高中英语作文教学课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语写作讲解,漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：,作文的卷面,Which composition feels more attractive, why?,影响给分的因素之二：,文中所采用的语言材料,人靠衣装，文靠词装,A.,词汇,的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜,；,B,.,句型,结构运用灵活多变;,Practice,Find some similar words or phrases of the followings,good,2. think,3.clever,perfect,excellent outstanding pleasant,wonderful,favorable,magnificent,in ones opinion/view,hold the view that,it is widely shared that,wise bright smart intelligent cute,影响给分的因素之三：,行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成,正确而巧妙地使用好,连接词,and,then,also,besides,morever,whats,more,furthermore,in,addition,more,than that.,1.,表递进,.,表转折,.,表因果,.,表目的,.,表归纳,but,however,although,though,in,spite,of,despite,after,all,on,the,contrary,on,the other hand.,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently,as a result/,consequence,on,account of.,in order,that,so,that,for,the purpose of.,in,general,in,brief,in,short,in,conclusion,in a,word,on,the whole.,高考作文类型：,A.,数据说明类文章,B.,提示议论文类文章,C.,看图说话类文章,影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个,因素,1.,语篇信息是否完整,2.,行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。,3.,是否使用高级词汇,4.,是否使用复杂句,5 .,卷面整洁,书写工整,写作基本步骤：,仔细审题，列举大纲。,围绕要点，写出句子。,添加过度，确保连贯。,先求正确，再求灵活。,认真眷写，卷面整洁。,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。,的学生认为,的学生认为,应该春游,不应该春游,接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,高考临近，没有心情玩,活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,春游耽误学习,How to write a good composition,Introduction (topic),Body,(supporting ideas),Conclusion,Can you list the outline of the writing?,The outline of the writing:,Conclusion paragraph: ,Introduction paragraph: ,Point 2,Body,Point 1,supporting idea 1,supporting idea 2,supporting idea 1,supporting idea 2,Key words:,1.introduction(topic):,高三学生（,senior 3 students,）,春游,(go spring outing,）,讨论（,discussion,）,2.body(supporting ideas):,接触自然（,be,close to nature,）,呼吸新鲜空气（,breathe some fresh air,）,精神放松（,relax themselves,）,大脑休息（,rest their brains,）,高考临近（,with college entrance examination drawing near,）,没心情玩（,dont feel like going,）,耽误学习,(,waste the time,),3.conclusion:,in my opinion,Key words:,中学生,middle school students,身体差,in a poor state of health,In bad condition,充足的睡眠,enough sleep,加强锻炼，增加户外活动,take more exercise and do more outdoor activities,定时吃饭少吃零食,have three meals,regularly,eat,less non-staple,food.,讲卫生,Form/develop the habit of hygiene,主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性,How will you start you passage?,问句：, ,从句：, ,Introduction:,（,sample,）,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?,We have had a heated discussion.,巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系,Pay special attention to the transition sentences:,Opinions,are divided on the question.,What will you say？,Your answer？,The body part,Point1: 65%,的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）,Sentence pattern:,Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to ,Most students, about 65%, are,for,the idea that Senior 3 students should,go spring outing,.,Reason1,：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,Sentence pattern:,They think it good to do,sth,/,sth,do good to,sth,In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do,sth,Eg:They,think it good for their health to,be close to,nature and breathe some fresh air,Reason 2:,活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连接）,递进,whats more,；,besides ; moreover ; in addition,；,furthermore,Eg,: they can,relax,themselves for a while and,rest,their brains,so that,they will be more energetic.,Conclusion:,小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应,。,Eg,: They think it will,do good to,their students.,Point 2:,的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）,注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）,Sentence pattern:,However, others prefer to,Some others have just the opposite opinion.,On the other hand.,Eg,: On the other hand, about 35% students are,against,the idea.,Reason 1:,高考临近，没有心情玩,Sentence pattern:,They say/believe/hold the opinion that.,Eg,:,They say that with college entrance examination,drawing near, they dont,feel like going,anywhere.,Reason 2:,春游耽误学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连接）,Eg:,Besides, they think,going spring outing,will,take at least,a day,off.,They cant,afford,the time. They think they should,fix their attention on,their studies,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.,On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies,表示观点对比类写作套语,A.,总起,:,Opinions are divided on this question.,Different people hold different / opposite opinions.,People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards ,People have different opinions on this problem.,People take different views on this question.,B.,表达观点一,:,of them hold the opinion that .,of them are in favor of the idea that,People who are for the idea think ,C.,表达不同观点之间的衔接,:,However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion.,People who are against it dont think so.,However, every coin has two sides.,Different from those., people think .,On the other hand, people think .,D.,结尾常用套语,:,In my opinion/Personally, ,As far as Im concerned, ,In short/ in brief/ in a word, ,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.,On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.,Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that,On the other hand, about 35% students are,against the idea.,表列举说明的关联词,:,Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly Thirdly,In the first place In the second place,In the third place,Finally/ Last but not least/, .,表示递进、强调的关联词,. Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.,On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.,Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that,On the other hand, about 35% students are,against the idea.,whats more,Besides,A,、运用高级词汇或短语,B,、增加形容词或副词,C,、灵活运用各种句型,亮点点拨,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.,Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that,Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and,whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students.,On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.,They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere.,Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.,be close to,energetic,feel,like going,afford,fix their,attention on,heated,fresh,Homework:,Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.,Thank you!,