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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,专题十六 书面表达,高考英语,(江苏省专用),A组 自主命题江苏卷题组,Writing 1(2021江苏),请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,五年高考,Saturday Afternoon. In a Shopping Centre.,Li Jiang:Hi, Su Hua. Which movie shall we see?,Su Hua:Whatever. Weve got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West.Each sounds great!,Li Jiang:Yeah!And some movie stars are fantastic.,Su Hua:And the high-tech!.,Li Jiang:Perfect!Lets get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.,Su Hua:No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.,One Day in 2021. At Home.,Son:Mum, shall we go and see a film tonight?,Mother:Why bother?We can stay at home and watch films online. It,s convenient with our new and,faster network.,Son:But it feels good in a cinema.,Mother:And the price.We have to pay 50,yuan,a ticket.,Son:Only 10,yuan,more than last year.,Mother:But still we cannot get the money,s worth. Some films are just boring.,写作内容,1.用约30个单词概述,柱状图,信息的主要内容;,2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两,点);,3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。,写作要求,1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;,2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;,3.不必写标题。,评分标准,内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案,写作提示,1.本文以第三人称为主,时态主要是一般现在时。,2.文章要点:用约30个词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;阐述我国票房收入变化的原因(不少于两点);阐述对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并提出23个理由。,Possible version one:,The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2021 to over 40 billion in 2021. However, that increase slowed down in 2021.,The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2021 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.,Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is pos-sible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-,office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.,Possible version two:,As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2021 to 2021, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2021.,The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming tech-nology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the internet plays an important part. On the internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a dis-count as well, which is both time-saving and economical.,However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.,精彩语句,1.精美词汇slowdown,n,.减速account for是,的原因on offer可买到的,2.出彩结构On the internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets,at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.(which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 2(2021江苏),请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。,In recent years, Internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teach-erand the “Cutest Baby.,Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officercompetition, orga-nized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.,Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singercompetition. He has al-ready received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.,写作内容,1.用约30 个单词写出上文概要;,2.用约120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用23 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。,写作要求,1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;,2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;,3.不必写标题。,评分标准,内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案,写作提示,1.本文为读写作文,以第三人称为主,时态主要为一般现在时。,2.文章要点:用约30个词概括原文,阐述对网络投票的看法,并提供23个理由或论据。,Possible Version One:,Online voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it.,It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.,In my opinion,online voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is,no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events,in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting,easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant,feedback possible.,To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are di-,vided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some partici-,pation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online voting.,Possible Version Two:,Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.,In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don,t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-net-working resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.,In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.,精彩词句,1.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek sup-ports.,精彩点:灵活运用短语make no difference以及in which引导的定语从句。,2.Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.,精彩点:take advantage of在此句中表示“利用,占廉价。,Writing 3(2021江苏),请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,写作内容,1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;,2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;,3.根据你的分析,从社会标准(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。,写作要求,1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;,2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;,3.不必写标题。,评分标准,内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案,写作提示,本文为图表类任务型读写作文。主体时态为一般现在时。文章可分三段来写,写作时注意句子之间和段落之间衔接词的使用,以使行文流畅。,写作要点,1.用约30词简要概括材料要点:交通问题不仅影响人们的日常生活,还威胁人们的生命。,2.导致交通问题的主要原因:,大规模的道路建设;,私家车不断增加;,开车人、骑车人及行人不遵守交通规那么。,3.从社会标准和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。,One possible version:,The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten peo-ples lives.The three selections presented above are typical examples.,Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and,highways,there is still much room for improvement,because of the ever increasing number of cars,these years.What,s worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic,rules.,In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone don,t secure an,orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that matter.It is everybody,s duty to observe them,to keep our society in order and going on the right track.,精彩词句,1.Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.,精彩点:此句在段首,既承上启下又点明段意;运用短语give rise to“引起。,2.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.,精彩点:此句用了虚拟语气。运用短语in chaos“混乱。,Writing 4(2021江苏),请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。,When we read newspapers,we often come across such English words as “AIDSand“PK.When we watch TV,we frequently hear words like “NBAor “PM2.5.When we speak,we au-tomatically use words like “OUT or “Bye-bye.English words and expressions like these are getting popular.They have already become part of our daily language.And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.,The inclusion has started a heated discussion.A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words,which,they think,goes against Chinese language policies.They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also con-cerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language.However,others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language.They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.,写作内容,1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;,2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:,(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;,(2)用23个理由或论据支撑你的观点。,写作要求,1.可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;,2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;,3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;,4.不必写标题。,评分标准,内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当。,答案,写作提示,本文为任务型读写作文,属于议论文的范围。主体时态为一般现在时,用第三人称写。本文要特,别注意思想的辩证性,看待问题要一分为二,不能绝对化。,写作要点,1.用约30词简要概括材料要点:很多英语单词进入中文词典。,2.发表观点:,支持者:随着学习英语的人越来越多,人们也能理解这些词的意思,不影响阅读。而且这是文,化融合的一种表现。