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英语应用文写作A Letter of Proposal 倡议英语应用文写作倡议英语应用文写作A Letter of ProposalWriting-A Proposal（倡议书）（倡议书）On Wildlife protection 野生动物是人类的朋友野生动物是人类的朋友,但是由于人类乱捕滥杀以但是由于人类乱捕滥杀以及野生动物栖息地的人为破坏等原因，致使野生动及野生动物栖息地的人为破坏等原因，致使野生动物的数量日益减少，许多物种濒临灭绝。请以学生物的数量日益减少，许多物种濒临灭绝。请以学生会的名义根据这一现状写一封倡议书，呼吁全社会会的名义根据这一现状写一封倡议书，呼吁全社会携手保护野生动物。要点包括：携手保护野生动物。要点包括：1、野生动物的现状及产生的原因；、野生动物的现状及产生的原因；2、保护野生动物的倡议。、保护野生动物的倡议。注意：注意：1、作文开头已经给出，请接着完成。可自己补充内、作文开头已经给出，请接着完成。可自己补充内容，使文章更加连贯。容，使文章更加连贯。2、字数要求：、字数要求：80左右左右 Lets move the world to protect the wildlife Wild animals are mans close friends.Writing-A Proposal（倡议书）（倡议书）FactorsCriteria结构结构(organization）结构清晰，有条理结构清晰，有条理 内容内容（content）主题明确主题明确 完整全面完整全面 语言语言（language）单词拼写正确单词拼写正确 没有语法错误没有语法错误 运用优美的词汇和高运用优美的词汇和高级表达级表达 运用多种句式结构运用多种句式结构 连贯连贯（coherence）行文通顺、流畅行文通顺、流畅 正确使用连接词正确使用连接词 Writing assessmentFactorsCriteria结构结构(organizationTitle(Title(标题）标题）Salutation(Salutation(称呼称呼)Body(Body(正文）正文）Closing Closing（结尾）（结尾）Signature Signature（落款）（落款）A AboutboutOrganizationOrganizationwell-organizedAboutOrganizationwell-organizeOrganizationwell-organizedLets move the world to protect the wildlifeDear sir,bodyThe students union LetsPresent situationCauses Proposals主要内容包括：主要内容包括：1.野生动物的现状野生动物的现状:数量减少，濒临灭绝；数量减少，濒临灭绝；2.产生的原因产生的原因3.保护野生动物的倡议。保护野生动物的倡议。Organizationwell-organizedLetPresent situationdecreasebe in dangerPresent situationdecreaseCauses1.human hunting 2.climate changes 3.not enough food/loss of 4.habitat loss/destruction/is threatened5.pollution Causes1.human hunting III Proposals1.1.appreciateappreciate/raise/raisepeoplespeoplesawarenessawarenessofofthetheimportanceofwildlifeprotectionimportanceofwildlifeprotection2.2.persuadepersuadepeoplepeoplenotnottotobuybuyproductsproductsmademadefromendangeredanimalsfromendangeredanimals3.3.donatemoneydonatemoney4.4.makemakelawslawstotoforbidforbid overoverkillingkilling/punishpunish thethelaw-breakinghunterswithoutmercylaw-breakinghunterswithoutmercy5.setupnaturereserves/protectthehabitats5.setupnaturereserves/protectthehabitats6.sendvolunteerstohelp6.sendvolunteerstohelp7.value/appreciate/appealtointernational7.value/appreciate/appealtointernationalcooperationcooperation III Proposals 引入话题句1.As we can see,the environment around us 2.There is no denying that提出倡议常用句式3.Therefore,lets take the responsibility to./Its our duty to work hard to achieve this goal.4.We students of Senior One are called on to5.It is high time for us to do something about the problem/take action before it is too late.6.Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can we.结束话题常用句式7.Lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day,every hour and every minute.8.I hope our behavior will make a difference.9.lets work hand in hand and make a contribution to/take action.10.Your contribution counts!This is This is 套路套路This is 套路套路Present situation(impressive/positive/smooth)decrease_be in danger_The number of them is decreasing sharply.Some species are in danger of extinction.rapidly/sharplyof going extinct/extinction/dying outUnfortunately,the number of them is decreasing sharply and some species are even in danger of extinction.Present situation(impressive Causes1.human hunting 2.climate changes 3.not enough food/loss of 4.habitat loss/destruction/is threatened5.pollution Coherence(smooth)Firstly,many of them are killed for their fur to make clothes.Secondly,their habitat is threatened.Thirdly,they dont have enough food.Climate changes are also having bad effect on them.Over-hunting and their habitat loss are the main reasons for the depressing situation.Causes1.human hunting