英语作文课件4月7日

,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,How to get high grades in the writing task?,Guide for English writing,英语作文写作指导,谷城三中 帅德胜,Review of the writing task in the 2012 College Entrance Examination,请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。,You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.,注意：,无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语,;,除诗歌外，文体不限,;,文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称,;,词数为,120,左右。,注意：第,4,条今年改为：不少于,120,个词,A students writing,I remember when my birthday, my mother buy me a present. It was a celphone. I was very happy, because I didnt think she would buy a celphone for me. When I was at school, I often sent messages to my classmates, sometimes I play games on it. My study fell down sharply. My teacher told my mother. My mother was angry and scold me. I realize my mistake. I should not use celphone for playing. I should use it for good goal. From then on, I began to study hard. I will use the celphone well. I cant choose what is given, but I will make good use of it.,10,Conclusion of common mistakes,and problems in the writing,1.A whole passage, no paragraph divided,2.Direct translation and Chinglish expression,3.Verb tenses not in agreement,4.Improper sentence patterns,5.Drifting off the topic or leaving out some required information,6.spelling mistakes without any advanced vocabulary or sentences,Enjoy and discuss,Seeing the topic, all that comes to my mind,is TIME. No one can decide the amount of time given by God,so,how to make use of it really makes a difference. Just,as the saying goes, time is limited and lost time is never found again,which evidently,shows us the importance of treasuring time.,However, I,didnt realize it until,I,came across,a failure in a big exam.,It was,in Senior 2,that,I began to play computer games. Soon I,got so addicted to,them,that,every night I slipped out of school to play computer games.,As a consequence, I slept in class in the daytime and my studies fell sharply before I could realize my mistake. Precious time slipped away in my dreams and computer games,and therefore,I failed in the final exam.,Looking at the poor marks, how I wish,I hadnt wasted,so much time,playing,computer games,when I should have studied hard,.,A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit,.,Every minute counts,. Now I completely understand the importance of treasuring time.,From my perspective, time means life.,Only by seizing every second, can we have a bright future.,how,to,get high grades?,advanced vocabulary,.,colourful sentences,especially including some clauses(,从句），,the inverted and emphasized (,倒装和强调）,.,Non-predicate verbs(,非谓语动词）,.,with structure and so on,.,proper conjunction,（连词）,.,Proper proverbs(,谚语,) quoted if possible.,Beautiful handwriting.,How to make these sentences attractive?,1.Lisa is born into a poor family. She is my best friend. She often shares happiness and sorrow with me.,2.In the picture, we can see a boy. He is reading a book.,Born into,a poor family, Lisa is my best friend,who,often shares happiness and sorrow with me,.,As is shown / described/ illustrated,in the picture,(,As can be seen,in the picture,) a boy,is absorbed in,reading.,3.In my opinion, we need a positive attitude towards life.,As far as Im concerned/From my perspective,what we need,is a positive towards life.,4.I began to know it when I failed the final exam.,It was not until,I failed the final exam,that,I began to know it.,5.We can make our bodies strong by taking excise.,Only,by taking excise,can we build up,a strong body.,6.The drawing is simple, but it is meaningful.,Simple as the drawing is,the implication it reveals is,profound,.,7.The college entrance examination is drawing near, everyone is busy studying hard,With,the college entrance examination,drawing near, everyone,is occupied in,studying hard.,常用的,连接词,(,common conjuctions,),表并列补充关系的,:,what is more, besides, also, as well, , in addition,additionally,表转折对比关系的,:,but, however, instead ,despite, in spite of, unlike, the formerthe latter, on the one handon the other hand,表因果关系的,:,since, because (of),thanks to,therefore, as a result, so that,表条件关系的,:,if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless,表时间关系的,:,when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, at the same time, afterward, finally,特定的顺序关系,:,above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, in the end, at last,表换一种方式表达,:,in other words, that is to say,表进行举例说明,:,for instance, for example, like, such as,表陈述事实,:,in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth,表总结,:,on the whole, in short, all in all, , in a word, in conclusion,实战演练,Look at the following drawing, describe it briefly, and write out how you understand it in 120 words or so.,As is shown,in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over-watering,though,people do it for a good purpose.,Simple as it is, the picture is really,thought-provoking, for it,vividly,describes a common phenomenon that parents nowadays care too much about their children who are just like the blooming plant. Often people do things with good intentions,but,the result may be quite different from expected. Too much care spoils their children , even destroys their children.,For instance, our parents tend to do everything that we should do, making beds, washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us,in order to,make us,concentrate on,study.,As a consequence, many of us are becoming more and more independent, which will do no good to our future.,From my perspective, I can understand parents love and intention. But as children,what we really need,is to experience difficulties and take challenges,so that,we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent.,Only in this way can we,become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities.,Possible version,Thank you for attending.,