新外研版英语七年级上册Moduke3-Unit-3-Writing课件

七年级上册七年级上册Module3 My school 写作课课件写作课课件七年级上册Module3Writing aims 1.Be able to make use of the words and phrases to write my school;2.Enable to help each other.Writing aims 1.Be able to makWriting proceduresStep 1.Pre-writing Step 3.Post-writing Step 2.While-writing Writing proceduresStep 1.Pre-Pre-writingPre-writing Ask students to look around the classroom and say the things names.In my classroom,I can see desks,books and dictionaries For example:Pre-writing Ask students tocomputertelevisiondeskdictionarypicturebookcomputertelevisiondeskdictionafurnituremapwallteacherstudentsfurnituremapwallteacherstudentBrainstorm:Work in groups,discuss and list things in the school as more as possible(小组讨论，列举学校里的事物，越多越好小组讨论，列举学校里的事物，越多越好)schoollibraryclassroomsports hallschool gateofficeofficedining hallscience hall.Brainstorm:Work in groups,di1.How many classroom are there in your school?There are _ in our school.50How many classroom are there i2.Is there a library in your school?Is there a library in your school?Yes,there is.Yes,there is.No,there isn t.No,there isn t.3.Are there any science labs?Are there any science labs?Yes,there are.Yes,there are.No,there aren t.No,there aren t.2.Is there a library in your 4.There _ many computers4.There _ many computers in your classroom.in your classroom.are5.There _ a blackboard 5.There _ a blackboard in your classroom.in your classroom.is4.There _ many computersa6.Where is the teachers desk?It s on the desk.6.Where is the teachers desk1.Where is the office building?Its on the right of the gate.2.Where is the dining hall?Its behind the science building.3.Where is the playground?Its in the middle of my school.4.Where is the sports hall?Its on the left of the gate.5.Where is the science building?Its between the dining hall and the sports hall.Look at the picture and answerThis is a map of our school._the gate is the office building and behind this is the_._the classroom buildingis the library.The science building is _the dininghall and the _.And behind the dininghall,the playground and the library there are_.On the right ofclassroom buildingBehindbetweensports hallsome treesThis is a map of our school.No书面表达（书面表达（10分）分）Write about your school作文要求：作文要求：1.字数：字数：60词左右；开头已给出，不算入词数；词左右；开头已给出，不算入词数；2.内容完整，语言流畅，可以适当发挥；内容完整，语言流畅，可以适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。This is our school.On the left ofThis is our library.It s in front ofThere are _While-writingWriting practice(15 minutes)书面表达（10分）While-writingWriting BeginningBeginning 开头开头开头开头 (已给出）已给出）已给出）已给出）This is our school.On the This is our school.On the left ofleft of_ _ _ 可用的句子可用的句子可用的句型可用的句型 可用的搭配可用的搭配BodyBody正文正文Tips I like my school very much.It s very beautiful.What about yours?Can you tell me?on the left/right(of),in the middle(of)betweenandin front ofThere is aThere areEndingEnding结尾（个人观点）结尾（个人观点）结尾（个人观点）结尾（个人观点）可用的单词可用的单词classroom,office,playground,library,near,book写作方法指导写作方法指导 选择某一层次同学的作文投影选择某一层次同学的作文投影 AB层同学层同学批改批改其它同学独立修改完善作文其它同学独立修改完善作文 并给出自评分并给出自评分（有声朗读作文，给出自评分）（有声朗读作文，给出自评分）Read your passage aloud,then check it byyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求 选择某一层次同学的作文投影 AB层同学批改Read yo 时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文（已给出）（满分1分）（满分6分）其他，（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法）酌情加减分（1分）作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分1515分分Beginning开头部分开头部分Body正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分Post-writing(10 minutes)EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分3 对自己学校的喜爱或想知道他人学校的情况（2分）条理清晰，有顺序，内容完整，语言流畅,无单词和语法错误地描写my school.时态：BeginningEndingBody（已给出）（满第一档：第一档：12-15分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有几乎没有语言错误。语言错误。第二档：第二档：11-12分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，但有但有少量少量语言错误。语言错误。第三档：第三档：9-10分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖大部分大部分要点，表达要点，表达尚尚清楚清楚,但有但有一些一些语言错误。语言错误。（以上为及格线）（以上为及格线）第四档：第四档：4-8分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖部分部分要点，写出少量句子，要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。第五档：第五档：0-3分分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。清楚。评分档次和要求：第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没 展示展示（show your passage）展示（show your passage）This is our school.There is a new office building and a classroom building in it.There is a computer on everyone sdesk.On the left of the building,there is a library.There are many books in it.We can read them after class.In front of the library,there is a lab.Behind the lab,there is a huge playground.I love my school very much!This is our school.TherSummary写作技巧写作技巧:使用 on the right/left,in on the right/left,in front of,in the middle of front of,in the middle of 等搭配 来描述位置。写作步骤：写作步骤：1.审题（判断写作类型、人称、时态）2.构思（内容：单词、短语、句式、结构）3.检查（拼写、语法、连贯性）How to write My School点击添加文本点击添加文本点击添加文本点击添加文本Summar请写一篇短文，介绍你的班级和学校。请写一篇短文，介绍你的班级和学校。In my classroom there areIn my school 请写一篇短文，介绍你的班级和学校。Homework：新外研版英语七年级上册Moduke3-Unit-3-Writing课件