初中英语写作技巧-完整版ppt课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,初中英语书面表达,写作技巧指导,初中英语书面表达,1,Learning aims:,了解中考英语书面表达的评分标准。,掌握书面表达的类型及写作技巧。,能够应用写作技巧及所学知识，完成书面表达的写作。,Learning aims:,2,中考作文评分标准（,5+1,）,第一档（,13-15,分）,信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。,第二档（,10-12,分）,信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。,第三档（,7-9,分）,能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。,第四档（,4-6,分）,只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。,第五档（,0-3,分）,只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,书写,(,卷面,),：,隐藏的评分标准！,中考作文评分标准（5+1）第一档（13-15分）书写(卷面),3,书写注意事项,3,、一旦写错，规范修改,用一条斜线划掉即可。,eg:,He can speker English very well.,He can speker speak English very well.,Talk about it in your group,.,1,、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。,作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。,2,、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象,给人一种凌乱的感觉。,Game,书写注意事项3、一旦写错，规范修改用一条斜线划掉即可。,4,英文字母示例,英文字母示例,5,单从书写上看,猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,单从书写上看,6,中考各档书面表达示例,15,中考各档书面表达示例15,7,4,分,6,4分6,8,3,3,9,Remember,：,We must pay attention to our handwriting, it can help us get a high grade.,Remember：We must pay attention,10,作文框架：,标 题,开头：,Do you know,_,?,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,First,you can. . .,Second,you can. . .,.,Third,you can. . .,.,Next,you can. . .,.,Then,you should. . .,At last,you should. . .,正文：,结尾：,All in all,if,you,do like these, Im sure,you,can _,_.,+,V,原,+,V,原,Let me tell you something about it.,作文框架：标 题开头：Do you know _,11,一、书写规范,卷面整洁。,一、书写规范, 卷面整洁。,12,写作的两个层次,抄，照着原文或,表格,抄,有分，但比较低,低层次,自己写： 参考，借用原文中的句子,或信息,，进行适当的修改,分数高,较高层次,写作的两个层次抄，照着原文或表格抄有分，但比较低低层次自己写,13,自己怎样写英语作文：,(,学会,迁移,),1,审题： 人称，,时态,， 要点,(,有中文提示,),2,扣题，巧妙开头,3,借用原文或表格中的,句子,或信息,，,适当改写,或扩充,4,(,如有中文提示的,),应用简单的句子或自己,会的句子来写,并,加入自己的想法或观点,(,评价,),5,检查，修改,自己怎样写英语作文：(学会迁移)1 审题： 人称，时态， 要,14,评价性的句子（,正反两方面的词,）：,评价事情：,I think it is,interesting,/,funny/ ,评价物：,I think i,t is,beautiful.,(terrible/ expensive / cheap/ useful/ ),评价人、心情：,I think,he,(she ),is very,happy,.,(friendly / kind/),评价性的句子（正反两方面的词）：,15,巧妙开头：,Do you know,how to get good grades in the exam?,How to get good grades in the exam.,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,Jim,巧妙利用原文句子：用,连词,将这些句子连起来,：,First, Second, Third, Next,Then At last.,结尾照应开头：,All in all,if you do like these, Im sure you can get good grades in the exam.,巧妙开头：Do you know how to get g,16,First,you d better,not write your answers before you read over the whole exam paper.,Second,you can,choose the problems that seem easy to you and do them first.,Third,Next,.Then(,选择其中的一、两点填进去）,All in all,if you can do like these, I am sure you can get good grades in the exam.,Do you know,how to get good grades in the exam?,How to get good grades in the exam.,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,Tom,First, you d better not w,17,How to get on with our parents.,Let me tell you something about it.,First,we can,find a good time to talk with our parents.,For example, when we are eating dinner, going out for,a walk or watching TV.,Second,we can,tell them,something we are interested in or ask them about their,lives when they were young.,Third,we can,listen to,them carefully and watch them quietly.,Next,we can,share our thoughts and feelings with them.,At last,we,should,be honest. Our parents will trust us more.,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,Tom,All in all,if we do like these, Im sure we can get on with,our parents.,So we can go on easily in the future study,and work.,标题：,Do you know,how to get on with our parents?,开头：,结尾：,How to get on with our parents,18,怎样保持身体健康,(How to Keep Healthy),内容包括,:,1,、多运动,2,、合理科学饮食起居,3,、保证充足的睡眠,4,、保持快乐心情舒畅,5,、不吸烟喝酒,怎样保持身体健康 (How to Keep Healthy),19,怎样保持健康的身体,(How to Keep Healthy),1,健康很重要。