公选课大学英语写作分析

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,公选课大学英语写作分析,College English Practical Writing,- CET-,一概况,1. 要求：考生在写作方面能做笔 记，写提纲，能就一定的话题或提纲在30分钟内写出不低于120词的短文，另外，考生能够写短信和便条。并且，写出的文章要内容切题，文字通顺，表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误。,2. CET-4写作演变与趋势,二评分原则,1. CET-4检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求，对作文的评判以此要求为准则。,2. CET-4作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Award Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。,3. 该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。,三评分标准,1. 满分15分。,2. 阅卷标准共分五档次：2分、5 分、8分、11分及14分，依作文水平可在本档次内上下浮动1分。,3. 细化评分标准：,2分 - 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。,5分 - 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。,8分 - 基本切题。有些地方表达不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。,11分- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。,14分- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。,4. 字数不足酌情扣分,累计字数,110-119,100-109,90-99,80-89,70-79,60-69,50-59,低于49,扣分,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,9,四题型把握,1命题范围,（1）学习与校园生活,（2）社会发展变化,（3）常识、格言,(),社会热点,2. 命题体裁,（1）论说文,（2）记叙文,（3）图表作文,（4）应用文,3. 作文类型模块化,（,1）对立观点型,（2）问题解决型,（3）说明利弊型,（4）阐述主题型,（5）图表八股型,（6）应用直白型,（7）夹叙夹议型,五写作步骤,1审题,2构思,3选择合适框架,4下笔,5检查修改,六高分要诀-闪光点的凸现,句型的使用,连贯性的处理,遣词,干涩、枯燥文句的处理,语法规范的文句,1. 以there开始的句型,2. 以数词和量词开始的句型,3. 以介词开始的句型,4. 以副词和副词短语开始的句型,句型的使用,句型的使用,5. 以although, if, when, while, now that, since 及as引导的句型,6. it做形式主语和做形式宾语,7. 反问句,8. 非谓语做状语,9. 倒装,句型的使用,10. The more, the more,11. 虚拟语气,12. 插入,13. 并列,14. 强调,15. 各种修辞手段,连贯性的处理,举例,as an illustration; to illustrate;,namely; as a proof; incidentally;,a good case in point; specifically;,for instance; for exle; such as,连贯性的处理,次序,first(ly); first of all; first and foremost; first of all;,in the first place; in the beginning; to start with;,to begin with; presently; currently; at present;,temporarily; immediately; comparatively,eventually; last but not the least; lately,连贯性的处理,原因,for; as; since; now that;,on account of; given that;,owing to; due to; thanks to;,because; because of; in that;,considering that; seeing that,连贯性的处理,强调,above all; understandably; obviously;,as a matter of fact; literally; surely;,actually; factually; virtually; truly;,theoretically; particularly;,in particular; predictably;,practically; undoubtedly;,连贯性的处理,增补,besides; equally important; in addition;,furthermore; whats more; moreover;,additionally; in other words; likewise;,to put it another way; to repeat;,连贯性的处理,对比或对照,by contrast; in contrast; conversely; yet;,on the other hand; otherwise; whereas;,not only, but also; by comparison;,in the same way; in the same manner;,while; meanwhile; at the same time;,instead; on the contrary; similarly;,likewise; unlike;,连贯性的处理,转折或让步,after all; although; but for; though; clearly;,in spite of; nevertheless; however; still;,except for; on the contrary; or else;,in a sense; otherwise; yet;,at any rate; in any case;,It is true that, but;,True that, but,连贯性的处理,结论或结果,accordingly; as a result; consequently;,in consequence; therefore; in this way;,hence; for this(these) reason(s); in short;,as has been mentioned/noted/stated above;,eventually; in the end; in a word; all in all;,连贯性的处理,结论或结果,in brief; in conclusion; to conclude;,on the whole; at length; personally;,in sum; to sum up; in summary;,briefly; in general; generally;,generally speaking;,遣词,因为,关于,经常,很;非常,越来越,应该,当前;现在,许许多多,大部分,一些,on account of; owing to; in that; seeing that,concerning; surrounding; regarding,frequently; commonly; normally,exceptionally; significantly; extremely,increasingly; an increasing number of,be supposed / expected / obliged / to do,currently; presently; at present,a great many; many a; a large number of ,A vast / An overwhelming majority of,A number of; quite a few;,干涩、枯燥文句的处理,1.句型延伸,He is a student.,2. 添加副词与形容词,We should take measures against pollution.,We take measures against pollution.,are obliged to,effective,efficient,and,immediately,serious / water,Wish You All Great Success!,