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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,短文改错,梅江区嘉应中学 刘映明,2015,年,10,月,28,日,Just find out the mistakes,Task one,Mr.Zhang is sixty years old and had retired.He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One.He taught very well.He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually made preparations for the lessons and was strict in us.Each time we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct it.I was poor in biology.He often helps me with my,study patient.With his help I made great progresses.He was very kind to his students.As an experienced teacher,he respected or loved by all the students.,Have a check,Mr.Zhang is sixty years old and had retired.He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One.He taught very well.He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually made,us,has,good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us.Each time we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct it.I was poor in biology.He often helps me,with,helped,them,with my study patient.With his help I made great progresses.He was very kind to his students.As an experienced teacher,he respected or loved by all the students.,progress,was,and,patiently,Make a summary in groups,1.had has,3,.去掉,the,2,.,our us,4,.,in with,时态,指代不一致,冠词,搭配,5,.,it them,代词,Task two,9,.增加,was,6,.,helps helped,8,.,progresses progress,10,.,or and,时态,名词单复数,被动,连词错用,7,.,patient patiently,形容词副词错用,短文改错要注意,:,动词,形,、名词,数,，注意,形,和,副,；,主谓、,非谓动，,习惯用语,要记住；,句子成分多分析，,逻辑错误,需关注；,冠介缺余,常常现，,连词,误用逻辑辨；,数,有基序，,代,有格，,从句,细辨引导词,。,添加或删除的词通常是虚词。,少了一个词，要求添加的词有：,冠词：,in countryside in,the,countryside(2015,课标,I),As result As,a,result(2014,课标,I),介词：,listening music listening,to,music(2014,课标,II),连词：,He had,he was,He had,and,he was(2013,课标,I),不定式符号：,came see me came,to,see me(2007,课标,),物主代词：,Tom saw parents Tom saw,his,parents(2015,课标,II),多了一个词，要求删除的词有：介词、冠词、连词、助动词、不定式符号,to,。,冠词：,In,a,fact In fact(2013,课标,I),all kinds of the flowers all kinds of flowers(2014,课标,II),介词：,he lent to me lots of clothes he lent me lots of clothes(2011,课标,),连词,Although,butAlthough,不定式符号：,had better to stop had better stop(2009,课标,),助动词：,has,brought brought(2010,课标,),Lots of studies have,been,shown Lots of studies have shown(2015,课标,I),副词：,so,very,much that so much that(2015,课标,II),Task three,单句改错,每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。,1,、,For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and.,hours,2,、,Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.,us,3,、,Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease,yet,或者去掉,but,4,、,Last year,she decided study abroad.,to,5,、,I look forward to see her again in the near future.,seeing,6,、,We sat by the fire,have our barbecue.,7,、,Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake,having,Feeling,提示：根据非谓语动词与其逻辑主语的关系,来确定用,-ing,形式还是用,-ed,形式,因,we,与,have,是主动关系,因,we,与,feel,是主动关系,8,、,We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,9,、,I found the test difficulty,but I tried hard to do it.,作,作定语、表语、补语,用形容词,wonderful,difficult,10,、,Interesting,it had a connection with the British porcelain industry.,作状语，修饰动词、形容词、全句，用副词,interestingly,假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有,10,处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。,增加,:,在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。,删除,:,把多余的词用斜线（,）画掉。,修改,:,在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。,Task three,When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.,1.2015,课标卷,I,The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.,When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.,and,the,thought,1.2015,课标卷,I,Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.,serious,with,The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.,our/the,find,Many,air,短文改错常见错误,:,动词,形,、名词,数,，注意,形,和,副,；,非谓语动词,细辨别,习惯用语,要记住；,句子成分,多分析，,逻辑错误,需关注；,冠介,缺余常常现，,连词,误用逻辑辨；,数,有基序，,代,有格，,从句,细辨引导词,。,
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