书面表达-如何扩充句子课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语书面表达指导,短话长说,英语书面表达指导 短话长说,高考评分标准,第五档（,21-25,）：完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，,覆盖所有的内容要点,，用了,丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇,有少些错误，全篇,流畅，连词使用较好,。,第四档（,16-20,）：,完全完成试题规定的任务,，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，,语法和词汇基本正确，,有少些错误，主要是,想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。,高考评分标准第五档（21-25）：完全完成试题规定的任务,第二档（,6-10,）：未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。,第一档（,1-5,）：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。,0,分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。,第三档（,11-15,）：大错（时态、句子结构等）超过,五六,处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。,第二档（6-10）：未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，,高考作文评分原则,形式上,胜人一筹,，也就是文章结构，谴词造句,内容要点，发挥想象，适当拓展,高考作文评分原则,一、利用文章总体模板,1.,文章开头的总体交待,引出主题,A.Recently,we had a discussion about,B.we carried out a survey of,C.When it comes to the topic whether,2.,呈现不同的观点,陈述观点,A.Some of them are in favor of the idea that,However,others hold a completely opposite opinion.,B.Some people firmly believe that.Others argue that,呈现论据时常用的连接词,inthefirstplace,_(,原因一,).inthesecondplace,furthermore,_(,原因二,).Soitgoeswithoutsaying that_(,观点一,).,Some people holdtheideathat_(,观点二,).Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand,，,_(,原因一,).Ontheotherhand,_(,原因二,).Therefore,there isno doubt that_(,观点二,).,3.,结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语,总结观点,As far as Im concerned,/From my point of view,/To sum up,如何从形式上胜人一筹？,一、利用文章总体模板1.文章开头的总体交待 引出主,二，句式多样，文章增“,靓,”,二，句式多样，文章增“靓”,Rewrite the sentences,1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.,2.I will be given another chance.I will succeed.,3.He wants to improve,his,English.He studies hard.,方法,1.,使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档,When they arrived at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.,If I am given another chance,I will succeed,.,Given another chance,I will succeed.,In order to improve his English,he studies hard.,Rewrite the sentences 1.They,7,方法,2.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,1.He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.,Not until,2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.,Only,3.He is clever but he does not work hard.,as/though,4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.,On the other side of the street,Complete the sentences,he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,Clever,he is,he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,方法2.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力1.He didn,8,方法,3.,尝试多样化表达方式,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.,All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.,_,which_,With the development of _,_,_,_so _ that_,_,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant,Beijing,peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient,pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays,Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient,pleasant and colorful.,方法3.尝试多样化表达方式 In recent years,9,句式多样,文章增“,靓,”,1.,使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档,2.,巧用倒装增强句子表现力,3.,尝试多样化表达方式,句式多样1.使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档2.,10,三,.,善用高级词汇,Which is better?,1,周末我们会有很多作业要做,.,A.We have endless homework to do at the weekend.,B.We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.,2,在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象,.,A.Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr Moore.,B.Of all my teachers,Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression.,三.善用高级词汇Which is better?1 周末,3,高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。,A.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very tired.,B.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very exhausted.,4.,他没听我课上讲的东西。,A,He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.,B,He didnt listen to what I said in the class.,3 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力尽。4.他没,如何从形式上胜人一筹？,一、利用文章总体模板,二，句式多样，文章增“靓”,三,.,善用高级词汇,如何从形式上胜人一筹？一、利用文章总体模板,如何在内容上言之有物？,如何在内容上言之有物？,方法,添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,、附加成分作解释说明,例一：这样更方便照顾父母。,拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。,原因,as they are getting older and older.,例二：因广告过多，影片放映晚点,。,拓展：这导致观众不耐烦甚至恼火,。,后果,which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.,making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.,It will be much more convenient to look after your,parents,There were so many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film,方法添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容、附,、附加成分作解释说明,条件,例三：安全出口（,exit,）标志不明，存在安全隐患,(potential hazard,）。,拓展：万一遇到危险，观众难以逃脱。,In case of danger,it is difficult for the audience to escape,.,The exit is not clear,so there will be potential hazard,.,、附加成分作解释说明条件 例三：安全出口（exit）标志不,、附加成分作解释说明,(1),表达不同原因的概括语,There are several reasons for this.,The reasons are as follows.,The reason foris that,The reason why is that,(2),表示无需说明的事实的概括语：,It goes without saying that,Its needless to say that,Needless to say,Its obvious that,、附加成分作解释说明(1)表达不同原因的概括语,加谚语,(Proverb),我们应该集中注意力于学习,We should focus our mind on our studies.,As the saying goes,“,.”,We should focus our mind on our studies.,.,怎么添加谚语？,方法,添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容,No pains,no gains,加谚语(Proverb)我们应该集中注意力于学习We s,.,加谚语,(Proverb),锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise.,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”,It is good for us students to take exercise.,2.,添加谚语,.加谚语(Proverb)锻炼对学生有好处 It is g,常用谚语,(Proverb),Strike the iron while it is hot.,趁热打铁。,Think twice bef