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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,What is,the most painful part,while you are taking an English exam?,目录,上一页,下一页,末页,作文 想说爱你不容易,Lillian,Writing is a kind of breathing pain,It lives in the last corner of the paper,It is painful to watch others write,While it is more painful to write myself,Anyway,writing is a kind of breathing pain,.,作文是会呼吸的痛,它活在试卷最后的角落,看别人写会痛,看自己写会痛,反正都会痛,.,How to write a good artile?,目录,上一页,下一页,末页,Practice makes perfect.,-孰能生巧。,目录,上一页,下一页,末页,学习目标：,1.通过考情分析，能说出词中考作文的写作技巧。,2.通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练习。,3.通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树立写作信心。,考情分析,方法指导,典例精析,备战演练,目录,1,2,3,4,目录,上一页,下一页,末页,分析近几年河南中招真题可知，书面表达常见的类型分为三类：命题、半命题、无命题这三种形式。文体以记叙文为主，话题为写人叙事类、事物介绍类、发表观点类和咨询建议类。词数均为80词左右。,考情分析,思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？,（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构；,（2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强；,（3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒；,（4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。,方法指导,作为一名初中生，每天面对着沉重的学业，拥有,健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请,以How to keep fit 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈,如何保持身体健康。,要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；,2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；,3.80词左右。,备战演练（第一周周考作文）,Bad sample（0-3分）,Students healthy is important.Even though have a good hard.But havent healthy is not good.,Have a good fit is very important.,1.要点全,BadGood（4-8分）,2.简单句,1.列全要点,Beginning:,Body:(3个方面),1.锻炼身体,2.良好的饮食习惯,3.保持好心情,Ending：,2.简单句,翻译：保持健康是很重要的。,Keep healthy is very important.,Keeping healthy is very important.,找动词V(2),保留一个谓语动词,简单句翻译原则（1个V）,Ving,Ving+,V谓语,+to do,V原,1.并列句,GoodBetter（9-12分）,2.连接词,We should have good eating habits,and,keep away from junk food.,1.并列句（句与句）,We should,not only,have good eating habits,but also,keep away from junk food.,简单句+连词+简单句,并列句连词,1.,并列关系,and,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor,2.,选择关系,or,eitheror,3.,转折关系,but,while,4.,因果关系,for,so,2.连接词基础模板,1.开头句 引入,2.主体 观点,Firstly,要点1,Secondly,要点2,Thirdly,要点3.,结尾句 总结 In a word,点睛句,逻辑结构连词加强版,三点型：,首先：,to begin with，to start with,其次：,besides,whats more,and then,最后：,finally,last but not least,两点型：,一方面：,on the one hand,另一方面：,on the other hand,总结,：,Generally speaking,In general,As middle school students,keeping fit is very important for us.To keep fit,I have some good advice.,To begin with,We should do exercise every day,such as running,walking.,Whats more,We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.We can eat more fruits and vegetables.,Finally,we should keep us happy,it is the most important part.,I hope my advice is useful.Lets take action now!,Better,1.各种从句,BetterBest（13-15分）,2.高级词汇,形式：,主句+,连接词,+从句,连接词,+从句，主句,1.各种从句,宾语从句,We should do exercise every day.,I think,we should do exercise every day.,使用提示：表达想法建议,条件状语从句,We should keep us happy,it is the most important.,If,we keep us happy all the time,we will be much healthier.,使用提示：表达想法建议,定语从句,We should have good eating habits.,We should have some,eating habits,which are good for us.,使用提示：修饰名词,表语从句,We should have good eating habits.,My advice is that,our,eating habits should be healthier for us.,使用提示：我的.是.,1.I think/hope+句子.,2.If+从句，主句.,3.主+谓+N+定从,4.My+N is that 句子.,常用从句模板,goodwonderful,likeenjoybe fond of,happyjoyful,verysoextremely,manyplenty of,want feel like,importantplay an important role in,shouldbe supposed to/be expected to,to(为了）in order to,高级词汇,As a middle school students,It is very important for us to keep fit,.,In order to,keep fit,I have some good advice.,To begin with,I think,we,are supposed to,do exercise every day,such as running,walking.,Whats more,We,are expected to,have some eating habits,which are good for us,.,Finally,keeping us happy all the time is also important.,If,our moods are happier,we will be healthier.,I hope,my advice is useful.,If we take action now,we must be healthy.,Best,字如其人,总结回顾：,1.badgood,要点全，简单句,2.goodbetter,并列句，连接词,3.betterbest,从句，高级词汇,4.书写漂亮,在每个人心中，总会渴望拥有某样,东西,。你想要拥有什么？请你以,I want to have _ 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈,你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受,。,要求：,1.请补全题目，如 a football,a mountain bike,或 a magic paintbrush等；,2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；,3.词数80词左右。,实战演练（2015年中考真题）,37,I want to have,a camera,Some people want to have plenty of money,some people want to have great power.But unlike them,I simply want to have a camera.,My reason are as follows.,To start with,Id like to keep those sweet memories through my life.And,if I have a camera,the photos I take can,remind me of,my experience.,Whats more,I hardly have time to draw perfect pictures,but,taking photos,takes less time,and,can also bring joy of beauty to my daily life.,Certainly,I will feel excited,if I get a camera of my own,.I can lead a colorful life with my camera.,38,I want to have a mountain bike,There is no doubt,that,everyone dreams of having something.As for me,I want to have a mountain bike.The reasons can be as follows.,First of all,a mountain bike can be very useful,because riding it to school,can save a lot of time.I neednt worry about being late any more.,Besides,its also helpful for me to,take some exercise.I believe I will lead a,healthier life.,Whats more,when I go out with friends,it will,be more convenient to,ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.,If I have a mountain bike,I will be excited and satisfied.Hope it will come true one day.,1.,高考,作文不同于“自由写作”,高考作文为了达到
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