,反对者:这是一种文化污染,会影响这些词的纯真的发音等,同时对于那些英语不好的人还是,一种偏见等。,One possible version:,支持:,Today,more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language.Even the,Dictionary,of,Contemporary,Chinese,includes 239 English words.Some people support it while others do not.,Generally,I am in favour of the inclusion.As the number of English learners is on the rise,its not dif-ficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.Besides,it is,on some occasions,more convenient to use English words.Most people nowadays use “IT instead of its translation “xinxi jishu.In our global village,we can see that its not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages.In English,there are many words borrowed from Latin,French,or even Chinese.,So,its safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communica-tion.,反对:,With English words getting popular in both media and daily life,a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them,leaving the public divided into two opposing groups:“Forand“Against.,I tend to take the “Againstside for two reasons.Firstly,this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue.Sooner or later,many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones.And,rules dont tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as “WiFiand“Outin a Chinese way!Secondly,such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated a-gainst those with little knowledge of English.Just for one illustration,while college students take,“Bye-byefor granted when parting from each other,it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to “zaijian.,In short,not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese,it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.,精彩词句,So, it,s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communica-,tion.,精彩点:运用句型It,s safe to conclude.;facilitate,vt,. 促进,帮助。,Writing 5(2021江苏),请根据你对以下两幅图的理解,以“Actions Speak Louder than Words为题,用英语写一篇作文。,参考词汇:,banner(横幅)stump(树桩),你的作文应包括以下内容:,1.简要描述两幅图的内容;,2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;,3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。,注意:,1.可参照图片适当发挥;,2.作文词数150左右;,3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。,Actions Speak Louder than Words,答案,写作提示,本文是一篇看图作文,给出题目、图画和内容要求,要求写一篇观点类的议论文。本文描述某种,日常生活中的现象,动词时态应用一般现在时。,写作要点,1.图画描述:,第一幅图里有一棵树,周围都是树桩,一个人想在这颗树上挂上标语,但没法挂;,第二幅图里一对夫妇正在植树。,2.对文中两种做法的理解:我们的地球遭到破坏,我们应该行动起来保护地球,而不是在那儿空喊,口号。,3.两幅图的启示:多做实事少说空话,并举例说明。,One possible version:,Actions Speak Louder than Words,People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1,a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree,surrounded by stumps,but in vain,while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.,The message conveyed here is clear:“Actions speak louder than words. Our earth is suffering se-vere damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate actions should be taken,like stopping cutting down trees,to better the environment.,Actions are important in other fields,too.Instead of shouting empty slogans,it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules,stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words to actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.,精彩词句,Instead of shouting empty slogans,it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to chil-,dren in need.,精彩点:instead of.而不是,常用结构,用在句中增强句子结构、增强表达力度。,B组统一命题、省(区、市)卷题组,考点一读写类作文,Writing (2021浙江),On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had en-couraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.,Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog!he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.,Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing,open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).,Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.,He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.,At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.,注意:,1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;,2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;,3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;,4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Paragraph 1:,The,car,abruptly,stopped,in,front,of,him,.,Paragraph 2:,A,few,minutes,later,the,other,cyclists,arrived,.,答案,One possible version:,Paragraph 1:,The,car,abruptly,stopped,in,front,of,him,.,Mac,rushed down from his,bicycle,and waved at the people,inside the,car,for help.,Paul,and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb into the,car, in spite of the danger that the fierce,wolf,was running near. They quickly pushed Mac into their,car and closed all the doors as hard as possible. Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the car for,some time and then left unwillingly.,Paragraph 2:,A,few,minutes,later,the,other,cyclists,arrived,. Mac,s,friends,were shocked to hear the story and very,grateful to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his,home,for dinner and he introduced,his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life. During the dinner they recalled the,adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such dangerous situations.,精彩语句,1.精美词汇fierce,adj,.凶猛的,2.出彩结构Paul and Becky inside the car.was running near.(that引导同位语从句),考点二图画、图表类作文,Writing 1(2021北京,第二节),假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。,注意:词数不少于60。,提示词:视频 video,答案,写作提示,1.本文应以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。,2.制作毕业纪念视频的全过程应该包括讨论分工、收集素材、编辑制作以及放映视频四个方,面。,One possible version:,Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discus-,sion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.,Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pic-,tures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to,put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several,days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The stu-,dents and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.,精彩语句,1.精美词汇experience,n,.经历aspect,n,.方面,2.出彩结构We debated over what to put into the video.(疑问词+不定式结构),Writing 2(2021北京,第二节),假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth为题,给校刊“英语角写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。,注意:词数不少于60。,提示词:地球日Earth Day,答案,写作提示,1.本文属于图表类作文,主体时态应为一般过去时。,2.文章要点是对同学们参加学校“地球日系列活动的介绍。,(1)第一段:获知活动信息;,(2)第二段:介绍整个活动过程,即具体所做的事情。主要是对废旧物品进行再利用,并把物品赠送给了老人和孩子们;,(3)第三段:总结。,One possible version:,A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the ac-tions for a greener earth.,Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, hand-bags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and,elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the stu-dents of our school.,We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.,Writing 3(2021福建),请阅读下面图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。,内容要求:,1.描述画面;,2.概述其含义;,3.谈谈个人感想。,注意:,1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;,2.可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、行文连贯;,3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。,参考词汇:凿,钻bore,In the picture,答案,写作提示,本文为图画类作文。主题是古时候的一那么成语“凿壁偷光。要注意题中所给的信息,不可偏题。用第三人称写,主体时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。,写作要点,1.描述图画:,描述要突出:小男孩衣衫褴褛但很专心地看书,木头桌子破旧;一束微弱的光从墙上一个小洞里射进来。,2.概述其含义:,本图取自中国古代成语“凿壁偷光;,概述其内容:小男孩因家里穷,买不起蜡烛,只好在墙上凿个洞,从邻居家“偷光夜读;,故事给人的启示:努力获取知识;不管环境多么糟糕,都不要轻易被击败,渗透“刻苦求学的思想。,3.谈个人感想。,One possible version:,In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his read-ing.,This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy,being poor,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to“steallight from his neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.,Of course,things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should t
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