资源描述
单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,如何写出,高分好句,WRITING,凑长句的技巧：,5keys,who,，,when,，,where,，,what,，,why,1,2,4,举个例子：,The man lived in Guangdong.（5 words）,who,-the man，from UK，Felix,when,-6 years ago,where,-Guangzhou，Guangdong,what,-English teacher,why,-he loved teaching,加工后：,Six years ago an（tall）English man named Felix lived（happily）in Guangzhou（a big city in Guangdong）as an English teacher because he loved teaching（so much）.,(20 words),另外还可以添加,adj.,和,adv.,练习：,原句：,We stood outside for 20 minutes.,加工后：,This morning we stood still on the bus stop in front of the school for nearly 20 minutes because of the traffic jam.,积累：,表示因果关系的连词：,原因,for/for the reason that,due to/owing to/thanks to,because/because of,as/since,；,in that,；,result from,结果,as a result of,；,there for/,thus/so/so that,consequently/as a consequence,accordingly,因此，相应地,inevitably,不可避免地,加入环境，动作，情感，时间，地点，过渡,sb.,with sth.in ones hand,doing B,did A,doing C,feeling/looking,例如：男孩跳入湖中嬉戏,冲向湖边,rush to the lake,脱掉衣服,take off his clothes,跳入水中,jump into the water,原句：,The boy rushed to the lake,took off his clothes and jumped into the water.,升级版：,Having taken off his clothes,the boy rushed to the lake and jumped into the water.,练习：歌手唱歌,扫视观众,glance at the audience cast a glance at the audience,深吸一口气,take a deep breath,开始演唱,begin to sing,（,1,）,The singer glanced at the audience,took a deep breath and began to sing.,（,2,）,After castinga glance at the audience,the singer took a deep breath and began to sing.,练习：老人静坐,坐在地铁上,sit on the subway,盯着手机,stare at his phone,皱着眉头,knit his brows/frown,（,1,）,The old man sat on the subway,staring at his phone and knitting his brows.,（,2,）,Sitting on the subway,the old man stared at his phone,knitting his brows.,（,3,）,Absorbed in reading,the man sat still on the subway,frowning.,包含多动作的句子：,（,1,）,Sb.did A,did B and did C.,（,2,）,Sb.did A,doing Band doing C.,（,3,）,Doing Band C,sb.did A.,（,4,）,Having done A,sb.did B and C.,（,5,）,Sb did A and B,doing.,（,6,）,After/Before doing A,sb.did B to do C.,例句：（,1,）,I climbed over the highest mountain,found my way into the deep forest and brought back the princess.,（,2,）,Carrying the best sword,I went into the deep forest and brought the princess back.the denseforest,bringing back the princess.,（,3,）,I climbed over the highest mountain and found my way into the dense forest to bring back the princess.,（,4,）,After climbing over the highest mountain,I found my way into the dense forest to bring back the princess.,2,1,5,6,4,3,加情感：,excited/thrilled(,兴奋的,)joyful/overjoyed(,快乐的，欣喜若狂的,)amazed(,惊讶的,)delighted(,高兴的,)satisfied(,满足的,)sacred(,害怕的,)worried(,担心的,)ashamed(,羞愧的,)nervous(,紧张的,)depressed(,沮丧的,),例句,（,1,）,Depressed and helpless,the princess cried out.,（原因,/,伴随）,（,2,）,He finally found his way into the forest,exhausted but excited.,（结果）,（,3,）,He brought back the princess,feeling proud and excited.,（伴随）,加个工具,with sth.in ones hand with sth.on ones head with the help of sb.with a smile on his/her face,例句：,He climbed over the hill with a sword in his hand.,He,with the help of an elf(,精灵,),，,saved the princess.,加过渡,表“时间、用时”,马上,:in no time,immediately,那一刻,:at that moment/time when/while/as,早,/,中,/,晚,:early in the morning,in the late afternoon,the next/following morning,表“先后”然后,:(and)then,after that,不久,:after a while,soon afterwards,shortly after,before long,最终,:at last,in the end,finally,eventually,Lorem Ipsumis,Lorem Ipsum,Lorem Ipsum,Lorem Ipsum,Lorem Ipsum,70%,70%,70%,70%,70%,多个状语,before long,时间,into the forest,地点,to our surprise,过渡,with the help of an elf,工具,feeing proud and excited,情绪,例句：,（,1,）,To our surprise,he,with the help of an elf,saved our princess,feeling proud and excited.,（,2,）,Carrying the best sword,he eventually found his way into the dense forest,exhausted but excited.,（,3,）,Before long,he,with the best sword in his hand,saved our princess,finding their way through the woods.,THANK YOU,
展开阅读全文