute to the,development of tourism to a great extent.,6,第6页,第6页,使用,with,结构,When the number of tourists is increasing,traffic will become more crowded.,With,the number of tourists,increasing,traffic will become more crowded.,With,more and more visitors,going,to Beijing,tourism will be,flourishing,.,With everyone doing his bit,the game will be a great success.,7,第7页,第7页,使用被动句,Measures should,be taken,to avoid the bad effect mentioned above.,Only in this way can we,hold a successful,Olympic Games.,使用倒装结构,8,第8页,第8页,二、学会使用较高级词汇,用词准确、得体是写作前提，在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既能够表达出作者语言驾驭能力，又有助于取得高分。,9,第9页,第9页,How to use advanced expressions,In my opinion,it is,difficult,to hold the,Olympics.,In my opinion,it is,challenging,to hold,the Olympics.,It will have a,great,effect on the development of Beijing.,far-reaching profound significant,10,第10页,第10页,In a word,the Olympic Games will make,Beijing more,beautiful,.,fascinating,In the long run,hosting the Olympics,will play,a,necessary,part in,prospering economy as well as booming tourism.,an indispensable,The advantages of the Game,is over heavier than,its disadvantages.,outweigh,11,第11页,第11页,Tourism is,becoming a booming industry,with the development of the city.,China will,enjoy a boom,in economy.,增进,繁荣经济,旅游发展,Some students see it as a good opportunity to,boost economy,and,accelerate the pace,of the,construction of our modern society.,Holding the Olympic Games will,promote the development of economy,making the city,more,booming,and modern.,12,第12页,第12页,“中国位于太平洋西岸，地大物博，历史悠久，面积,960,万平方公里”。,China lies on the west bank of the Pacific,Ocean.It is very big and has a lot of things.,Its history is very long,and its area is 9.6 million square kilometers.,Practice to challenge yourself,13,第13页,第13页,China,which,lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean,is rich in,natural resources.It is a great country,with a long history,covering,an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,China,a large country,with a long history,lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean.,It,is abundant in,natural resources,covering,an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,14,第14页,第14页,Replace the underlined expressions,Among all the people going to work,car,drivers,make up,18%.,2.The Internet can help us,finish,many tasks.,3.The library is,important,to us.,4.One can only become a skilled one after,many,failures.,5.Last year,saw,a more and more fierce competition in the job market.,6.He,tried to,pass the exam,but failed.,complete,accomplish,fulfill,vital,essential,endless,countless,numerous,witnessed,attempted to,amount to,account for,get through,15,第15页,第15页,7.Some students dont,value,their money at all.,8.It is also essential that you,get,some skills for taking exams.,treasure,cherish,acquire,obtain,gain,9.It would take me a great deal of time,which,would,surely,invite numerous inconveniences,to me.,undoubtedly,unquestionably,10.More and more people,come to,big cities,which causes serious housing problems.,flood into,crowd into,pour into,definitely,16,第16页,第16页,A Campaign Speech,Im sure I,well,satisfy the conditions for working as chairman.Since senior middle school,Ive been,serving as,monitor of my class,which has offered me,invaluable,experience.More importantly,my job has always been,sung high praise of,by both my classmates and teachers,which has fully proved my strong,capability,of being a student leader.As far as my character is concerned,Im optimistic,enthusiastic,17,第17页,第17页,easygoing and always ready to offer help.In addition,I enjoy,a variety of,hobbies,ranging from,literature to sports.All of the above demonstrates that I can be a qualified and,competent,chairman.,If I were elected,I would try every means to,cope with,whatever problem we might,encounter,.Moreover,tak
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