2015中考英语书面表达备考

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,中考英语书面表达高分突破,主讲教师：李丽丽,一，河南中招英语作文评分标准,书面表达，15分。考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语， 完整、准确地表达所要求的内容。分四档评分,。,第一档：符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。13-15分。,第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。912分。,第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4-8分。,第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词语。0-3分。,1. 审题不清,如有一年中考作文要求写,一项最喜欢的,课外活动,，有些考生将作文的主题定位为,“我最喜欢的活动,”，,偏离了“一项、课外活,动”这一主题,。依据作文的评分原则，若文,章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词,如何准确，都会被判为三四类作文。,中考英语作文,常见问题,分析,2.拼写,问题,拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，一般来说,两个错误扣一分，,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。,3，语法问题,语法问题主要包括：,名词单复数, 动词,的,时态与语态,以及,缺少动词,的情况, 形容词和副词的等级形式,代词,、,介词、数词和冠词的使用, 主谓一致等等方面的错误。另外,还有诸多常见的固定句式的错误。,经调查分析, 学生的语法错误主要是受母语的负迁移影响。,语法问题之,缺少动词,在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但,英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，,而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一,定要加上be动词，写成：Im tired.,误 I happy I can come to Beijing zoo.,正 I,am,happy I can come to Beijing zoo.,误 The apples cheap. Ill take some.,正 The apples,are,cheap. Ill take some.,语法问题之,代词的误用,英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误,误,I,mother and I,went to the shop to buy a present for,I,father.,正,y,mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for,my,father.,减少失分，重在夯实基础,通过前面对学生,问题,的分析，不难看出如果能学好英语这八类词：,名词 、动词 、形容词、副词、介词、数词、冠词和连词。,能正确使用,5种基本句型，两种语态,，,这些初中阶段要求掌握的基础知识，作文失分一定会大大减少。,Head Beginning,Body,Tail,Ending,Structure,Beginning,Body,Ending,Concluding sentence,结论句,Supporting sentence,支持句,（例子、实事、数据或引文）,topic sentence,主题句,Structure,开门见山，紧扣主题,总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应,总,分,总,结尾通常总结文章主要观点, 或者发表自己的观点等等.,Steps of writing,1.,Cross-question(审题),Style (,体裁,）,Person,（,人称,）,Tense（,时态,）,默读题目弄清要求,抓取有效信息,并适当分析。,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,牛刀小试,Cross-question(审题),visit friends or parents,travel,stay at home,work,Style (,体裁,）：_,Person,（,人称,）：_,Tense（,时态,）: _,调查报告，记叙文,第一人称,一般现在时,Before writing,1.,Cross-question(审题),据实描写：,适当发挥：,度假方式,细节及提倡假日休闲,Steps of writing,2.,An outline drawing,（,概略图,）,List key points(列要点),Arrange and Add (布局加首尾),如何度假,调查报告,倡议假日休闲,根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,List key points,visit friends or parents,travel,stay at home,work,列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！,List key points,1.A lot of people travel.,2.Some people stay at home.,3.Some other people visit friends or parents.,4.A few people work.,Enjoy your vacation.,visit friends or parents,travel,stay at home,work,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.,（the beginning）,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,(the key points),Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well,.,（the ending）,加(add),加首尾,总分总,Steps of writing,3.,Sentence Making,and Beautifying,word,phrase,sentence,Beautifying,内容和语言表达,内容全面，表达有新意或亮点,Steps of writing,3.,Sentence Making,and Beautifying,（美化）,word,phrase,sentence,Beautifying,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning),A lot of people travel.,Some people stay at home.,Some,other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending),most people,choose to,travel,to get away from the busy world during the holidays,.,美(beautify),方法一:善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调,英语写作技巧,Which is better?,1我希望你能帮助我。,A I hope you can help me.,B Im looking forward to your help.,2,我不吃垃圾食品。,A I dont eat junk food.,B I stay away from junk food.,3 我们应该努力取得好成绩。,A We should work hard to get good grades.,B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.,Most people,choose to,travel,to get away from the busy world during the holidays,.,S,ome people stay at home.,Some,other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,some people,like to,stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,It,makes them relaxed t,o visit friends or parents.,A few people,have to,work.,It,makes them relaxed,to visit friends or parents.,A few people,have to,work.,方法二 : 活用多种句型,避免重复和呆板,增加文采,英语写作技巧,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求,Which is better?,1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。