读后续写样题专题培训课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,读后续写,:,提供一篇,350,词以内,的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇,150,词左右的,短文。（满分,25,分）,新高考考试说明,评分原则,本题总分为,25,分，,分,5,个档次给分,第五档,(21-25),与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理,。,内,容丰富，,应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。,所,使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能,有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。,两个要弄明白的问题：,原文,有什么用？,续写,要写什么？,原文,理解,续写文,模仿,素材,素材,情节基调,核心矛盾,故事框架,语言设定,潜伏信息,高,融洽度,tone(情节基调),language characteristics(,语言特征,),content(,内容,:plot development,-“W&H”),Step 1.,Read for basic information,1.tone(情节基调):,?,A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.,funny,a happy ending,Step 1.,Read for basic information,2.Language characteristics(,语言特征,),:?,A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.,.“It looks like youve got a problem,”Arthur said.,“Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”,Story narration(故事旁白),Conversation-direct speech(直接引语),:simple(,简单,),Step 1.,Read for basic information,2.Language characteristics,:,vivid(,生动,),Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.,Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.,.,Step 1.,Read for basic information,one day,along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,Arthur,&a young man,Arthur,helped,a,young man carry a suitcase,but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery.,3.content(,内容,:plot development,-“W&H”),How will the story develop?,When:,Where:,Who:,What:,How:,Passage A mainly tells:,One day,Arthur helped,a,young man carry a suitcase,on Park Avenue near the First National Bank,but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery.,Step 2.Read for,plot development clues,(情节发展线索),Find out the key clues(,线索,)based on the beginnings:,Para1:,As he,was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”,Para2:,The taxi,stopped in front of,the Police Station,and Arthur.,_ i,s inside the suitcase?,What,Step 3.Predict possible,plot development,In a group predict how the story will develop:,(tone:funny,a happy ending,),The underlined words:,Park Avenue,the,young man,suitcases,in the back seat,loud noise of an alarm,the bank,robbery,the shouts,people,the bank thief,money,other,things,箱子里,所属人,Young man,身份,可能情节发展,1,Money,the young man,thief,碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾,1）,2,not thief,碰巧把刚从银行取钱赶路的人当劫犯，最后到警局传来抓到劫犯消息,3,another man,thief,碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人钱的小偷，最后到警局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在,Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷,4,not thief,路遇一个路人帮人搬运装满钱的行李箱，而,Arthur错把路人当劫犯，最后澄清消除误会,5,Other things,the young man,thief,错把普通小偷当劫犯，最后帮助抓到该小偷,6,not thief,错把路人当劫犯（即结尾,2）,7,another man,thief,碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人东西的小偷，最后到警局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在,Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷,8,not thief,路遇一个路人帮人搬运普通行李箱，而,Arthur错把路人当劫犯，最后澄清消除误会,Possible version 1:,As he was running,Arthur heard,the young man,shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”,Arthur instantly realized that,the young man,might be,the bank thief,.,So he ran faster.The moment,he stopped a taxi,he jumped in with,the suitcase,and,said to the driver,.“Please hurry to the Police Station.The man,shouting,behind is,the bank thief,.”,The driver followed him and raced away.,The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur,directly went in and,told the police what he happened to him.,Obviously,the police had already learned about the,robbery,.A,s Arthur expected,they found a large sum of money inside after opening,the suitcase,.Then they asked Arthur to describe,the young man,.,Later,with,the help of Arthur,the police,successfully,caught the robber.B,oth,the bank,and the police,thanked Arthur a lot.(151 words),Possible version 1:,Possible version 2:,As he was running,Arthur heard,the young man,shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Suddenly,realizing he himself might be misunderstood as the bank robber,Arthur,ran faster until,he stopped a taxi,.He got into it with,the suitcase,and said to the driver in one breath:“The man,shouting,behind is,the bank thief.,Please hurry to the Police Station.”Following Arthur,t,he taxi raced away.,Possible version 2:,The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur rushed into the office.Just as,he,was describing what had happened near,the bank,on,Park Avenue,Arthur,heard a voice outside,“Help!Help!”To his surprise,it was,the young man,.He had followed Arthur in another taxi.It turned out that inside,the suitcases,were just some clothes and,the young man,was innocent.,Embarrassed,Arthur apologized to him,but the policemen thanked him anyway.(153 w,ords,),How to write a,continuation,?,1.,Read,for basic information,2.,Read for plot development clues,3.,Predict possible plot development,4.,Draft a continuation,5.,Check and copy your version,-,tone,language characteristics,content(“W&H”),-,the beginning,-,the clues,the underlined words,Give comments on your deskmates,continuation,according to the criteria.,Write a,continuation,of about 150 words for,Passage B,using what we have learned in this class.,Assignment:,读后续写，,就这么简单！,The underlined words:,Park Avenue,the,young man,suitcases,in the back seat,loud noi