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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,写作专练,脚踏实地,练习基础句子,2.,妙笔生辉,练习常用句型,3.,挑战极限,练习高级句子,4.,高分杀手锏,谋篇与连贯,5.,最后冲刺,作文模板训练,3.,挑战极限 练习高级句子,写作专练 脚踏实地 练习基础句子3.挑战极限,1,写作专练,重视句子,谓语,部分（时态，语态等）,2.,使用几处,高级词汇,及,短语,，展示亮点。,3.,一两个,复合句，谚语、格言、比喻等,。,4.,谋篇时起承上启下和滋润作用的,连贯词,5.,注意卷面整洁。,自我提示和审查：,写作专练 重视句子谓语部分（时态，语态等）自我提示和审查：,2,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,一,.,巧用非谓语动词,用非谓语动词会使句子显得更简洁、更,级，必能获得阅卷老师较好的印象，为自己,的作文加分。请比较：,1.,去年在洪水中被毁的那座桥已被重新修了。,普通：,The bridge,which was destroyed,in the flood last year has been rebuilt.,高级：,The bridge,destroyed,in the flood,Last year has been rebuilt.,挑战极限-高级句式写作一.巧用非谓语动词,3,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,一,.,巧用非谓语动词,2.,我不喜欢排长队，那是浪费时间。,普通：,I dont like waiting in a long,queue.It is a waste of time.,高级：,Waiting,in a long queue is a,waste of time.,挑战极限-高级句式写作一.巧用非谓语动词 普通：I d,4,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,一,.,巧用非谓语动词,3.,他回到家，发现门是锁着的。,普通：,When he arrived home,he,Found the door was looked.,高级：,Arriving home,he found the,door was locked.,挑战极限-高级句式写作一.巧用非谓语动词 普通：Whe,5,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,一,.,巧用非谓语动词,4.,虽然萨姆被一个人留在家里，但他一点也,不害怕。,普通：,Although he was left alone at,home,Sam did not feel afraid,at all.,高级：,Left alone at home,Sam did,not feel afraid at all.,挑战极限-高级句式写作一.巧用非谓语动词 普通：Alt,6,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,一,.,巧用非谓语动词,5.,她发现手提包不见了之后，就去警察局,求助。,普通：,After she had found that her,handbag was missing,she went to,the police for help.,高级：,Having found that,her hand-,bag was missing,she went to the,police for help.,挑战极限-高级句式写作一.巧用非谓语动词 普通：Aft,7,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,一,.,巧用非谓语动词,6.,我不知道该怎么办，特地写信向你请教。,普通：,I dont know what to do.Im,writing to ask you for advice.,高级：,Not knowing what to do,Im,writing to ask you for advice.,挑战极限-高级句式写作一.巧用非谓语动词 普通：I d,8,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,谁也不喜欢说话“颠三倒四”，但是有时打破,常规会收到意想不到的效果。倒装句能够,起到,加强语气的作用，会让阅卷老师对所强调的内容有,较深的印象。请比较下列的句子。,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句,9,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,1.,工厂绝不应该把废物往河海里倾倒。,普通,:,Factories should never pour waste,into rivers or seas.,高级,:,Never should,factories pour waste,into rivers or seas.,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句 1.工厂绝不应,10,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,2.,被污染的水既不能用来饮用，也不能用来,灌溉。,普通,:,Polluted water cannot be used for,Drinking or irrigation.,高级,:,Polluted water cannot be used for,drinking,nor can it be used for,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句 2.被污染的水,11,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,3.,只有改变我们的生活方式，我们才能拯救,地球。,普通,:,We can save the earth only by,changing the way we live.,高级,:,Only by changing the way we live,can,we save the earth.,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句 3.只有改变我,12,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,4.,我的朋友直到昨天下午四点半才到。