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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Introduction to a person,writing,Let,s have a brainstorm!,What do you think of,when introducing somebody?,有毅力的,有能力的,热心肠的,随和的,精力充沛,慷慨的,智能的,雄心的,有吸引力的,determined,perseverant,capable,warm hearted,easy going,energetic,generous,intelligent,ambitious,attractive/,charming,健忘的,诚实的,幽默的,勤奋的,独立的,谨慎的,多话的,健康的,耐心的,宽容的,forgetful,honest,humorous,diligent,independent,cautious,talkative,healthy,patient,tolerant,严格的,谦虚的,考虑周到的,杰出的,乐观的,悲观的,热情的,心不在焉的,脾气不好的,举止得体的,有天赋的,strict,modest,considerate,outstanding,optimistic,pessimistic,enthusiastic,absent minded,bad tempered,behave well,gifted/talented,Practice sentences,温家宝总是举止得体,。,李泳不但很有天赋而且很勤奋。,XXX,是个很有能力的班长。,王海军（刘鑫童）有一颗宽容的心。,吴尊很受年轻人的欢迎。,林乔禹正在中山大学主修音乐。,Writing,Wen,Jiabao,always,behaves himself/well,.,Li Yong is not only,gifted,but also,diligent,.,XXX is a very,capable,monitor.,Wang,Haijun,(Liu,Xintong,)has got a,forgiving,heart.,/is,tolerant,.,Wu,Zun,is,very,popular with,the young.,Lin,Qiaoyu,is,majoring in,music at,Zhongshan,University.,（一）人物简介的写作步骤；,(,概,貌,育,平,评,),概况,）,age,sex,birth-place,background,外貌,）,appearance,character,教育,）,education,生平,）,big events in ones life (in order of time),评价,）,evaluation,Practice,1,）肖老师，我们的化学老师，毕业于华南师范大学。,Miss,Xie,our Chemistry teacher,graduated from South China Normal University.,2,）,他爱好广泛，尤其是跳舞。,He has many hobbies,especially loving dance.,3,）,他备课认真，课堂练习多。,He prepares his lessons well and gives us a lot of practice in class.,4),对学生慈祥、耐心,He was kind and patient.,5,）他的教学效果：学生用功，进步快。,With his help,we work hard and make great progress.,A.,概况,（尽量用非谓语,/,同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,),1)Born in _ on _,_ is a _.,2)_,the son of a _ family,was born in _ on _.,3)XXX,_,is a beautiful girl/handsome boy.,monitor of Class 5/7,B,外貌,性格,(,巧用,with,做定语,),梁志波是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜,Liang,Zhibo,is a,near-sighted/far-sighted,boy _.,杨扬很漂亮，有着长长的头发。,Yang,Yang,is,good-looking/ordinary-looking/funny-looking,_.,何泽宇高高瘦瘦,浓浓的眉毛,看上去挺帅的。,He,Zeyu,is a,tall and thin,guy _,looking very handsome.,with a pair of glasses on his nose,.,with long hair,.,with thick eyebrows,C,生平,(,尽量用复合句,倒装,非限制定语从句等，润色文章,),1,）,侯耀文,不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。,Not only,_,but also _.,2,）,祖龙涛创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。,Zu,Longtao,set a new world record of swimming,_.,is,Hou,Yaowen,interested in science,he has a gift for music,which,makes a great contribution to China.,E,评价（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语,/,词组）,1,）,裴继升给我们作出了榜样,大家都赞扬他,Pei,Jishen,_,so all the people _him.,2,）,鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,并且将会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住,.,Lu,Xun,is one of the greatest novelists in China and will _an outstanding man forever.,sets us a good example,speaks highly of,be remembered as,说明,：,上海出版的,学生英文报,，对象是我国的学生，请用英语为该报写一段人物介绍，介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟。内容要点如下：,罗雪娟（,Luo,Xuejuan,）,昵称：罗罗，女，,23,岁，浙江人；,从小接受游泳训练,，,2000,年，崭露头角；,取得成绩：,2003,年在巴塞罗那世界锦标赛中获得三枚金牌；,2004,年雅典奥运会打破纪录；夺得,100,米游泳冠军。,其他情况：由于身体原因，现宣布退役，将到北京大学读书。,注意：,1,）要有标题。,2,）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容,评分标准,:,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性,实战演练,Luo,Xuejuan,Our Pride,Born in,Zhejiang,province,Luo,Xuejuan,with the nickname,Luoluo,is a 23-year-old Chinas female Olympic swimming champion.,She began to learn to swim at an early age and she began to show her great,talent in 2000,.She got three gold medals in Barcelona world championships.,At Athens 2004 Olympics,she broke the world record and got womens 100m swimming champion,.,Due to health problems,Luo,Xuejuan,has announced retirement and she will study in Beijing University,.,Peer assessment,Criteria(,标准,),Marks(15 points),Content(,内容,),5 4 3 2 1,Language(,语言,),8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0,Coherence(,连贯性,),2 1 0,Conclusion:,1.,人物简介的写作步骤,:,概,貌,育,平,评,2.,5,个句子整合语言点,：,1,）姓名性别教育经历,2,）个人特点爱好,3,）工作表现，特点,4,）业绩（荣誉）,5,）评价,3.,用非谓语,/,同位语结构,;,巧用,with,做定语,;,倒装,4.,记住,常用描写人物的形容词,模拟试题,1,（见卷子,）,根据下列提示，写一篇介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平的文章。,1,袁隆平,1937,年,9,月,7,日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭。,2,1953,年毕业于西南农学院，毕业后被分配到湘西农校任教。,3,1964,年开始从事水稻研究,。,1981,年荣获我国第一个国家发明特等奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”。,4,生活简朴，不计名利。,注意,：,1,）要有标题。,2,）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,:,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,答案,总结,Homework,模拟试题,2,（见卷子）,请根据以下提示，用英语给“中国日报”写一篇简讯介绍我国著名的跨栏运动员,-,刘翔，内容要点如下,：,刘翔中国第一个男子奥运田径冠军,(track champion),籍贯：生日上海；,1983,最值得骄傲的事,1,）雅典奥运会平世界纪录,2,）,2006,年瑞士洛桑田径超级大奖赛冠军,（,a super grand prix in Lausanne,Switzerland,），,打破沉睡,13,年之久英国运动员保持的世界纪录下一个目标,2008,北京奥运会夺冠，为国争光,注意,：,1,）要有标题。,2,）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,:,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。,答案,总结,模拟试题,3,（见卷子）,写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下,（,1,）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人，为了国家，弃医从文。,（,2,）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。,（,3,）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如,阿,Q,正传,、,祝福,这两部影片。,（,4,）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。,参考词汇：,阿,Q,正传,：,The True Story of AH Q,祝福,：,The New Years Sacrifice,注意：,介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,:,句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。,Dear Bruce,I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about,Luxun,._,Since you are learning Chinese literatures,I think reading Lu,Xuns,novels will help you to know more about it.,Yours,Li Ming,答案,总结,模拟试题,4,（见卷子,）,刘平从广告上得知上海某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。,(1),姓名：刘平，年龄,27,岁。,(2)2001,年毕业于中山大学，后来留学日本东京大学。,(3)2005,
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