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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Composition 3,：,thank-you letter,感谢信,2016-11-15,假设你是李华，在外教,Robert,的帮助下，你的英语成绩取得了很大进步。现在外教即将回国，请根据以下信息,写一封感谢信,，内容包括：,过去学习英语遇到的困难,外教所提供的帮助,你,取得的进步,注意：,1.,词数,120,左右,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,3.,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数,Dear Robert,，,Ive heard that you will go back to.,曹芷若、张昊原、薛子松、常嘉欣、张可欣、万城城、陈方洁、周欣悦,Beautiful handwriting,Excellent articles,魏君奕、薛子松,、何荣桢、王楚樊、曹芷若、陈梦婷,Wonderful expressions:,Its you who make me love English.(,张昊原,),Its you that let me find the joy of learning English.(,刘明阳,),Its you who helped me study English.(,魏君奕,),It was not until I met you that I knew the joy of learning English.(,吕婧怡,),I think you have my life.(,杨知博,),make a big difference to,You are one of the best teachers that Ive met.(,薛子松,),I will remember what you have done for me forever.(,何荣桢,),Wherever you go,you are our teacher forever.(,梁浩坤,),I thank you .(,魏君奕,),cant enough,定语从句,宾语从句,状语从句,There was a time when I had trouble in learning English(古鑫昱),You tried your best to encourage me to my shyness and fear to speak English.(程梦婷),Im writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help.(钟天琪),get rid of,Problems about your compostions,1.The format of the letter(,写信格式,),Dear Robert,.,.,.,.,Yours,Li Hua,4 students made mistakes here!,邓光赢、汪梦轩、常嘉欣、李心怡,3.Common mistakes,：,3.1.Words,3.2.,Sentences,3.3.Useful Strucures,Problems about your compostions,3.1.words(correct the mistakes),1.Ive heard that you will go back to American.,2.At that time,you like a God come to my world.,3.I stood there embarrasedly.,4.Remember words is easy for me.,5.If you have some troubles,I will try my best to help you.,6.Thanks for your kindness and patient.,7.I want to thanks for your help.,3.2.Sentences,1.During the days that you stayed here,you helped me a lot.,2.Ive heard that you will go back to the country where you came from.,3.Im very miss the days that you teach me.,3.1.words(correct the mistakes),1.Ive heard that you will go back to American.,2.At that time,you like a God come to my world.,3.I stood there embarrasedly.,4.Remember words is easy for me.,America,were,embarrassed,Remembering,coming,3.1.words(correct the mistakes),5.If you have some troubles,I will try my best to help you.,6.Thanks for your kindness and patient.,7.I want to thanks for your help.,trouble,patience,thank you,3.2.Sentences,1.During the days that you stayed here,you helped me a lot.,2.Ive heard that you will go back to the country where you came from.,3.Im very miss the days that you teach me.,when,which/that,或去掉,from,when,3.3.Useful structures(,改正或改进下列句子,),1.,（错误）,Half of the grades are from your hard work.,我把我的进步归功于你 （,owe.to.,把,归功于,）,I,owe,my progress,to,you,I,owe it to you that,I have made great progress in English.,我取得了一等奖，这都归功于你。,I,owe it to you that,I have won the first prize.,2.,（改进）,I found I was interested in English because of you.,(宾语从句-主+谓+宾+宾补),I found _ _ _ English because of you.,myself interested in,3.(,错误,)Without your help I cant make such great progress in English.,没有你的帮助，我就不能够取得如此大的进步。,(,虚拟语气,),Without your help I,coudnt have made,such great progress in English.,没有你的安慰，我,就不会度过,难关,.(get through),Without your comfort I _,the difficulty.,wouldnt have got through,A possbile version:,Dear Robert,，,Ive heard that you will go back to America.,Its a pity that,we cant study with you any longer.,Im writing to express my sincere appreciation for,your help with my English.,首段三句话：寒暄,+,进入话题,+,引出下文（写信目的）,There was a time when,I had difficulty in learning English.,So frustrated,(,沮丧的,),was I that,I even thought about giving up English.,It was,at that time,that,you came here and,offered me a hand,.,It was,your patience and effective teaching methods,that,helped me,overcome,(,克服,),the difficulties,and,build up,(增强),my confidence,in learning English again.,Last week I got the first prize in English speaking contest,(,英语口语大赛,).,I,owe,all the progress that I have made,to,you.,Without your help,I couldnt have achieved so much.,I really feel lucky to have you as my English teacher.,Thanks again and I wish you all the best!,Yours,Li Hua,Summary:,写信三段式,（注意比例）,首段,para.1,：寒暄,+,进入话题,+,引出下文（写信目的）,正文,para.2,：,有逻辑地写出题目要求的内容,（,1.,不漏点。,2.,语法错误不明显。,3.,尽量活用已学过的句型和结构！,4.,不会表达的尽量避免）,尾段,para.3,：,a.,祝福式,b.,提问式,c.,互动式,Translation,1.,曾经有段时间我跟你相处有困难。,(there was a time when),2.,要是没有你的鼓励我就不会在学习上取得如此大的进步。（,without,，,wouldnt have done,）,3.,每当我陷入麻烦的时候，你总是陪在我身边。,(in trouble,stay),4.,直到我上了高中，我才开始懂你。,(not until),5.,是你教会了做一个自信，独立的人。,6.,我成为今天的样子全都归功于你。,(owe it to sb.that),Passage,Put the sentences in order and see what you will get?,Writing,下周四是感恩节（,thanksgiving day,），请你借助这个机会给自己的父母写一封感谢信。,Dear mother/father,How time flies!It has been 15 years since you brought me to this wonderful world.It suddenly came to me that I have never expressed my deepest feelings for you.As the Thanksgiving Day is approaching,Id like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for you.,Thank you again and I will always love you!,Yours,XX,
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