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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,My Low-carbon Life,Discussion:,What words or phrases do you hope to see when,you see the word“,environment,”?,Environment,clean,Mind-map,fresh,clear,green,dirty,rubbish,no fish,more and more cars,burn coal,pollute the air,black smoke,noise pollution,land pollution,The earth is badly,polluted.,Pollution is bad,for us all.,The earth is our home.It is everyones duty to love and protect the environment.Everyone should play a part in protecting the environment.It starts with small things around us.,What can we do to protect the environment?,Task,As we all know,the environment around us is getting worse and worse today.,Water is polluted,many trees are cutting down,some animals are getting less and less.Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky.,Not only does it affect our lives and health,it also has a great affection in the future.Peoples health has been greatly affected by pollution.,In order to live a better life,something must be done to stop the pollution.Its our duty to protect our environment.,We shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere.Trees are very helpful and important for us.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthily in the future.We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air.Whenever we see litter on the ground,we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins.Never spit in public.Dont draw on public walls.,Its our duty to protect the environment.,Sample,beginning,body,ending,What can we do for the environment?,We should,We must,Its necessary to,We shouldnt,Never,Dont,Suggestions,task:,现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个,“,低碳生活,”,的中学生。请以,“,My Low,-,carbon Life,”,为题，写一篇短文描述自己的,“,低碳生活,”,。,内容包括：,1.,地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。,2.,你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到,“,低碳生活,”,的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。,3.,号召更多的人加入到,“,低碳生活,”,中来。,My Low-carbon Life,What problems,do the pollutions cause?,The importance of the,low-carbon life.,What do you do to live a,low-carbon life?,Mind-map,Pay attention,建议和做法的语句表达不同,Beginning,Body,Ending,Writing mode,My,Low-ca rbon Life,The environmental pollution is worse,and worse today.,As a student,I try,to live a low-carbon life to save energy,and reduce pollution.,Lower carbon,happier life.,Let,s,take action now!,I often,because,I always,It can help,I never,Sometimes I,Writing mode,Connect the sentences with link words to introduce supporting points:,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,Whats more,First of all,Also,Finally,However,not onlybut(also),as well,neither nor,eitheror,Post-writing,1.Good structure,（结构合理）,2,分,2.,Full content,（内容完整）,I often,because,（至少,3,方面）,4,分,3.,Correct expression,（表达准确）,1,）,Correct tense,（时态准确）,2,）,Conjunctions(,连词,),5,分,4.Rich expression,（语言丰富）,Good words and sentences,2,分,5.Good handwriting,（书写优美）,2,分,Summary,A good passage,of “giving,opinions”,Topic Sentence,Body,Supporting points,Right Link wordsand sentence patterns,Conclusion,Practice Makes Perfect,！,请你以“保持城市环境干净”为主题，写一份倡议书。,内容包括：,1.,保护城市环境是我们的职责（,duty,）,;,2.,列出能保护城市环境的建议（至少三条）；,3.,发出号召。,Homework,Where there is a will,there is a way.,Work hard,and y,ou can make your,dream,come true!,Thank you,1.,当我们常常以为自己顶不住的时候，并不是最后的时刻，而是我们的精神崩溃了。那你只要坚持精神的重整，坚持精神的出发，其实当我们觉得，那是万劫不复的情景，也依然可以去找到它的出口，也依然可以坚持过来,2.,所以如果你有愿望，如果你真的还有力量去实行它，我觉得我一定要即刻就出发，去完成自己的愿望，让自己更少的遗憾。人生是一个漫长的过程，年轻是多么的好，但是请你们记得，记得有很多的东西，当你不懂的时候，你年轻，当你懂得了以后，你已年老。,3.,抒情往往不会单独出现在文中，它常与记叙、描写、议论等结合在一起。一般来说，直接抒情一般要与议论结合在一起，而间接抒情一般与叙述、描写结合在一起。,4.,借景抒情又称寓情于景，是指作者带着强烈的主观情感去描写客观景物，通过景物来抒情。,5.,融情于事，指通过叙述事件来抒发感情，让感情从具体事件的叙述中自然地流露出来，感染读者。这种渗透着感情的叙述，读者品味起来就更觉得真诚可亲。,6.,通过对客观事物的描写或刻画，间接表现出作者的志向、意愿。采用托物言志，关键是志与物要有某种相同点或相似点，使物能达意而志为物核。托物言志常借用比拟、象征等手法。,7.,要写好一篇记叙文，首先必须确定自己的情感，然后根据自己的情感选择提炼材料，再加以细致的描写，在必要的地方画龙点睛地穿插一点议论。,8.,对任何一篇记叙文而言，叙述是骨架，描写是血肉，而抒情与议论则是灵魂，这四者是缺一不可的。总之，我们要学会综合运用多种表现手法，使我们笔下的文字显得生动活泼、形象可感、醒人耳目、启人深思。,
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