CoherenProposalsProposalsclear/tothepoint/smoothclear/tothepoint/smoothWeshouldappreciate/raisepeoplesawarenessWeshouldappreciate/raisepeoplesawarenessoftheimportanceofwildlifeprotection.oftheimportanceofwildlifeprotection.WeshouldntbuyproductsmadefromWeshouldntbuyproductsmadefromendangeredanimalsorharmtheirhabitat.endangeredanimalsorharmtheirhabitat.Wecandonatemoneytoorganizations.Wecandonatemoneytoorganizations.OurgovernmentshouldmakelawstopunishtheOurgovernmentshouldmakelawstopunishthelaw-breakinghunterswithoutmercy.law-breakinghunterswithoutmercy.Weshouldsetupmoreprotectionzones.Weshouldsetupmoreprotectionzones.WecanalsoappealtotheinternationalWecanalsoappealtotheinternationalcooperation.cooperation.whatsmore,inaddition,besides,also,moreover1.1.appreciateappreciate/raise/raisepeoplespeoplesawarenessawarenessofofthetheimportanceofwildlifeprotectionimportanceofwildlifeprotection2.2.persuadepersuadepeoplepeoplenotnottotobuybuyproductsproductsmademadefromendangeredanimalsfromendangeredanimals3.3.donatemoneydonatemoney4.4.makemakelawslawstotoforbidforbid overoverkillingkilling/punishpunish thethelaw-breakinghunterswithoutmercylaw-breakinghunterswithoutmercy5.setupnaturereserves/protectthehabitats5.setupnaturereserves/protectthehabitats6.sendvolunteerstohelp6.sendvolunteerstohelp7.value/appreciate/appealtointernational7.value/appreciate/appealtointernationalcooperationcooperation ThereisnobetterwaythanraisingpeoplesThereisnobetterwaythanraisingpeoplesawarenessoftheimportanceofwildlifeawarenessoftheimportanceofwildlifeprotection./Itsourresponsibilitytoprotectprotection./Itsourresponsibilitytoprotectwildlifeandstopbuyingproductsmadefromwildlifeandstopbuyingproductsmadefromendangeredanimalsorharmingtheirhabitat.endangeredanimalsorharmingtheirhabitat.Whatsmore,wecandonatemoneytoWhatsmore,wecandonatemoneytoorganizations.organizations.Moreover,itsnecessarytomakelawstopunishMoreover,itsnecessarytomakelawstopunishthelaw-breakinghunters.thelaw-breakinghunters.Inaddition,moreprotectionzonesshouldbeInaddition,moreprotectionzonesshouldbesetupforthem.setupforthem.TheinternationalcooperationisalsoTheinternationalcooperationisalsovaluable/appreciated.valuable/appreciated.Therefore,it is time for us to take action.There is no better way than raising peoples awareness of protecting wildlife and stop buying products made from endangered animals or harming their habitat.Whats more,we can donate money to organizations to protect them.Moreover,its necessary for the government to pass strict laws to punish law-breaking hunters and set up more nature reserves.Proposals clear/to the point/sLetsmovetheworldtoprotectthewildlifeLetsmovetheworldtoprotectthewildlifeWildanimalsaremansclosefriends.Wildanimalsaremansclosefriends.Unfortunately,Unfortunately,thethenumberofthemisnowdecreasingnumberofthemisnowdecreasingsharplysharplyandsomeandsomespeciesarespeciesareindangerofextinctionindangerofextinction.Over-huntingand.Over-huntingandtheirhabitatdestructionarethemainreasonsforthetheirhabitatdestructionarethemainreasonsforthedepressingsituation.depressingsituation.Therefore,Therefore,itistimeitistimeforustoforustotakeactiontakeaction.Thereisno.Thereisnobetterwaythanbetterwaythanraisingpeoplesawarenessofraisingpeoplesawarenessofthetheimportanceofwildlifeprotection.Andweshouldntbuyimportanceofwildlifeprotection.Andweshouldntbuyproductsmadefromendangeredanimalsordestroyproductsmadefromendangeredanimalsordestroytheirhabitat.Whatsmore,wecandonatemoneytotheirhabitat.Whatsmore,wecandonatemoneytoorganizationssuchasCWCA.InadditionitsnecessaryorganizationssuchasCWCA.Inadditionitsnecessaryforthegovernmenttopassforthegovernmenttopasss strictlawstrictlawstopunishlaw-topunishlaw-breakinghuntersandsetupmorenaturereserves.breakinghuntersandsetupmorenaturereserves.letsworkhandinhandletsworkhandinhandtoprotecttoprotectwildlife.wildlife.TheStudentsUnionTheStudentsUnion Lets move the world Thank You!
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