,A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus.,B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.,missed,because of,2,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment.,B Its our duty to protect the environment.,Most people,choose to,travel,to get away from the busy world during the holidays,.,Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest,.,It,makes them relaxed,to visit friends or parents.,A few people,have to,work.,(the key points),Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻,Proverb（谚语）,方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。,英语写作技巧,加谚语(Proverb),集中注意力于学习,We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”,We should concentrate on our studies.,.,加谚语(Proverb),加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”,So,joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect.,2.Think twice before you do.,4.Do as the Romans do.,7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away,.,8.All,roads,lead,to,Rome,.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。,失败是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。,条条大路通罗马。,3.Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example,we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,Steps of writing,4.,Sentence connection,sentences,passage,Linking words,（连接词）,Try to use some,linking words,to make your writing more fluently,连(connect),How do people spend their vacation? We made a,survey and here is our report.,（the beginning）,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack,a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People who,relax well work well. （the ending,）,Most people choose to travel to get away from the,busy world during the holidays. Some people like to,stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to,have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit,friends or parents. A few people have to work.,(the body),连(connect),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.,According to it, most people choose to travel,to get away from the busy world during the,holidays.,Then,some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a,good rest.,And,it,also,makes them relaxed to,visit friends or parents.,However, a few people,have to work.,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes,Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People,Who relax well work well.,方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。,英语写作技巧,1.表示并列:,and, as well as, not onlybut also,bothand, neithernor，,2.表示递进:,besides,whats more,3.表示转折: but, however,althoughthough, after all, anyway,4.表示因果:,because, since,for,so, therefore, as a result,5.表示条件:,if, unless,关联词(connection words),6.表示对比:,instead, notbut, while, in the same way,on the one handon the other hand,7.表示解释:,for example, for instance, such as,that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth,8.表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the end； next,later,since then, from then on,9.表示强调:,also, besides, especially, actually, in fact,10.表示结论:,all in all, in a word,generally speaking, in short,关联词(connection words),Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.,He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.,We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking.,_, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,( )Its too late to invite any more people. _, you know how Tim hates parties.,A Besides B However C Still D Instead,Though,Although,instead,such as,First,Next,Finally,At last,A,Steps of writing,5,.,Checking,Spelling(拼写),Tense(时态),Grammer (语法),Handwriting(书写),Punctuation marks(标点符号),通览全文仔细检查,1.名词的单复数问题,More and more students use the mobile phone.,mobile phones,2.数的不一致、时态不一致、代词不一致以及主谓不一致等问题,Some students said they will put the mobile phone at home.,would,their mobile phones,3.时态和语态问题,Great changes were taken place there over the years.,have taken place,4.Chinglish 现象,They often compare their mobile phone good and bad.,I think we shouldnt take the mobile phone to school.,5.行文的逻辑性问题,6.词类错用,7.介词、动词等习惯搭配错误问题,典型病例,Steps of writing,6,.,Copying out,书写规范，卷面整洁,解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。,认真誊写，书写规范，卷面整洁,誊,改,连,列,审,书面,表达,Steps of writing,认真审题，勾画出要点并,适当分析.,据,文章要点及中心思想,，列出主要句型、关键词，,加上,首尾，形成提纲。,根据写作提纲和要点，,按步骤,写出,每一部分,的具体内容，用,关联词,把文章各部分,连,起来成文。,通览全文,，,检查并纠正文章中出现的,语言,错误。,认真誊写，,书写规范,，注意,卷面整洁,巧用关联词,necessary,美,善用高级词汇,活用多种句型,If possible,妙用引文和例子,Writing skills,英语写作技巧,不会表达，另辟蹊径,个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，,化难为易，化繁为简。,锦上添花，量力而行,复习和强化训练要求,热点,书面表达,1.,记,。,系统地,熟读和背诵,课文,中关于话题的一,些,句子、,句型和短文,积累写作素材,。大量的,背诵和阅读,是提高写作能力的,有效办法,。,2.,练。,对考纲上和课本中列出的所有,话题,逐一进行写作训练。,3. 写。,限时训练，提高应试能力,。,要求,20分钟内写出,80字.,质量高、内容全、形式正确,。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。,Dont be afraid of writing!,Thank you for listening!,Thank you,for listening!,