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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,English Writing,5,谢建奎,Focus Today,I. Questions,II. Discussion of Assignment (Introduction),III. Construction of Conclusion,IV. Ways of Conclusion,V. Practice in Class,VI. Assignment,I. Questions,Which way of introduction is used?,An examination falls into one of two main categories: the objective exam and the subjective exam. Each type has certain advantages and disadvantages, depending upon the course, content, and purpose of the exam.,The FBI crime figures show that the number of women arrested for “serious” crimes, such as murder and armed robbery, increased 80% for the last 8 years. The increase for male during that period was 35%. Robbery by women was up some 19%,_,by men some 11%. Burglary by women rose almost three times as much as burglary by men.,Classification/Division,Figures or Statistics,II. Discussion of Assignment (Introduction),an,has,department stores,hotels,are,is,will,g,super,and,Problems？,many places,giving,St. Valentines,So some,argue,are,C,Problems？,Now the technological development has changed and is still changing the world. This trend also brings a great effect on the traditional culture in countries with a long history. For example, many people in China begin to worry about the loss of traditional Chinese culture. In my opinion, we can take actions to slow down the loss of Chinese traditional culture, or even turn back the trend by protecting our culture, creating new forms of the traditional culture, and educating our children with more traditional culture.,(86 words),春节：现代民间习惯上把过春节又叫做过年。其实，年和春节的起源是很不相同的。 那么“年”究竟是怎么样来的呢？民间主要有两种说法：,一种说法是：,相传，中国古时候有一种叫“年”的怪兽，头长触角，凶猛异常。“年”长年深居海底，每到除夕才爬上岸，吞食牲畜伤害人命。 因此，每到除夕这天，村村寨寨的人们扶老携幼逃往深山，以躲避“年”兽的伤害。 这年除夕，桃花村的人们正扶老携幼上山避难，从村外来了个乞讨的老人，只见他手拄拐杖，臂搭袋囊，银须飘逸，目若朗星。 乡亲们有的封窗锁门，有的收拾行装，有的牵牛赶羊，到处人喊马嘶，一片匆忙恐慌景象。这时，谁还有心关照这位乞讨的老人。,只有村东头一位老婆婆给了老人些食物，并劝他快上山躲避“年”兽，那老人捋髯笑道：“婆婆若让我在家呆一夜，我一定把“年”兽撵走。 老婆婆惊目细看，见他鹤发童颜、精神矍铄，气宇不凡。可她仍然继续劝说，乞讨老人笑而不语。婆婆无奈，只好撇下家，上山避难去了。 半夜时分，“年”兽闯进村。它发现村里气氛与往年不同：村东头老婆婆家，门贴大红纸，屋内独火通明。“年”兽浑身一抖，怪叫了一声。 “年”朝婆婆家怒视片刻，随即狂叫着扑过去。将近门口时，院内突然传来“砰砰啪啪”的炸响声，“年”浑身战栗，再不敢往前凑了。 原来，“年”最怕红色、火光和炸响。这时，婆婆的家门大开，只见院内一位身披红袍的老人在哈哈大笑。“年”大惊失色，狼狈逃蹿了。 第二天是正月初一，避难回来的人们见村里安然无恙十分惊奇。这时，老婆婆才恍然大悟，赶忙向乡亲们述说了乞讨老人的许诺。,乡亲们一齐拥向老婆婆家，只见婆婆家门上贴着红纸，院里一堆未燃尽的竹子仍在“啪啪”炸响，屋内几根红腊烛还发着余光 欣喜若狂的乡亲们为庆贺右祥的来临，纷纷换新衣戴新帽，到亲友家道喜问好。这件事很快在周围村里传开了，人们都知道了驱赶“年”兽的办法。 从此每年除夕，家家贴红对联、燃放爆竹；户户烛火通明、守更待岁。初一一大早，还要走亲串友道喜问好。 这风俗越传越广，成了中国民间最隆重的传统节日。,另一种说法是：,我国古代的字书把“年”字放禾部，以示风调雨顺，五谷丰登。由于谷禾一般都是一年一熟。所“年”便被引申为岁名了。 我国古代民间虽然早已有过年的风俗，但那时并不叫做春节。因为那时所说的春节，指的是二十四节气中的“立春”。 南北朝则把春节泛指为整个春季。据说，把农历新年正式定名为春节，是辛亥革命后的事。由于那时要改用阳历，为了区分农、阳两节，所以只好将农历正月初一改名为“春节”。,1,1,1,Introduction,Body,Conclusion,2,2,2,3,3,3,III. Construction of Conclusion,Construction of the whole essay (a review),Introduction,Body,Conclusion,How about essay in this way?,say,end,main points,new,larger,general,tone,The general construction of a conclusion is shown as follows:,1. Restatement of thesis/_,2. Deepening the thesis,3. Wish/suggestion/prediction ,summary,IV. 17 Ways for Conclusion,1. Prediction,2. Wish,3. Suggestion,4. Quotation,5. Persuasion,6. Call on action,Each one of us is a unique, worthwhile individual. We are interesting in our own personal ways. The better we understand ourselves, the easier it becomes to realize our full potential. Lets not allow shyness to block our chances for a rich life.,7. Warning,8. Result/final product,With the right attitude, living in a