,2,我们怎样保持健康呢？,3,首先， 我们应该早起。,4,第二， 我们应该吃健康的食物。,5,我们应该多吃蔬菜和水果。,Health is very important.,How can we keep healthy?,First,we should,get up early.,Second,we should,eat healthy food.,Third,we should,eat more vegetables and fruit.,怎样保持健康的身体(How to Keep Healthy),20,6,我们必须少吃肉。,7,我们必须多喝水。,8,最后， 我们必须经常锻炼。,我们可以放学后打篮球，踢足球。,Next,We should,eat less meat.,Then,We should,drink more water.,At last,we should,do sports every day.,We can,play basketball, play football after school.,6 我们必须少吃肉。7 我们必须多喝水。8 最后， 我,21,Let me tell you something about it.,As a middle school student,first,youd better,do more exercise such as playing ball games, running, swimming and jumping rope.,Second,you should,pay attention to your diet,or meals. Dont eat too much meat but more fruit and vegetables.,Third,you need,enough sleep or rest.,Next,keep yourself happy. As people often say, smiling makes you younger.,At last,you mustnt,drink or smoke. They are bad for your health.,That is my advice.,All in all,I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.,Do you know,how to keep healthy?,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,Tom,How to,keep healthy,.,标题：,开头：,结尾：,Let me tell you something abou,22,应试策略,应试策略,23,A,常见题型：,talk in your group,1,、,根据,汉语,提示完成作文。,2,、根据,表格,提示完成作文。,3,、根据,图片,提示完成作文。,要求：写一篇,80,字左右,的英语作文。,书面表达常见题型及写作技巧,B,写作策略,:,please, remember,审,圈,列,定,连,草,稿纸,抄,试卷,A常见题型：talk in your group书面表达常见,24,审题目：要切中题意。,考试说明,指出，,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是,要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要,仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出,一个框架或画面,，,确定短文的中心思想,，,不要匆匆,下笔,，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提,供的资料和信息来审题。审题要,审格式、体裁、,人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、,地点,等。,审题目：要切中题意。考试说明指出，,25,2.,圈要点：防止遗漏要点。,要点是给分的,一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏,要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的,观察力,，,把情景中给出的,各个要点逐条列出,。,2. 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的,26,3.,列提纲：为写作做好准备。,根据文章要点短文,的中心思想将,主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。,我们在进行写作时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑,如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下,的连词。将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，,形成提纲。,4.,定基调：,定出,时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾,。,3. 列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文4. 定基调：,27,5.,写全文：,写短文时要做到以下几个方面：,1).,语言通顺，表达准确,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。,几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。,2),上下文要连贯,词数一定要达到要求,.,5. 写全文：,28,3),不会表达，另辟蹊径。,考试作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，,不以文采打分。,造句越简单准确越好，造复合句,容易出错，,容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误,误面前人人平等”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来,或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，,化难为易，化繁为简,。总之，所造句子要正确、,得体、符合英语表达习惯。,3) 不会表达，另辟蹊径。,29,4),锦上添花,结尾适当评论,发表己见。,How friendly they are!,We can learn from them.,They had a good time very much.,What a happy family!,4) 锦上添花, 结尾适当评论,发表己见。,30,1.,表示并列或递进,: and, bothand;,not onlybut also,neithernor;,2.,表示条件,: if,3.,表示顺序,: first , next,，,then, finally;,4.,表示因果,: because, so;,5.,表示选择,: or, eitheror;,6.,表示解释,: for example, such as;,7.,表示转折,: but, however,关联词,1.表示并列或递进: and, bothand;关联词,31,5),成文之后,一般语法项目的检查,人称,:,Mr. Green,works hard,she,is the best,worker in their office.,时态,: They,go,to the island,last week,.,主谓一致,:,Everyone,in our class,work,hard.,习惯用法,: He,helps,me,in,my English,冠词用法,：,He is,a,h,onest student.,he,went,work,s,with,an,5)成文之后 人称: Mr. Green works har,32,将草稿认真,抄写,到答题纸上，,一定注意书写的注意事项,。,抄,英语书面表达写作技巧,抄英语书面表达写作技巧,33,完型填空,完型填空,34,在做,完型填空,时一定要做到,:,1.,通读全文,了解大意,2.,瞻前顾后,逐步填空,3.,认真复查,适当调整,在做完型填空时一定要做到:1.通读全文,了解大意2.瞻前顾后,35,