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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,Writing Training,假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信，谈一谈“素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。,应试教育,素质教育,上课：听讲，做笔记,上课：课堂活跃，研究学习，能力培养，有时学生当老师,课外活动：做不完的作业,课外活动：开展各种类型的活动：唱歌跳舞，球类活动，电脑学习，英语角,晚上：继续做作业至深夜,晚上：看新闻，做实验，各学科讨论,注意：1、写信日期为2004年2月20日；,2、词数：100左右；3、注意书信格式。,Dear Alice,You said that you wanted to know something about quality-oriented education.So I will talk about quality-oriented and exam-oriented education.At last,we only could listen our teachers and make notes.After classes we had a lot homeworks to do.It took us much time on it at night.But now,in class,we can discuss questions with teacher.Students are all like to study.Sometime we also could play a teacher.We dont have so many homeworks.So we have enough time to do all kinds of activities,for example,singing,playing balls,English coner,and so on.At night,we can see news,do experiments,Yours,Li Hua,2004,2,20,Incorrect letter form;,Spelling mistakes;,Grammatical mistakes;,The passage is wordy;,Think in Chinese and write in Chinglish;,No effective conjunctions,Common problems:,Dear Alice,:,Yours,Feb 20,2004,Li Hua,Incorrect letter form,Spelling mistakes:,Our school life was quite boiling.,We only made notices and lessoned in class.,A lot of activists take the place of the homework.,But now things are difficult from it.,We do experiences and discussion the subjects.,boring,notes,listened,activities,different,experiments,discuss,In class,exam-oriented education made us to listen the teachers and make notes,Comparing with that,quality-oriented education allows us learn lively.,We just had too many homeworks to do.,Several years ago,we have saw and experienced the exam-oriented education.,Grammatical mistakes,to,Compared,to learn actively,much homework,The passage is wordy,I received your last letter yesterday.I am pleased to receive it.You said you heard that China is carrying out the quality-oriented education in primary schools and middle schools and you wanted to know something about it.So I will tell you something about it and the exam-oriented education.,(50 words),Glad to,hear from you,.You want to know something about the quality-oriented education in China.Id like to tell you something about the changes in my school.,27 words,Write in Chinglish,In the evening,we,see news,do experiments and,discussing,subjectswhich,instead of,continue doing homework.,On top of that,we not only happier,than ago,we can learn better and more now.,In the evening,instead of continuing,our exercises far into the night we can,watch news on TV,do experiments and discuss our subjects.,In a/one word,we are,not only,happier,than before,but,we can learn better and more now.,No effective conjunctions,And we did our homework in our free time.We did homework till midnight.,We have a lot of activities,dancing,computers,English,and so on.,And we had to do our homework exercises,both,in our free time,and,even far into the night.,After class,We have various outside activities,such as,singing,dancing,English corner,and taking computer lessons.,Feb 20,2004,DearAlice,How nice to,hearfromyou,.Youwantto know what is,goingon,in schoolsin China?Now,I will tell you about it.,In the past,exam-oriented education,forced,us tolisten toourteacherwhiletaking notes inclass.After class,we did,all kindsof,exercises,without end.,Aftersupper,wehad to,continue,our exercises,far into the night,.,Now,quality-oriented education has,madeour schoollifecolorful,.Weare activein class.In order totraintheability,weoftendo research onstudy.Sometimesone of usteaches ourselves.We have variousoutside activities,suchassinging,dancing,Englishcorner,and takingcomputer lessons.Basketball and football areourfavoritesports.In the eveningwe can watch news onTV,do experimentsby ourselvesand have talksand discussionsof our subjects.,Itscertain that,our schoollifeis getting more andmorecolorfuland interesting.,Bestwishes.Yours,Li Hua,Proper letter form.,No obviousmistakes.,Writeinlogicalorder.,Use exactadjectives,goodverbsand properphrases.,Use someeffectiveconjunctions.,Use differentsentence structures.,Why do sayit is a good article?,Readthe following sentences and decidewhichis better.,1),Im waiting foryouto come,.,Im looking forwardto your arrival.,2),Tom is ill.Hecannot study.He still attendsschool.,Tom is illandcannot study,yet hestill attends,3),I read thenewspaperin the past.Iliketo watchTV now.,I used toreadthe newspapers,butnow Iprefer towatch TV.,4)Hecameandbrought usa lot ofnew stories.,He came with alotof new stories.,Improve the following sentences:,1)Theflathasan area of25 squaremetres and there isa bedroom,a bathroom,and akitchen.,3)Next the text will begonethrough byus and then the main idea will befound.,4)Hesawthe boy inthestreet.Hestopped to speak tohim.Hegavehim apenny.,2)Iheardyouare learning Chinese.I am very glad tohearthat.,Im very glad to hear that youarelearning,Letsgo through thetextandfindthe main idea.,Seeingthe boy inthestreet,hestopped to spe
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