大学英语四级作文写作课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,h,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,h,*,英语四级写作,1,h,英语四级写作1h,作文“现状”,1.,教书人的体验：煞费苦心,2.,阅卷人的感受：不知所云,3.,写作人的想法：事倍功半,2,h,作文“现状”2h,十二句作文法,的原则,1,、只背句型，不背范文。,2,、先写死，后写活。,3,h,十二句作文法的原则3h,十二句作文法,的特点,1,、适用性强。,2,、模板通用。,3,、简便易学。,4,h,十二句作文法的特点4h,十二句作文法,的运用,1,、,“,十二句”的字数决定文章的种类。,2,、,“,十二句”的结构决定文章的难度。,5,h,十二句作文法的运用5h,十二句作文法,6,h,十二句作文法6h,十二句作文法,写作模板,现象解释型,问题解决型,对比选择型,7,h,十二句作文法写作模板7h,现象解释型,这类命题要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释,并加以评论。,特点：,第一段：描述现象；,第二段：分析或阐述这种现象或存在的原因；,第三段：提出建议或总结观点。,8,h,现象解释型这类命题要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释,并加,现象解释型模板,首段（描述现象,A,）,Nowadays,with the reform of,（现象的背景）,（描述现象）,.,This phenomenon has been brought into public focus and called for further concern.,1)Be brought into public focus,：引起人们的关注,2,）,call for,要求、需要,9,h,现象解释型模板首段（描述现象A）Nowadays,现象解释型模板,首段（描述现象,B,）,In recent years,wherever you go,（描述现象）,.,This issue has aroused the greatest concern.,Arouse the greatest concern:,引起极大关注,10,h,现象解释型模板首段（描述现象 B）In recen,现象解释型模板,首段（描述现象,C,）,Currently,along with the advance of the society,an important issue that,（描述现象）,is brought to our attention.,Consequently,（概况描述现象产生的结果）,.,Be brought to our attention:,引起了我们的注意,11,h,现象解释型模板首段（描述现象C）Be brought to,现象解释型模板,中间段（分析现象,A,）,Just as what has happened to anything in the world,many factors,lead to,On one hand,.,_,.,On the other hand,，,.,.,Whats more,，,.,_.,Our list of,contributors,could go on,but the,foregoing ones,are already enough to,give,us a,deep insight into,the phenomenon,本模板第,3,句的空格中应该填上某个需要解释的现象或事件，第,4,句提出原因,I,，第,6,句提出原因,，第,8,句提出原因,，第,5,、第,7,和第,9,句对这,3,个原因进行了进一步论述。,1)Give sb a deep insight into:,使、对、有了深入解；,2)foregoing,：前面提到的（,above-mentioned,）,3)contributor:,促成因素，贡献者,12,h,现象解释型模板中间段（分析现象 A）Just as,现象解释型模板,中间,段（分析现象,B,）,A number of factors could,account for,the phenomenon,but the following are the most critical ones.,First of all,（原因一）,.,Whats more,（原因二）,.,In addition,（原因三）,.,Account for,解释,13,h,现象解释型模板中间段（分析现象 B）A numbe,现象解释型模板,结尾段（作者看法,+,前景展望,A,）,As far as I am concerned,（作者对现象的看法）,There is still a long way for us to,（促进或限制现象）,but as a student myself,I find it,rewarding,and interesting.,Rewarding:,有报酬的、值得做的,14,h,现象解释型模板结尾段（作者看法+前景展望 A）As,现象解释型模板,结尾段（现象产生的结果,B,）,This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences,with the following two the most serious.,For one thing,（后果一）,.For another,（后果二）,.The awareness of the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken.It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the near future.,具体句子数量可根据实际需要调整。,15,h,现象解释型模板结尾段（现象产生的结果 B）This,范文模板应用,2007,年,12,月英语四级作文题目及范文,What Electives to Choose,1,、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课,2,、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课,3,、以你自己为例,见,word,版范文。,2007,年,12,月,.doc,分析现象,.doc,16,h,范文模板应用 2007年12月英语四级作文题目及范文16h,范文模板应用,2010,年,6,月英语四级作文题目及范文,Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling,1.,如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写,2.,出现这种情况的原因,3.,这种现象导致的结果,2010,年,6.doc,17,h,范文模板应用 2010年6月英语四级作文题目及范文17h,问题解决型,这类命题通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题，然后要求考生就该问题提出解决方法、途径，有时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己的方法。,特点：,第一段：提出问题或阐述某件事情的重要性或意义；,第二段：列举说明处理某事的方式或解决某个问题的途径；,第三段：针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并阐述理由。,此题型的写作重点在,How,，即解决问题的办法。,18,h,问题解决型这类命题通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题，然后要,问题解决型模板,首段（提出问题,A,）,Nowadays,with the rapid economical development and intense competition,people are attaching more and more importance to,（,g,提出问题）,。