高考英语作文指导

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,English Writing(1),Shen,Qi,高考英语作文考查语言的能力范围,：,从历年来看，其考查学生语言运用能力的,范围主要体现在以下三方面：,1.,所表达的语言内容是否切题。,2.,语言表达是否通顺、流畅，是否存在翻,译的痕迹和中国式英语。,3.,句法、结构、语法（包括：时态、语态，单,复数，各类从句，介词等）是否正确。文中使,用的词汇是否贴切、精炼、或单一、重复,。,高考作文评分标准：,1,）内容,10,分,2,）语言,10,分,3,）组织结构为,5,分。,所以内容贴切，语言流畅，组织结构层次感清楚，句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间自然衔接的文章就能得高分。,学生存在的问题,1.,审题能力差易偏离主题,2.,材料分析不够，要点遗漏,3.,语言运用能力差，不符合英语习惯,4.,行文不流畅，不能有效地衔接,高分策略：遣词，造句，谋篇,遣词的原则：使用高等级词汇及短语,如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇,而且一味的重复低水平的英语知识点,还远远没有达到大学的入学要求。这就要求考生在平时的训练和考试当中，有意识的强化“复杂，高级”这两个概念，使自己的作文能力区别于普通学生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一个比别人高的位置上，充分显示自己的实力。,造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用，句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。,写好句子的方法一：合并句子,It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers.,Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.,写好句子的方法二：改写句子,1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (,改成介词短语做伴随状语,),Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses,.,2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (,使用,sothat,结构改写句子,),The ice on the lake is so thin that we cant skate on it.,练习方法三：一句多译,I spent 300,yuan,on the book.,I paid 300,yuan,for the book,.,.,The price of the book is 300,yuan,It cost me 300,yuan,to buy the book.,The book cost me 300,yuan,.,我不懂什么英语，李明也不懂。,I dont know any English, nor does Li Ming.,I hardly know any English, nor /neither,does Li Ming.,I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming.,I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming.,I know no more English than Li,Ming does.,I know as little English as Li Ming does.,一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。,On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down,everything I had seen.,As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.,As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.,The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen.,No sooner had I arrived home than,I wrote down everything I had seen,昨天下午他才来,He came here yesterday afternoon.,He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.,Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.,It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here.,It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.,谋篇的原则,：,满分作文都有个共性,就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的,连贯性,和,紧凑感,是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位,如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。,常见的句子之间的连接手段有：,使用代词指代上一句中的名词,重复使用上一句中的词,使用连接词,使用平行结构,高考大纲中常用的连接词,:,表并列补充关系的,: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition,表因果关系的,: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that,表条件关系的,: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else,表转折对比关系的,: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not onlybut also, herethere, years agotoday, thisthat, the formerthe latter, thennow, the firstwhereas the second, oncenow, on one handon the other hand, some , others ,表时间关系的,: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden,表换一种方式表达,: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way,表进行举例说明,: for instance, for example, like, such as,表陈述事实,: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth,表特定的顺序关系,:,above all, first of all, firstly, secondly,next, finally, in the end, at last,表总结,:,on the whole, in short, all in all,at last, in a word,范文,假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫，一直通过有关网站关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：,1.,自我介绍；,2.,祝贺苏琳生日；,3.,感谢工作人员；,4.,索取苏琳三岁生日照。,注意；,1.,词数,120-150,左右；,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.,开头语已为你写好。,Dear Sir/Madam,Yours truly,Li,Hua,Dear Sir/ Madam, Greetings from China!,Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.,Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that,Baiyun,gave birth to her daughter,Sulin,and Ive been watching her grow on your website. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which,Sulin,and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of,Sulin,taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li,Hua,Homework:,Directions: Write an English composition in,120-150 words according to the instructions,given below in Chinese.,假定你是李华。 你购买了一部某外国公司,生产的手机，有质量问题。请你写一,封信，要求该公司更换。,Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Li,Hua, and Im a middle school student from Shanghai. I have loved pandas deeply since my childhood. Im delighted to learn that,Sulin,was born at your zoo and Ive been learning everything about her and her mother,Baiyun,from your website for about three years. Now she will be three years old. I want to wish her a happy birthday and give my thanks to you for your hard work, without which,Sulin,and her parents wouldnt live a happy life in the US now. Id like to have a picture of,Sulin, which is taken on her birthday. Could you help me? Im looking forward to your early reply. Thanks a lot. Yours truly Li,Hua,