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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,1.日记,1,文体概述,英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点：,一、格式,英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最后写天气。(例如：Friday February 26th, 2016 Sunny),二、时态,谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。,2,三、写正文时应注意的问题,1. 围绕一个主题来展开。,2. 若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”。,3. 结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。,3,常用语块,因为,_,2.,对,感到惊讶,_,3.,对,严格要求,_,4.,为,做好准备,_,5.,到达,_,get to/reach/arrive at (in),because of (doing) sth. / because+句子,be surprised at,be strict in/with,get/be ready for,4,6. 给一些忠告/建议,_,7. 帮助某人做某事_,8. 出发；动身 _,9. 发生 _,10. 积极参加 _,take an active part in,givesome advice on,help sb. with sth.,set off,take place,5,11. 散步/休息 _,12. 采取有效措施做某事,_,13. 乘坐公交车/火车/自行车,_,14. 拍照 _,15. 在家/在上班 _,be at home/ be at work,take a walk / take a rest/break,take effective measures to do sth.,by bus/ train/ bike (take a bus/ train/ bike to),take photos/ pictures,6,套用句式,今天我在广州经历了一件难忘的事。,2.,昨晚我和一些好朋友去,KTV,唱歌。,3.,这是我第一次做,2. Last night I went to the KTV with some of my good friends.,1. I had an unforgettable experience in Guangzhou today.,3. This was the first time that I had done sth.,7,4. 在公园散步的时候，我遇到一个外国人正在欣赏城市的美景。,5. 首先，其次，此外，最后，,4. When I was taking a walk in the park, I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city.,5. First, Besides, Whats more, Finally, ,8,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文),Wednesday July 20, 2015 Fine,Yesterday I went to Qingdao with my family by the train. The sunshine and fresh air there made us,comfortably. We went to the seaside, where the sea,was as blue as the sky. Bathing in the sunshine on,the beach were really an enjoyable thing. I picked,up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.,comfortable,was,9,There we buy many interesting souvenirs. I was,planning to send them my friends. We ate many,thing there, such as fish, prawn(大虾), beef and so,on. They were very delicious. At night they lived,in a hotel nearby where was clean and tidy but,the price was reasonable. Qingdao is such a beautiful and interesting place that it is well worth see a second time.,bought,to,things,we,which/that,and,seeing,10,1. 去掉train前的the因为乘坐交通工具不用定冠词the。,2. comfortably comfortable作宾补用形容词。,3. were was动名词作主语谓语动词用单数。,4. buy bought这是一篇日记，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。,5. 在my friends前加to表示“把某物送给某人”用send sth. to sb.。,11,6. thing things根据前面的many可知要用thing的复数形式。,7. they we根据上下逻辑关系，应是“我们”晚上住在宾馆。,8. where which/that先行词是hotel，指物，故用which/that引导定语从句。,9. but and表示“顺承”关系用并列连词and，译为“而且”。此处并无“转折”关系。,10. see seeing固定结构be well worth doing意为“某事很值得做”，是主动表被动。,12,课堂练习,假设你是李华，今天(星期日，3月20日，晴)在公园爬山时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下：,1. 想跟他谈话却不知所措。,2. 你向他介绍你的城市。,3. 他给你一些学习的建议。,注意：,1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。,13,Sunday March 20, 2016 Fine,This morning when I was,taking a walk,in the park, I,saw a foreigner enjoying,the beauty of the city.,This was the first time that I had seen,a foreigner. I wanted to talk with him, but I was,so excited and nervous that,I didnt know what to do and how to start a conversation, though I did well in English classes.,14,Eager to practise,my spoken English, I encouraged myself and went to,say hello and welcome to,him. He was very friendly and we talked for about 15 minutes.,As a native, I introduced some,tourist attractions,and tasty food to him. Finally, he,gave me some advice on,how to,further improve,my English. It was,more than an experience,!,15,课外作业,假设你是李华，今天(星期六，4月2日，多云)学校组织去科学馆参加题为“Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”的活动。请围绕这次活动写一篇日记。要点如下：,1. 野生动植物的现状。,2. 保护野生动植物的意义。,3. 保护野生动植物的措施。,注意：,1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。,16,Saturday April 2, 2016 Cloudy,This afternoon I,took part in,an,organized,activity,with the theme of,“Human Activities and Wildlife Protection” in the science museum. From the activity, I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of peoples harmful activities,which causes a decrease of,wildlife.,Besides,many people hunt wild animals for their meat and money.,17,To make matters worse, in response, the decrease is,doing harm to,peoples life. So it is necessary to,take effective measures,to,protect our environment, such as,creating wildlife reserves,and,passing laws to raise the awareness of,wildlife protection. Wild animals are friends of our human beings. To protect them is to protect ourselves.,All in all, I,benefited a lot from,todays activity.,18,