,So i,t is,of great importance,for us to,（,关注问题的要性）,.,On one hand,（问题后果一）,.,On the other hand,（问题的后果二）,.As a result,we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.,1)Attach importance to,重视,=place importance on 2)spare no efforts to,竭尽全力、努力去做,3,）,take some measure to,采取措辞,19,h,问题解决型模板首段（提出问题 A）Nowaday,问题解决型模板,首段（提出问题,B,）,Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that,（提出问题）,。,It,is of great significance,that,（,解决问题很必要）,.,On one hand,（解决问题的必要性一）,.,On the other hand,（解决问题的必要性一）,.Accordingly,how to solve the problem becomes the top priority for us.,Top priority:,应予最优先考虑的事,20,h,问题解决型模板首段（提出问题 B）Along wi,中间,段（解决问题的办法,A,）,There are many,steps,which can be taken to,undo,this problem.First of all,(,途径一,).,In addition,another way,contributing to,success of the solving problem is,(,途径二,).,问题解决型模板,steps=measures 2)undo=solve,3)Contribute to,有助于,21,h,中间段（解决问题的办法 A）问题解决型模板steps=me,中间,段（解决问题的办法,B,）,Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem,but the following ones may be the most effective.First of all,.,Another way to solve the problem is,.,Finally,.,These are not the best and the only two/three measures we can take,but it should be noted that _.,本模版中第,6,句为主题句，第,7,、,8,和,9,句提供,3,个途径，第,10,句为结论。,问题解决型模板,22,h,中间段（解决问题的办法 B）本模版中第6句为主题句，第7、,结尾段（总结,+,个人选择,+,前景展望）,In fact,more than three ways can be adopted to solve the problem of,(,具体问题,),As for me,I would prefer to solve the problem in this way,that is to say,（,方法）,.Anyway,Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us when all of us,make joint efforts to,solve this problem.,问题解决型模板,Make joint efforts to,共同努力做、,23,h,结尾段（总结+个人选择+前景展望）问题解决型模板Make,范文模板应用,2000,年,1,月大学英语四级作文题目及范文,How I Finance My College Education,1.,上大学的费用（,tuition and fees,）可以通过多种渠道解决,2.,那种渠道适合于我（说明理由）,见,word,版范文。,2000,年,1.doc,24,h,范文模板应用 2000年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文24h,对比选择型,对比,/,比较分析或观点对比类型作文,通过对两种不同事物进行比较和对比，找出它们之间的相同之处或不同之处，最后得出结论；也可对同种事物的正反、利弊、优劣、积极和消极两方面进行比较，最后得出结论。,下面是,1995-2009,年四级作文中出现的此类型题目：,25,h,对比选择型对比/比较分析或观点对比类型作文25h,2008,年,6,月英语四级作文及范文,1.,有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率,2.,还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习,3.,你对于网络的看法,2006,年,12,月英语四级作文,1,、许多人喜欢看,cctv,春节晚会；,2,、但有的人认为应该取消；,3,、你的看法,26,h,2008年6月英语四级作文及范文26h,1999,年,6,月大学英语四级作文题目,1.,有人认为读书要有选择,2.,有人认为应当博览群书,3.,我的看法,1996,年,1,月大学英语四级作文题目,1.,双休日给大学生带来的好处。,2.,双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。,3.,我应当怎样过好双休日。,27,h,1999年6月大学英语四级作文题目27h,1995,年,1,月大学英语四级作文题目,1.,有人认为金钱是幸福之本,(source of happiness),2.,也有人认为金钱是万恶之源,(root of all evil),3.,我的看法,28,h,1995年1月大学英语四级作文题目28h,作文模板,1.,有人认为,x,是好事，赞成,x,，为什么？,2.,有人认为,x,是坏事，反对,x,，为什么？,3.,我的看法。,29,h,作文模板1.有人认为x是好事，赞成x，为什么？29h,Some people are in favor of the idea of doing x.They point out the fact,支持,x,的第一个原因,。,They also argue that,支持,x,的另一个原因,。,However,other people,stand on a different ground,.They consider it harmful to do x.They firmly point out that,反对,x,的第一个原因,。,An example can give the details of this argument:,一个例子,。,Stand on a different ground,：持不同观点,30,h,Some people are in favor of th,There is some truth in both arguments.But in my opinion,the advantages of x outweigh its disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about,X,的一个坏处,。,2008,年,6,及,06,年,12,月,.doc,31,h,There is some truth in both ar,混合型,所谓结合型就是把以上三种中的两种类型巧妙结合，以考察学生的应变能力。,例如：,现象解释型,+,问题解决型,:1996,年,6,月大学英语四级作文题目及范文,Global Shortage of Fresh Water,1.,人们以为淡水是取之不尽的,(,提示：雨水、河水、井水,.),2.,实际上淡水是非常紧缺的,(,提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染,.),3.,我们应该怎么办,32,h,混合型所谓结合型就是把以上三种中的两种类型巧妙结合，以考察学,问题解决型,+,观点对比型,2009,年,6,月英语四级作文题目及范文,Free admission to museums,1.,越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么,?,2.,也会带来一些问题,3.,你的看法,混合型,.doc,33,h,问题解决型+观点对比型33h,Thank You!,34,h,Thank You!34h,