foreign country can be a priceless, enriching period in a persons life. It is a form of education,_,an exciting form. The above suggestions will help a person cope with life abroad.,9. Final evaluation,10. Witty remark,11. Work to be done/a plan for the future,12. Summary,Restatement of Thesis,Lenon,John Winston Lennon was the founder and the leader of The Beatles. He was a man with all the qualities of a modern hero, a man who captivated the world with his art, his quest for world peace, and his love for humanity.,On December 8, 1980 around 11 p.m. tragedy struck. While coming home from a late-night recording session with Yoko, John was shot by David Mark Chapman outside his apartment building The Dakota. John was rushed to the hospital but was pronounced dead upon arrival.,When I find myself in times of trouble,Mother Mary comes to me,Speaking words of wisdom, let it be.,And in my hour of darkness,She is standing right in front of me,Speaking words of wisdom, let it be.,Let it be, let it be.,Whisper words of wisdom, let it be.,And when the broken hearted people,Living in the world agree,There will be an answer, let it be.,For though they may be parted there is,Still a chance that they will see,There will be an answer, let it be.,Let it be, let it be. Yeah,There will be an answer, let it be.,And when the night is cloudy,There is still a light that shines on me, Shine on until tomorrow, let it be.,I wake up to the sound of music Mother Mary comes to me,Speaking words of wisdom, let it be. Let it be, let it be.,There will be an answer, let it be.,Let it be, let it be,Whisper words of wisdom, let it be,V. Practice in Class,Which possible way of conclusion for each of the following sentence patterns?,Read the conclusions and tell which way of conclusion is used, and the restatement of thesis/summary,Hiroshima,广岛,On August 6, 1945, nuclear weapons were exploded upon the people of Hiroshima and Nagasaki in Japan. Following these atomic bombings, Japan surrendered.,广岛1945,Helen Keller (1880-1968),When she was 1 1/2, she was extremely ill, and she lost both her vision and hearing.,Helen Keller holding a Braille,book in 1955,Three Days to See,All of us have read thrilling stories in which the hero had only a limited and specified time to live. Sometimes it was as long as a year; sometimes as short as twenty-four hours, but always we were interested in discovering just how the doomed man chose to spend his last days or his last hours. I speak, of course, of free men who have a choice, not condemned criminals whose sphere of activities is strictly delimited.,Such stories set up thinking, wondering what we should do under similar circumstances. What associations should we crowd into those last hours as mortal beings? What happiness should we find in reviewing the past, what regrets?,Sometimes I have thought it would be an excellent rule to live each day as if we should die tomorrow. Such an attitude would emphasize sharply the values of life. We should live each day with a gentleness, a vigor, and a keenness of appreciation which are often lost when time stretches before us in the constant panorama of more days and months and years to come. There are those, of course, who would adopt the epicurean motto of “Eat, drink, and be merry,” most people would be chastened by the certainty of impending death.,Faithful Dog,VI. Assignment,Item 3,P. 13,P.12,1. (3) (1),(2) (4),
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