,普通,:,My friend didnt arrive until 4:30,yesterday afternoon.,高级,:,Not until 4:30 yesterday afternoon,did,my friend arrive.,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句 4.我的朋友直,13,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,5.,他是如此诚实，我们都信任他。,普通,:,He is so honest that we all trust him.,高级,:,So honest is he,that we all trust,him.,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句 5.他是如此诚,14,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,6.,让我吃惊的是，坐在台上的竟是我的,妈妈。,普通,:,To my surprise,my mother was,sitting on the stage.,高级,:,To my surprise,on the stage was,sitting my mother.,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句 6.让我吃惊的,15,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,二,.,巧用倒装句,倒装句常用的几种句型：,1.,Never,shall I forget these days.,2.,Only in this way,can we learn,it well.,3.,Not until,yesterday did I,realize it.,4.,So,careless was he that he,forget to lock his car.,挑战极限-高级句式写作二.巧用倒装句 倒装句常用的几种,16,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,三,.,巧用虚拟语气,有些话正说不会引起别人多大注意，反着,说就不一样。比如：“我不是小鸟，所以不,能飞”是一句很普通的话，但“要是我是一只,小鸟的话，我就可以在天空中飞翔”简直是,诗一样的语言。这就是运用虚拟语气的效,果；化腐朽为奇迹，改平淡为传神。请比较：,挑战极限-高级句式写作三.巧用虚拟语气,17,-,高级句式写作,三,.,巧用虚拟语气,请比较：,由于我不知道比尔的电话，所以我昨天没,给他打电话。,普通：,I didnt know Bills phone number,so I didnt call him yesterday.,高级：,If I had known Bills phone,number,I would have called him,yesterday.,高级：,Had I known Bills phone number,I would have called him,yesterday.,-高级句式写作三.巧用虚拟语气,18,-,高级句式写作,三,.,巧用虚拟语气,请比较：,2,）我没有足够的钱帮她完成学业。,普通：,I dont have enough money to,help her finish school.,高级：,I wish I had enough money to,help her finish school.,-高级句式写作三.巧用虚拟语气,19,三,.,巧用虚拟语气,请比较：,3,）昨天晚上因为忘了用蚊帐，我们都被,蚊子咬了。,普通：,We were badly bitten by,mosquitoes because we forgot,to use the mosquito met last,night.,高级：,If we had used the mosquito net.,we wouldnt have been bitten,高级：,Had we used the mosquito net,we wouldnt have been bitten.,三.巧用虚拟语气,20,三,.,巧用虚拟语气,请比较：,4,）这位老人由于没有被及时送往医院而死于,心脏病。,普通：,The old man died of a sudden,heart attack,for he was not sent,to hospital in time.,高级：,If the old man had been sent to,hospital in time,he wouldnt have,died of a sudden heart attack.,高级：,Had the old man been sent to,he wouldnt have died of a,三.巧用虚拟语气,21,挑战极限,-,高级句式写作,四,.,巧用名词性从句,有些人头大，身体小，有些人头小，身体大，,没有人希望自己长成这个样子，可如果真有人,长成这样，他就必然会引起别人的注意。同,样，文章中如果出现“头重脚轻”或“头轻脚,重”的句子，就会显得与众不同。这样的句子,就是,主语从句,、,表语从句,、,宾语从句,、,同位,语从句,。,挑战极限-高级句式写作四.巧用名词性从句 有些人头大，,22,-,高级句式写作,四,.,巧用名词性从句,1,）这就是我能做到的。,This is what I can do.,2,）他是否能和我们一起去还不肯定。,Whether he can go with us or not,is not certain.,3,）未来的生活是什么样很难预测。,What life will be like in the future,is difficult to predict.,表从,主从,主从,-高级句式写作四.巧用名词性从句 1）这就是我能做到的,23,-,高级句式写作,四,.,巧用名词性从句,4,）今天讨论的题目是未来的学校是什么样。,The discussion topic for today is,What schools will be like in the,5,）我们举行了一场辩论，讨论是否应克隆人类。,We had a debate,on,whether,humans should be allowed to be,cloned.,6,）我们的口语老师刘老师很随和。,Mr.Liu,our oral English teacher,i
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